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Somewhere Near The Bend
Only the water knew his name.
In the river he bathed.
In the river he stayed.
A handful of stones.
A pile of bones.
Over time, everything he was washed away.
In the river he bathed.
In the river he stayed.
A handful of stones.
A pile of bones.
Over time, everything he was washed away.
Published 11th Apr 2023
Author's Note
My photo of a rainbow but I just darkened it a bit.
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11th Apr 2023 1:12am
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11th Apr 2023 4:07am
Once more your life commentary contains so much in a small package ... A bit awed by your ability and your photos skill ... Bless and love ... .
11th Apr 2023 4:11am
Dear N,
I know how he feels. I agree with Fenyx you are a master at saying so much with such brevity. This is a great write and lovely pic. You’re getting a 🏆 as I continue to work out my RL shortage sitch! H🌷
I know how he feels. I agree with Fenyx you are a master at saying so much with such brevity. This is a great write and lovely pic. You’re getting a 🏆 as I continue to work out my RL shortage sitch! H🌷
11th Apr 2023 3:46pm
The lilt of rhyme counterpoints the pathos in quite a proportional way. There is a sense of grit to your writing that is uniquely yours I think, but also subtle depth.
12th Apr 2023 7:36pm
...washed away in the shallows of the The Rubicon. I wish I could write like this...seriously. Good poem.
22nd Apr 2023 4:10pm
Love the darken rainbow. In the end we are all washed away to bones or even nothing.
Relatable write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Relatable write.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
18th May 2023 3:49am
I always enjoy your mysterious and enigmatic pieces that leaves us to our imaginations.
Great work.
Great work.
16th Jul 2023 7:42pm
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