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Anhelare
it’s the thickening of
our voices as we stare
between us, marveling
at how perfectly we fit -
all at once,
we are connected
by a thread of something
everything
holding our attention rapt
the air grows heavy,
dipping into our limbs;
we cast shadows against
the landscape of skin,
reaching for the atmosphere
of quickened breaths
galaxies exist in the
splendor of your eyes dilated;
my creation lies within
and without ~
your sacred geometry,
your ancient forests
hide your secrets;
but I want them every one ~
speak them in hushed tones
just outside my ear;
I’ll keep them safe for you
and comes elation;
the possibilities
of touch and taste, and of bliss
in this state of purposeful agony;
anticipation begs to be confined
by time and will;
how long before
we surrender?
our voices as we stare
between us, marveling
at how perfectly we fit -
all at once,
we are connected
by a thread of something
everything
holding our attention rapt
the air grows heavy,
dipping into our limbs;
we cast shadows against
the landscape of skin,
reaching for the atmosphere
of quickened breaths
galaxies exist in the
splendor of your eyes dilated;
my creation lies within
and without ~
your sacred geometry,
your ancient forests
hide your secrets;
but I want them every one ~
speak them in hushed tones
just outside my ear;
I’ll keep them safe for you
and comes elation;
the possibilities
of touch and taste, and of bliss
in this state of purposeful agony;
anticipation begs to be confined
by time and will;
how long before
we surrender?
Published 29th Mar 2023
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29th Mar 2023 4:30am
Dear L,
The beauty of this write is it’s subtlety. The reader gets to determine the pace and apply its message as gently, or not, as wanted. I enjoyed this poem as a guided imagery as well as, something hopeful to strive for. Great piece. H🌷
The beauty of this write is it’s subtlety. The reader gets to determine the pace and apply its message as gently, or not, as wanted. I enjoyed this poem as a guided imagery as well as, something hopeful to strive for. Great piece. H🌷
29th Mar 2023 11:49am
29th Mar 2023 5:03am
29th Mar 2023 11:49am
Anonymous
29th Mar 2023 6:39am
ummmm...yeah
you have spoken my lingo indeed
won't go to deep in your comment section
except to say bless be you
much respect
Naaj
you have spoken my lingo indeed
won't go to deep in your comment section
except to say bless be you
much respect
Naaj
29th Mar 2023 11:49am
29th Mar 2023 8:06am
Favourite lines (for eroticism):
we cast shadows against
the landscape of skin,
reaching for the atmosphere
of quickened breaths
your sacred geometry,
your ancient forests
hide your secrets;
we cast shadows against
the landscape of skin,
reaching for the atmosphere
of quickened breaths
your sacred geometry,
your ancient forests
hide your secrets;
29th Mar 2023 11:50am
29th Mar 2023 2:00pm
Tastefully rendered erotic is an exploration of energy and psychological nuances in my experience, you've done that with eloquence and presence.
29th Mar 2023 2:01pm
Anonymous
29th Mar 2023 2:21pm
This is a lovely poem. Mystical as well as romantic. xxxxxxxx
29th Mar 2023 2:52pm
1st Apr 2023 2:11am
"galaxies exist in the
splendor of your eyes dilated;" epic lines.
Amazing write.
splendor of your eyes dilated;" epic lines.
Amazing write.
1st Apr 2023 2:13am
13th Apr 2023 6:06pm
I've had the good fortune to listen to this 5 times today. You've gotten your natural timing down, voice is expressive, as in true conversation, sound is clean, beautifully done.
