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Intent of Consciousness
soft words spoken
with reverent intention
become magnetized, powerful;
the body chants
in quiet, rhythmic movement,
attesting to the sanctity
of this holy space within -
the place of knowing,
where love is timeless;
the spirits and ancestors
gone before us
come forth with wisdom
and esoteric guidance;
each stands poised upon
every purposeful breath,
waiting for ego to slumber;
incense clears the air
and prepares the heart
for acceptance in grace
and with gratitude
Published 18th Apr 2023
Author's Note
NaPo Day 17. Written for “The field of consciousness….” competition
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18th Apr 2023 5:53am
Dear L,
Having tried and failed every time,
I have such admiration for this intent.
I always get itchy I don’t know why? So now I’ll live vicariously through this poem to achieve my success in this process. Beautiful piece. H🌷
Having tried and failed every time,
I have such admiration for this intent.
I always get itchy I don’t know why? So now I’ll live vicariously through this poem to achieve my success in this process. Beautiful piece. H🌷
18th Apr 2023 3:05pm
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18th Apr 2023 2:46pm
19th Apr 2023 6:49pm
Hi Luna,
I got lost and absorbed by your words.... meditative quality to the piece.
Enjoyed it.
Regards,
BITS
I got lost and absorbed by your words.... meditative quality to the piece.
Enjoyed it.
Regards,
BITS
19th Apr 2023 8:34pm
9th Jun 2023 4:46pm
I couldn’t decide which line was the best or what spoke to me the most. But I realized it’s the entire poem.
Beautiful work
Beautiful work
