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Senryu
My Gravity Ends
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My Gravity Ends
Weightless
in your eyes
heart floating
towards heaven
Soaring
into love
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published
24th Apr 2023
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Re. My Gravity Ends
Tallen
(earth_empath)
24th Apr 2023 1:12pm
Yeah,
often this is how it starts off
and then..................................
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AspergerPoet56
- Edited 24th Apr 2023 5:24pm
24th Apr 2023 2:19pm
and then gravity returns faster than a speeding bullet
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Tallen
(earth_empath)
24th Apr 2023 2:27pm
LOL (and not in a fun giggling way)
Yes
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Her
24th Apr 2023 1:50pm
This made me smile.
Love this
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AspergerPoet56
24th Apr 2023 2:20pm
smiles are accepted
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Re. My Gravity Ends
brokentitanium
(k.)
24th Apr 2023 2:36pm
Aaaahh..... happy sigh 😍 Never mind the fall, it's worth it.
❤️k
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AspergerPoet56
24th Apr 2023 3:12pm
i think its worth the agony
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Re. My Gravity Ends
Betty
26th Apr 2023 6:58pm
I can't compete with a bullet joke. That was some funny shit.
But yes, this described that moment, instant, feeling... when your feet no longer stay secured on the earth.
And the internal poem, as always, on fleek.
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Re. My Gravity Ends
AspergerPoet56
26th Apr 2023 7:58pm
thanks betty
yes the joke tho funny is all thr truth too
like ive orobably said before there is not always an inner poem
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