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Tenderly
Tenderly arises the sight of my ghost
pressing me against the wall
Breathing hard on my neck.
I taste my plucked lips
hungry for pain
I want your teeth
gently biting them
Each bite opens my appetite.
Vast like the land of your heart.
Come here, and quench my thirst,
I can’t wait, my love!
Take me,
slide inside,
I can hear your cry.
I hear your groans,
moans, aching is your cock
begging me to spread my legs.
Luscious and delicious is your neck.
Pause, and breathe,
give me your nectar to taste.
Reach my sky!
Sting my eyes.
Grab my hips
grind yours into mine.
Tenderly by Cinthia Carolina
Book: Martinis, Sex & Poems - Stir The Fire Within
On Amazon
pressing me against the wall
Breathing hard on my neck.
I taste my plucked lips
hungry for pain
I want your teeth
gently biting them
Each bite opens my appetite.
Vast like the land of your heart.
Come here, and quench my thirst,
I can’t wait, my love!
Take me,
slide inside,
I can hear your cry.
I hear your groans,
moans, aching is your cock
begging me to spread my legs.
Luscious and delicious is your neck.
Pause, and breathe,
give me your nectar to taste.
Reach my sky!
Sting my eyes.
Grab my hips
grind yours into mine.
Tenderly by Cinthia Carolina
Book: Martinis, Sex & Poems - Stir The Fire Within
On Amazon
Written by
Cincarolina_76
(Cinthia-Carolina)
Published 17th Apr 2023
| Edited 24th Apr 2023
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Copyright © 2023 by Cinthia Carolina, LLC
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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17th Apr 2023 5:41pm
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17th Apr 2023 9:42pm
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17th Apr 2023 10:01pm
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17th Apr 2023 10:01pm
Cinthia welcome to the site. Your writing is making waves already. The presence of it is impressive.
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17th Apr 2023 10:09pm
I'm happy to find this space -It feels like I found my tribe!
Thank you!
Thank you!
Re. Poem - Tenderly
17th Apr 2023 10:48pm
A wonderful erotica poem
Enjoy reading it
A deep sense of passion and misery mixed between your verses
Wonderful, keep enjoying we with your flaming ink
love and peace
MP
Enjoy reading it
A deep sense of passion and misery mixed between your verses
Wonderful, keep enjoying we with your flaming ink
love and peace
MP
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18th Apr 2023 1:05am
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17th Apr 2023 11:43pm
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18th Apr 2023 1:05am
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18th Apr 2023 4:16am
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18th Apr 2023 5:59am
Hoi hoi
Like it an awful lot. Steamy and kind of subtle, really nice.
If I may, can I give you a suggestion?
Please give attention to being congruent. As in your intro for instance.
Congruent means not mixing past tense and present tense without reason. Not mixing ‘I’ and ‘she’ when you are talking about yourself.
Small step, but once you get it, it works like a dream for your work.
Apart from this, I love to cook and bake too. Bake my own bread since 81 and cook partially with ingredients from my allotment garden. I hope you’ll keep us informed about you culinary work too.
And thank you for posting this one.
Kind regards, Gus
Like it an awful lot. Steamy and kind of subtle, really nice.
If I may, can I give you a suggestion?
Please give attention to being congruent. As in your intro for instance.
Congruent means not mixing past tense and present tense without reason. Not mixing ‘I’ and ‘she’ when you are talking about yourself.
Small step, but once you get it, it works like a dream for your work.
Apart from this, I love to cook and bake too. Bake my own bread since 81 and cook partially with ingredients from my allotment garden. I hope you’ll keep us informed about you culinary work too.
And thank you for posting this one.
Kind regards, Gus
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18th Apr 2023 6:05am
AH!
Are you talking about my intro? I fixed it, haha. I copied and pasted it from another site and forgot to change it to first person. Thanks
Are you talking about my intro? I fixed it, haha. I copied and pasted it from another site and forgot to change it to first person. Thanks
Re. Poem - Tenderly
20th Apr 2023 3:13am
Who could deny such an invitation? By the way, do you draw the picture that accompany the poems.... very different... I like it all...
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20th Apr 2023 3:24am
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20th Apr 2023 3:32am
wonderful!!!! you have done so much good with your life. Keep up the good work. Have you quit traveling now and settled down?
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