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Daedric Dualism - NaPoWriMo2023 #3
One being with two parts;
the light
bright
giggling delight
alright
with heels of flight
spring step
summer-summoner-smile
maddening
gladdening
fields of joy
babbling brook-look
layered joke book
Mad God side,
and
the logical
organised
efficient aspect
categorising
rationalising
ascertained
information
regulated
arranged
appropriate
weighed
measured
instructed
instigated
epitome of Order,
not always at war
but sometimes
subsumed
by the other
until time
evens the score
once again,
perpetuating emotions
and the unbalance starts swinging anew.
the light
bright
giggling delight
alright
with heels of flight
spring step
summer-summoner-smile
maddening
gladdening
fields of joy
babbling brook-look
layered joke book
Mad God side,
and
the logical
organised
efficient aspect
categorising
rationalising
ascertained
information
regulated
arranged
appropriate
weighed
measured
instructed
instigated
epitome of Order,
not always at war
but sometimes
subsumed
by the other
until time
evens the score
once again,
perpetuating emotions
and the unbalance starts swinging anew.
Published 3rd Apr 2023
| Edited 15th Apr 2023
Author's Note
Entry #3 for NaPoWriMo 2023.
Not exactly the deity/deities I identify unquestionably with (Sheogorath & Jyggalag) , yet there are times when I desire to be the fountain of carefree chaos, or catch myself the arbiter of order and logic.
Not exactly the deity/deities I identify unquestionably with (Sheogorath & Jyggalag) , yet there are times when I desire to be the fountain of carefree chaos, or catch myself the arbiter of order and logic.
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Anonymous
3rd Apr 2023 10:30pm
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4th Apr 2023 00:45am
The fact you used Dadaism to in fact, invoke a fucking stunning un-nonsense was bad. ass.
The duality was well executed and the flow was unique to each side. I thought that was a cool technique.
Great piece!
The duality was well executed and the flow was unique to each side. I thought that was a cool technique.
Great piece!
4th Apr 2023 11:25pm
Oh! Any fancyness such as Dadaism is purely coincidental and unintended; a happy accident.
To be honest it was an attempt to avoid my usual rambling lengthy sentences in favour of one word lines.
To be honest it was an attempt to avoid my usual rambling lengthy sentences in favour of one word lines.
4th Apr 2023 3:54am
Personally, I fall excessively on the Mad side with nowhere near enough organization, but I have a better half who does the logic-ing for me, so together we balance...
I love the way the formatting emphasizes your words - the first stanza being lines of random lengths, and the 2nd being pretty uniform & straight-edged. Very cool.
❤k
I love the way the formatting emphasizes your words - the first stanza being lines of random lengths, and the 2nd being pretty uniform & straight-edged. Very cool.
❤k
