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world - more than one
I live in many worlds
and in each world
I have a home
one world is breathing
on this mobile screen,
one world is living
on paper
one world is booming
in my heart
one world that I imagine
and one world is making
noise around me. Haaaaah!
And carrying the weight
of all these worlds
how can I survive?
How do I maintain my
relationships
with so many worlds
at the same time?
How do I forget myself?
and in each world
I have a home
one world is breathing
on this mobile screen,
one world is living
on paper
one world is booming
in my heart
one world that I imagine
and one world is making
noise around me. Haaaaah!
And carrying the weight
of all these worlds
how can I survive?
How do I maintain my
relationships
with so many worlds
at the same time?
How do I forget myself?
Author's Note
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Re. world - more than one
Anonymous
17th Mar 2023 1:06pm
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 1:29pm
Dear mr black 🖤
You are right, I must have to embrace the darkness of the night if I want light and yes I am not the only one in this world rather everyone is living somewhere with a burden, I accept your advice and Thank you for understanding my thoughts as your reflection.
You are right, I must have to embrace the darkness of the night if I want light and yes I am not the only one in this world rather everyone is living somewhere with a burden, I accept your advice and Thank you for understanding my thoughts as your reflection.
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18th Mar 2023 2:14pm
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Re: Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 2:42pm
Dearest Mr black 🖤
I accept everything from you, I believe that I can trust you, so I agree with you.
I accept everything from you, I believe that I can trust you, so I agree with you.
Anonymous
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17th Mar 2023 1:11pm
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 1:31pm
Thank You for reading me, understanding my words and for the beautiful feedback. Thanks
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 2:19pm
Many facets of the self in modernity... nicely penned... so relatable and resonating...
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17th Mar 2023 2:28pm
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 3:10pm
This is something I think about often, the worlds within worlds, the facets of existence that pass into and through each other.
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Re: Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 3:47pm
yaa as the days are passing our responsibilities are increasing, don't know where our existence is lost, sometimes we are here and sometimes there, now this is just the life. Well thanks you Daniel for visit and adding this post to your RL.
Re. world - more than one
17th Mar 2023 10:31pm
I gotta admire this piece for its honesty. The existentialist in me says there are many roles that play on our daily lives and time passes by so fast we blink and miss it.
You can express it beautifully
You can express it beautifully
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18th Mar 2023 00:29am
Re. world - more than one
18th Mar 2023 1:45am
As my mate Nibbly would say, if I asked him this question, "What do you want me to say, Billy?" Which is no help whatsoever, I know. You have so many worlds, so I do not know which one you should be in. These worlds seem all so interconnected, so maybe you need them all. Maybe it's not the answer you wanted but I think a lot of us are in a similar position to you.
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18th Mar 2023 2:14am
Yes, many people will be in such situation nd personally I want to live in all these worlds, but there are many problems too, by the way thank you.
Re. world - more than one
20th Mar 2023 11:31pm
Your feelings are expressed here with a depth of introspection that sings to me your soul song. Loved this.
John
John
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21st Mar 2023 00:47am