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The day is sun and shine and I have/
The day is sun and shine and I have
written dribble over less.
Not very deep in the bowels of some house, there's a
sibling quibblery, over trifles until
one tears a thread from one of the other's dreams.
There's a happy couple, carrying on and waiting on
the day their marriage has aged like wine
or dynamite.
written dribble over less.
Not very deep in the bowels of some house, there's a
sibling quibblery, over trifles until
one tears a thread from one of the other's dreams.
There's a happy couple, carrying on and waiting on
the day their marriage has aged like wine
or dynamite.
Published 9th Feb 2010
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Anonymous
9th Feb 2010 5:28pm
i really love this,striking images and fine thought-provoking words 'one tears a thread from one of the other's dreams.' and couple aging like wine or 'dynamite' , ha, i like that !!!Apart from your fine humour this is classy poetry.
10th Feb 2010 00:08am
Thanks so much. I was'nt really sure how this piece would be thought of, and it's nice to know it was appreciated.
19th Apr 2014 7:32am
waiting on the day their marriage has aged like wine or dynamite..
terrible wonderful truthful thought, well don young sire
terrible wonderful truthful thought, well don young sire
20th Apr 2014 6:22am
good. i'm glad you've seen that bit as something other than humor, as i didn't mean it as humor. thank you so much.
