The Fall

Thank you kindly

Dear I,

I love the whole presentation. The poem was a charming story of how few drop wishes and kisses get to earth and the art work is sweet and gentle. Beautiful piece. 🏆
H🌷

I'm so glad you liked this offering of mine. 😊
I'm not an artist nor do have the talent for it, yet I like to paint sometimes n I'm so happy you found it sweet n gentle. 😊
Thank you so much, dear Honoria for gracing my page with your presence 🌹

Wonderful art

BIG PROUD OF YOU

Hi PS!  
So nice to see you here😊 How have you been?  
And thank  you so much for the encouraging comment. 🌹

Gorgeous read, lovely art
Love and light
Ron xx

Thanks a lot, dear Ron for the lovely feedback 🌹

A mystical air sweeps over this.
Lovely art work too
Regards
James

Thank you so much, dear friend😊

Amazing concept
Well portrayed! I just love it ❤️

Thanks a lot, dear poetess 🌹🌹🌹

This is so beautiful!!! The moon deserves all the poems written about it <3

Thank you so much ❤

Yes, it does. 😊 It's the most mystically beautiful thing that has ever existed. 😊

I seemed to have gotten a Spring from the fall.

😊😊😊

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 excellent work queen 👸 I'm impressed ♥ please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

Thank you so much, dear poet for exploring my work. I highly appreciate your kind support n generous reviews. Much thanks  🙏

Hey, thank you so much, dear poet for an uplifting n wonderful review. Very much appreciate your support 🌹

Excellent imagery.


hugs,
buddhakitty.

Thanks a lot, dear Buddhakitty for the great comment. It's an honour to have my poem on your reading list. Much thanks ❤

heart swells reading this. a refreshing break from the sad topics i usually enjoy while reading poetry. thank you for sharing.

another lovely written poem

Thank you so much, James. I'm highly honoured by the reading list add. 😊

you have crafted a great piece in which while expressing your thoughts also leads a reader to her/his own references.

"the fragments fell like feathers  
turning into dew drops  
as they gently kissed their beloved"  

Thanks a lot, dear poet for your gracious n encouraging words . Very much appreciate you stopping by 😊

fine art

Thank you so much, Mant 🌹

That was beautiful.

Thank you so much ❤

Wonderful write...

Thank you, dear LDF ❤

Beautiful words and art. Your words were an encouragement to me.

Awww... That's such a kind review... Thank you so much, dear poetess for stopping by 🌹

A brill, imaginative poem dazzling like the beautiful moon that i love . Kudos for the muse!

Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.

What a wonderful piece of poetry. Very captivating.

Thank you so much for your generous comments. Very much appreciate it ☺

Wow! You always seem to leave me at a loss for words. It is so obvious you have a beautiful soul and your incredible smile compliments it perfectly. I think the beautiful moon broke into a thousand pieces so that it could rain down reaching the earth in order to be with you. And I hope those dew drops will always nurture your heart and soul, and that you feel all of the love you deserve...

Wonderful write, using the word "Fall" in it's various shades.

this was lovely InDreamz, save the moon.

Sounds like the beginning of an amazing bedtime story.

LJ

So beautifully peaceful, much needed.

Hoi hoi
À lovely strong yet delicate write.
Love the artwork as well.

Thank you for sharing. As you see it resonates with many people.
That in itself (I hope) is reason to go quietly on.
Kind regards, Gus

How this utilized a Yin and Yang  concept capturing the value and substance of both hard and soft in the realm of life and love was beautifully done.  A lot is substantial things within those few words. I’ll be seeking out more of your poetry to read!

The intrigue here is that I wasn't at first sure how you were using "Fall", as a verb or as a noun! Then the personification took over!

Beautiful

Thank you 😊

Another beautiful poem.. and lovely artwork too!

Thanks a bunch 🙏

Resplendent Write!!!

Thanks once again 💐

This poem evokes a vivid image of the moon breaking apart and its fragments transforming into something delicate and ethereal upon reaching the earth. The contrast between the initial imagery of shards of glass and the eventual transformation into dew drops is striking and beautifully conveyed. The imagery of love being conspired by heaven and stars adds a sense of magic and wonder to the poem. Overall, it's a captivating piece that invites the reader to contemplate the beauty and intricacy of nature and love.

Hi there,this is the first poem on here I've read and for what it's worth I think it is beautifully penned, the words create such a beautiful images in my head as I read. Wonderful.

Wow! Thank you so much for your great review. I'm all over the moon now 😊

You're very welcome :)

Cute

Thanks :)

Beautiful ❤️😍

Thanks a lot for the positive review n the addition of my poem to your reading list 😊

You welcome dear 😊👍

So elegant both in wording and the message. Bravo!

Thanks a lot for your uplifting review ,dear poet ☺️

Beautiful ink. Love the imagery. Appreciate you.




DL

First off: I love your artwork, so very creative.

And what delicate and dreamy piece this is, love it.

Thank you so much for your generous review ...you made my day ,dear poetess 🌹

Beautiful imagination 😍

Thank you kindly ❤️