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11:49pm
Oh no, help, it’s happening again
The day got away, and it’s way past ten
I’m trying to think of things to write
But my brain says, “time to sleep! It’s night!”
The rain on the window sounds so harmonic
It’s making me feel rather catatonic
Before my eyelids come down like a curtain
I need fifty words; of that I’m certain
So out of my big bag of tricks, I obtain
A bulging thesaurus to help out my brain
Then rhyme dictionary; my other great tool
To find those accents that make it sound cool
I poke and I prod, and scribble and stress
Until words obey without too much mess
So, there’s my technique when it’s late and I’m tired
To crank out the words and achieve what’s required
Author's Note
#5 of 30 NaPoWriMo entries
Ugh, sorry, boring. Sometimes this daily poetry writing is just a grind. I'm building discipline... right..? Too bad I can't build discipline around a reasonable bedtime.
Ugh, sorry, boring. Sometimes this daily poetry writing is just a grind. I'm building discipline... right..? Too bad I can't build discipline around a reasonable bedtime.
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
6th Apr 2023 4:09am
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Re: Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 3:01pm
Yes, night time is naturally full of poetry. I wish the world would let me be nocturnal.
Thanks for the visit!
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Thanks for the visit!
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Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 5:00am
Idk there was something relatable and honest about this that I really like.
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Re: Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 3:04pm
Thanks, Daniel. NaPo is always a good reminder that I can indeed "produce" poetry in a pinch, even if it's not particularly profound. (wow, that was a whole lot of unintentional alliteration!! LOL)
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Re: Re. 11:49pm
7th Apr 2023 2:53am
Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 8:32am
Re: Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 3:03pm
Many thanks! My musical brain does well with rhythm, so it's my fall-back when I'm short on ideas.
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Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 8:28pm
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7th Apr 2023 00:01am
Re. 11:49pm
6th Apr 2023 11:29pm
Hey...the truth is the truth. Writing with a gun to one's head puts creativity in a different perspective.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. 11:49pm
7th Apr 2023 00:03am
Yeah, it feels more like work than creativity in those moments, but I do appreciate the fact that not everyone can do it. Thanks!
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Re. 11:49pm
7th Apr 2023 8:46pm
I like this a lot, it's bouncy. And I know the feeling of trying to put in the time for the words even when I'm tired and uninspired. Love it!
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8th Apr 2023 00:15am
Re. 11:49pm
12th May 2023 2:45pm
I’ve always thought, if we’re experiencing writer’s block why not write about writer’s block, but your verse here sounded more in the side of time slipping away before the deadline and you did a wonderful job with that rhyme and flow.
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Re: Re. 11:49pm
12th May 2023 11:12pm
Yes, very much so. I'm painfully familiar with the sensation of time slipping away before a deadline. It's often when I do my best work, but 11 minutes to spare was REALLY pushing it!!
Thanks for the read & comment!
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Thanks for the read & comment!
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