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A fucking facial
I’m covered in
a full torso
conditioning
treatment
and taunting the
world take a look
at how.
good.
my.
skin.
looks.
Your hands
tangle in my hair
and you grunt
fuck
as I
pull my
mouth off
you and
work
your shaft
with both
hands like
a porn star
trying to get the
money shot
Eyes bright,
tits bouncing,
saliva thick
on my
swollen lips,
I pant
‘come on baby
give it to me’
and you
do
a fucking shower,
a tsunami,
a theme-park splash ride
thick trails of lust
drip down
my cheek,
my chin,
ooze down
the long line
of my neck;
and,
glinting pearls
hang like
teardrops
from tight nipples.
I rub it all in,
like a moisturizer
with the hand
not still holding you,
as you pulse those
last moments
so that you know…
when people glance
at the way my hair
curls over my back
when they try to
catch a hint of cleavage,
or stare too long
and the spot where
my collarbone meets
my shoulder...
so that when they
look at me
and wonder what
my skin
tastes like
you know it
tastes like you.
Author's Note
Just not in the eyes. I don't want pink-eye. Again.
ALSO?! Why isn't oral or blowjob a theme yet? If we had a blow job or pussy-eating tag, we'd put the other genres out of business.
Tell me I'm wrong.
ALSO?! Why isn't oral or blowjob a theme yet? If we had a blow job or pussy-eating tag, we'd put the other genres out of business.
Tell me I'm wrong.
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- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm
27th Mar 2023 2:15am
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Re: Re. A fucking facial
I had a different answer... but dude... like... back away from the sexist notion that women aren't as horny, fucked and and drawn to sexual power as... actual we're way more of all of that than a man.
:)
:)
Re. A fucking facial
27th Mar 2023 2:30am
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27th Mar 2023 1:26pm
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27th Mar 2023 2:50am
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27th Mar 2023 1:26pm
Re. A fucking facial
27th Mar 2023 3:59am
Killer last two lines. Girl, love how you just tell it like it is.
And yeah, pink eye sucks…
And yeah, pink eye sucks…
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27th Mar 2023 1:27pm
Re. A fucking facial
27th Mar 2023 7:51am
Serve other men right if they can't keep their lips off you! (though it might be a temptation if you go out dressed like in your avatar).
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27th Mar 2023 2:53pm
Re. A fucking facial
27th Mar 2023 11:55am
A red hot odyssey of ecstasy. Hell yeah the woman posess's the power.
Total thrill ride.
Total thrill ride.
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27th Mar 2023 1:31pm
Fuck yeah, we do! And that moment… that moment of male orgasm… when you’re calling all of the shots… divine.
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27th Mar 2023 1:35pm
Re. A fucking facial
27th Mar 2023 5:57pm
sensuous graphic and clever
I enjoyed this vibe through and through
This is the kind of connective
erotica that makes me appreciate the genre
Simply brilliant!!
I enjoyed this vibe through and through
This is the kind of connective
erotica that makes me appreciate the genre
Simply brilliant!!
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27th Mar 2023 5:59pm
Connective erotica, I love that so hard. Thanks Naaj, as always I appreciate your feedback. Glad you liked it.
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28th Mar 2023 8:57am
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28th Mar 2023 1:39pm
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28th Mar 2023 4:31pm
That might be my next creative endeavor....a personal shortcut....to save words.
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28th Mar 2023 5:14pm
Dude, no. Use words. The licky icon is so weird. Like, not arousing.
I like this one. It’s like she’s reaching to cup my ass while happily diving in.🤗
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28th Mar 2023 5:40pm
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28th Mar 2023 5:43pm
Did you just put yourself in a ménage a trois with me and my emoji girl?
Did you?!
Welp. I guess I don’t care as long as you know Emojina is coming home with me. Me. Ok?
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28th Mar 2023 6:15pm
Re. A fucking facial
28th Mar 2023 11:55am
Reading your comment to Deliabear, I have had a poem come to mind that I may post in this section. The opening lines:
You have a power over men,
to make them part with their semen.....
You have a power over men,
to make them part with their semen.....
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28th Mar 2023 1:40pm
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29th Mar 2023 8:18am
It might be said of the scene you depict in your poem "She was welcomed (well-cummed) at his bedside LOL.
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Re. A fucking facial
28th Mar 2023 11:57pm
Oh my gawd Betty
love the facial theme
Favorite of all time to have in my mouth
Don't want to go a day without it
It's the reason for my silky complexion forsure
love the facial theme
Favorite of all time to have in my mouth
Don't want to go a day without it
It's the reason for my silky complexion forsure
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29th Mar 2023 1:24am
You know. I noticed. I did.
I was going to ask if you were using sperm on your face, you look fucking fabulous.
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29th Mar 2023 1:28am
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29th Mar 2023 1:49am
Re. A fucking facial
21st Jul 2023 10:58am
I absolutely love how you have made it a continuing experience and the man's cum part of your beauty.
Damn that's hot writing
Damn that's hot writing
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21st Jul 2023 8:30pm