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Turn Left at Burnt Coffin and Follow the Silence
Rag-and-bone man sells wilted flowers
for graveside manners
picnic blankets beside tombs
As refugees of misted lands
rambles of shingled memories
breast coasts with words left unspoken
Travelling orbs are flecks of dust,
palm reading and astrology
guessing of sight’s second coming,
even the blind man knows his way home
Always coming back
to kitchen aroma
bodies of paperback spine
mouths wept tales of Romany…..
If you could see me now,
a full embalmment away from
the vodka-corpsed cymru lost,
Wrapped those paper hearts
Into wreaths and sewage sunk
This coffee cup stirs an eye for silence
spoons burden from hollowest crucifix,
soon there won’t be enough soil to bury
so we’ll build skyscrapers of ash and bone
If you could see me now,
we’d peel songs from choirs of our lips
string never-played symphonies across
karaoke bomb shelters,
where you sheltered me when it rained
As Was When
I hear you singing
for graveside manners
picnic blankets beside tombs
As refugees of misted lands
rambles of shingled memories
breast coasts with words left unspoken
Travelling orbs are flecks of dust,
palm reading and astrology
guessing of sight’s second coming,
even the blind man knows his way home
Always coming back
to kitchen aroma
bodies of paperback spine
mouths wept tales of Romany…..
If you could see me now,
a full embalmment away from
the vodka-corpsed cymru lost,
Wrapped those paper hearts
Into wreaths and sewage sunk
This coffee cup stirs an eye for silence
spoons burden from hollowest crucifix,
soon there won’t be enough soil to bury
so we’ll build skyscrapers of ash and bone
If you could see me now,
we’d peel songs from choirs of our lips
string never-played symphonies across
karaoke bomb shelters,
where you sheltered me when it rained
As Was When
I hear you singing
Author's Note
Tis Mother's Day in blighty. I'll spare cynicism about the commercialisation of the day. Suffice to say, big respect to all the Mothers of the world. It can't always be easy. I miss you Mum. I still see your smile in the sunsets of our Nation. You're with US.
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Re. Turn Left at Burnt Coffin and Follow the Silence
Anonymous
19th Mar 2023 5:37pm
Forgive me if I don't ramble on and on. As I also grieve you know I know.
I would however like to say, THIS speaks volumes in so many ways 💞
If you could see me now,
a full embalmment away from
the vodka-corpsed cymru lost
I would however like to say, THIS speaks volumes in so many ways 💞
If you could see me now,
a full embalmment away from
the vodka-corpsed cymru lost
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20th Mar 2023 10:22am
I know L. We get to grieve and reflect together.
Ha. Pretty proud managed to squeeze embalmed into a stanza. My niece wants to get her oldest dog stuffed when it shuffles off the kennel coil. Like. Wait - What? It costs about £3k, so her hubby has kind of said no way. Rob
Ha. Pretty proud managed to squeeze embalmed into a stanza. My niece wants to get her oldest dog stuffed when it shuffles off the kennel coil. Like. Wait - What? It costs about £3k, so her hubby has kind of said no way. Rob
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20th Mar 2023 10:17am
Many thanks R. I guess at least we are able to articulate our losses in words. There is a cathartic process to bending the pen or crashing the keyboard. I send my blessings too. I appreciate your presence. Wob
Re. Turn Left at Burnt Coffin and Follow the Silence
19th Mar 2023 9:16pm
It seems a portrait of the aftermath of her loss, the haunted places, smells, sounds, the emotional presence is potent yet subtly rendered throughout.
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20th Mar 2023 10:12am
Many thanks my friend. I've processed all deaths and feel at peace with it all, but the sadness never leaves. Not really. It can be triggered by a certain song or kitchen smell. Life seems to be on a constant loop at times. Rob
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20th Mar 2023 3:38pm
I came across some quotes on Instagram today that made me think of this poem. One was Dylan Thomas, Though lovers be lost, love shall not and death shall have no dominion. A beautiful sentiment and so long as there are people, it bears true. The other quote struck me more though. It said, We are the absence we leave behind, like air parting around us as we walk.
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Re. Turn Left at Burnt Coffin and Follow the Silence
20th Mar 2023 2:07am
Your mom didn't spare you any of the good traits. You got them all.
How rich, you should feel.
How rich, you should feel.
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20th Mar 2023 10:09am
Very kind Styx. Mum had her faults & insecurities (not as many as me) but she was a good and kind-hearted woman. For better or worse, she was the reason for the start of my writing adventure. My bank manager would probably disagree, but I do feel incredibly rich at the moment. Have a good week mate. Rob
Re. Turn Left at Burnt Coffin and Follow the Silence
20th Mar 2023 8:59am
Powerful Rob, Powerful.
Beautiful tribute.
If she could see you now, she would be very fucking PROUD.
Regards,
BITS
Beautiful tribute.
If she could see you now, she would be very fucking PROUD.
Regards,
BITS
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20th Mar 2023 10:05am
Many thanks. Touched by your response. Sadly, both my folks were too Alzheimers ridden to appreciate how I turned my life around. Mum's last ever word to us was sing. Somehow seems appropriate. Rob
Re. Turn Left at Burnt Coffin and Follow the Silence
20th Mar 2023 6:43pm
This is a lovely Mother's Day poem. The day means little to me but this poem almost got me interested in it. Which is saying a lot haha. The imagery and atmosphere that you employ shine brilliantly as always. I loved the references to Romany gipsies and Cymru, both of which lend the poem real authenticity, antiquity, and humanity. Your verse feels a bit like great folk music, just a little skewed and surreal as per your particular vision. The impressionistic style that you use is something that I always find engaging. It makes your poems feel a bit like raw chunks of diamond glittering with revelation and mystery. If that's not too poncey a way of putting it.
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Many thanks my friend. Not poncey at all. Quite enjoyed the descriptive quality. I tried to avoid mother day cynicism, but that doesn't come easy. Lol. At graveside someone once asked me the origin of the inscription? I proudly stated Larkin. In hindsight, they probably thought I meant Pop, but hey-ho, it's the price we have to pay.
I have a fair bit of stuff about the Romany link, but won't be posting it in here. Rob
I have a fair bit of stuff about the Romany link, but won't be posting it in here. Rob
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