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consciousness can arise!
Mirror... which informs
me of my outer reality,
but has lack of consciousness
to tell the inner reality....
Wonderful imaginations
which does not have
consciousness,
but makes us dive
in a sea full of
different emotions....
the cloud thunders,
drops of the joy fall
on the earth from the sky,
the sullen n thirsty land
hugs the sky and gives
fragrance to the world,
in that confluence of
the sky and the earth
there is consciousness....
A shadow hidden in
extreme darkness,
a shadow wandering
in the hot sun, which
does not have
consciousness,
otherwise it would not
have supported in
doing bad things....
A nest hanging on a
dry tree in the autumn
season, in which
there used to be a
dialogue of consciousness...
When a coconut tree
grows on the dreams
sown in the yellow sand
of the desert, n a bud of
consciousness on
an unfulfilled desire...
the lack of consciousness
and the weight of the breath
decreases. When the body
floats on water...
me of my outer reality,
but has lack of consciousness
to tell the inner reality....
Wonderful imaginations
which does not have
consciousness,
but makes us dive
in a sea full of
different emotions....
the cloud thunders,
drops of the joy fall
on the earth from the sky,
the sullen n thirsty land
hugs the sky and gives
fragrance to the world,
in that confluence of
the sky and the earth
there is consciousness....
A shadow hidden in
extreme darkness,
a shadow wandering
in the hot sun, which
does not have
consciousness,
otherwise it would not
have supported in
doing bad things....
A nest hanging on a
dry tree in the autumn
season, in which
there used to be a
dialogue of consciousness...
When a coconut tree
grows on the dreams
sown in the yellow sand
of the desert, n a bud of
consciousness on
an unfulfilled desire...
the lack of consciousness
and the weight of the breath
decreases. When the body
floats on water...
Published 26th Apr 2023
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26th Apr 2023 7:16pm
27th Apr 2023 1:33am
27th Apr 2023 00:57am
Some of your finest work I think. It's good to see your expression growing in confidence.
27th Apr 2023 1:32am
Thank you so much daniel for stopping by! And including my writing in your reading list! I'm grateful for that!
27th Apr 2023 3:41am
You are a beautiful strong smart sexy woman and thanks for sharing. Keep on writing.
27th Apr 2023 4:34am
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28th Apr 2023 3:36pm
Awwww
Thank You so much cath for reading and commenting. I'm thankful for your constant support. 🙏
Thank You so much cath for reading and commenting. I'm thankful for your constant support. 🙏
2nd May 2023 1:00pm
I sense an adaptation of identity within the environment. Creation; disposition, inspiration. There is a direction and course here. You seem to capture and accept the eternal questions of truth and purpose in your own observation. The discovery of such a relationship, and the mechanisms that make your observations have morality and conviction. Also, it's almost as if you were to take a picture that no one else could. The dimensional standpoints of observation, from up in the sky, down to a grain of sand, offer a vast resolution. Very nice transitions of direction, showing cycles in nature, and realization of your conviction. I like the metaphors you use to convey the deep perception you have. I hope this is helpful!
2nd May 2023 1:20pm
Hello
I am very grateful to you, you read my words so deeply, understood them and gave your beautiful and inspiring response. I appreciate to your words. N Thanks a ton for visiting my profile.
I am very grateful to you, you read my words so deeply, understood them and gave your beautiful and inspiring response. I appreciate to your words. N Thanks a ton for visiting my profile.
5th Nov 2023 4:48am
i think everything has a consciousness to it just different levels; different densities. collective consciousness separated by skin and sky. even walls breathe in the right setting. good poem!
5th Nov 2023 5:10am
