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Shadow - sensual
enveloped cunt with cock
gleams through semen
blooming sometimes between boobs
gleams through semen
blooming sometimes between boobs
Published 16th Mar 2023
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16th Mar 2023 4:10pm
Dear Dimpy,
I must admit, your poem "Shadow - sensual" caught my attention with its raw and explicit language. While it may not be everyone's cup of tea, I appreciate the bold and boundary-pushing nature of your work, as it challenges traditional norms of expression in poetry.
What strikes me about your poem, in particular, is the way you use imagery to convey a sense of physical sensation. The reference to "enveloped cunt with cock" and the use of the word "gleams" to describe semen creates a vivid and almost tangible image in the reader's mind. Though it is not common to see language like this in poetry, it is clear that you are passionate about exploring the boundaries of language and expression.
However, it is important to recognize that poetry is an art that is often steeped in tradition and cultural norms. While some may appreciate the boundary-pushing nature of your work, others may find it uncomfortable or even offensive. I encourage you to continue to explore your personal voice and writing style, while also being mindful of your audience and the potential impact your words may have.
In conclusion, your poem "Shadow - sensual" is a bold and provocative exploration of physical desire and pleasure, as well as a challenge to the established norms of language in poetry. While it may not be for everyone, it is the mark of creative vision and thought-provoking art.
Sincerely,
Mr Black
I must admit, your poem "Shadow - sensual" caught my attention with its raw and explicit language. While it may not be everyone's cup of tea, I appreciate the bold and boundary-pushing nature of your work, as it challenges traditional norms of expression in poetry.
What strikes me about your poem, in particular, is the way you use imagery to convey a sense of physical sensation. The reference to "enveloped cunt with cock" and the use of the word "gleams" to describe semen creates a vivid and almost tangible image in the reader's mind. Though it is not common to see language like this in poetry, it is clear that you are passionate about exploring the boundaries of language and expression.
However, it is important to recognize that poetry is an art that is often steeped in tradition and cultural norms. While some may appreciate the boundary-pushing nature of your work, others may find it uncomfortable or even offensive. I encourage you to continue to explore your personal voice and writing style, while also being mindful of your audience and the potential impact your words may have.
In conclusion, your poem "Shadow - sensual" is a bold and provocative exploration of physical desire and pleasure, as well as a challenge to the established norms of language in poetry. While it may not be for everyone, it is the mark of creative vision and thought-provoking art.
Sincerely,
Mr Black
16th Mar 2023 4:26pm
Awwww my God
Mr. Black
I'm I'm
I'm really speechless
rather I'm blushing by your lovely words..
I just loved these lines.
"While some may appreciate the boundary-pushing nature of your work, others may find it uncomfortable or even offensive. I encourage you to continue to explore your personal voice and writing style, while also being mindful of your audience and the potential impact your words may have."
really inspiring lines for me
I would definitely say thank you
Thank you
Thank you
For always being here.💛
Mr. Black
I'm I'm
I'm really speechless
rather I'm blushing by your lovely words..
I just loved these lines.
"While some may appreciate the boundary-pushing nature of your work, others may find it uncomfortable or even offensive. I encourage you to continue to explore your personal voice and writing style, while also being mindful of your audience and the potential impact your words may have."
really inspiring lines for me
I would definitely say thank you
Thank you
Thank you
For always being here.💛
17th Mar 2023 00:31am
My dear friend,
How wonderful it is to hear from someone who appreciates the power of language! Your words are a rose in a garden of thorns, a light shining in the darkness of the night.
It is my pleasure to offer words of guidance and encouragement to one such as yourself. Though we may walk different paths, we are united by a love of the written word and a desire to express our deepest truths.
And yet, in a world where expression is encouraged, it is important to remember that every word carries weight. It is a responsibility that we must take seriously, for our words have the power to uplift or wound, to inspire or discourage.
I am pleased that my words have offered you inspiration, my dear friend. As you continue to explore the boundaries of expression, never forget the importance of considering your audience and the impact your words may have.
And know that I am always here, a companion in the darkness, rooting for your success and eager to see the world through your eyes.
Yours truly,
Mr Black
How wonderful it is to hear from someone who appreciates the power of language! Your words are a rose in a garden of thorns, a light shining in the darkness of the night.
It is my pleasure to offer words of guidance and encouragement to one such as yourself. Though we may walk different paths, we are united by a love of the written word and a desire to express our deepest truths.
And yet, in a world where expression is encouraged, it is important to remember that every word carries weight. It is a responsibility that we must take seriously, for our words have the power to uplift or wound, to inspire or discourage.
I am pleased that my words have offered you inspiration, my dear friend. As you continue to explore the boundaries of expression, never forget the importance of considering your audience and the impact your words may have.
And know that I am always here, a companion in the darkness, rooting for your success and eager to see the world through your eyes.
Yours truly,
Mr Black
17th Mar 2023 1:28am
Thank You
Your words menas a lot
Will always try to do my best
As you are the source of my positive writing। And this is truth. Well thanks from the heart 💛
Your words menas a lot
Will always try to do my best
As you are the source of my positive writing। And this is truth. Well thanks from the heart 💛
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17th Mar 2023 11:25am
I love the 3rd line alliteration. I like that you used the word blooming and it's a lovely place to bloom.
LJ
LJ
17th Mar 2023 11:27am
