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Subtly, you came
Subtly, you came. . .
And your voice is all i ever hear
Ever musing i kept inside
Every whimper
Every cry
All became a beautiful sonata
soothing this hell inside my core
Subtly you came. . .
And these eyes
Now seeks clarity
As those gazes were like magnets
Pulling me through
All obscurities and complexities
This life ive been living
Subtly you came. .
And i suddenly felt love
You became the silent force that makes me want to live
As you made me see the beauty of life
Worthy of living despite all odds
(C)mai4.10.23
And your voice is all i ever hear
Ever musing i kept inside
Every whimper
Every cry
All became a beautiful sonata
soothing this hell inside my core
Subtly you came. . .
And these eyes
Now seeks clarity
As those gazes were like magnets
Pulling me through
All obscurities and complexities
This life ive been living
Subtly you came. .
And i suddenly felt love
You became the silent force that makes me want to live
As you made me see the beauty of life
Worthy of living despite all odds
(C)mai4.10.23
Published 10th Apr 2023
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10th Apr 2023 7:00am
The joy of a new love. Favourite lines which underline the point:
You became the silent force that makes me want to live
As you made me see the beauty of life
You became the silent force that makes me want to live
As you made me see the beauty of life
10th Apr 2023 7:11am
Wouldnt it be nice when all wordplay come to life and fulfil ones heart desire 😊😊😊 thank you kindly for reading and for the comment. Xxxx
11th Apr 2023 4:19pm
I love the title, the use of it in refrain and the unfolding of the scenes within the stanzas. Beautifully struck writing.
11th Apr 2023 7:33pm
And i love you too, lol! For reading, and writing again ur comment and for appreciating as well. XXXX
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12th Apr 2023 1:48am
citing Jesus Christ Nursery School give them a book for Histories sake half hazard you created them and Kidnapped me I thought you bum needed destine baby luce with daddy tagging your ass with solar flair and lightening bolts you traveled the wormholes I heard all about it... I'm baby G or baby He if you like but I'm busy with time now he's tampering for his favored true.
