Shades Of Dominion

Exquisite!

You're lovely, thank you, MS.

I appreciate you stopping by and I'm delighted you found something of interest here.

Warmest regards, my friend
🌹B

That 4th stanza, my my... my.  I read this and was like *clear my throat*, and a big gulp of "well hello saliva" swallowed down.  It's insane how your poetry never let's me down.  As I've said before, you are hands down one of my top 5 favorite poets on DU.

LJ

I couldn't adore three words more than I do your 'my my... my!!' I am all Cheshire Cat smiles at that one! 😉

Your incandescent feedback warms me through and through, Lj.... (hugs)

Yeah, that 4th stanza is my favorite, too.... gotta love a bit of debauchery, eh? It's passion that gets us through, methinks!

A ton of thanks for the lovely thoughtfulness. I'm definitely honored to be amongst the top five.... what a compliment! 🙇🏻‍♀️

Much love and wishes sent for many good spills ahead,
🌹 💙 💙
-B

wowee no one writes like you beautiful Blue this is so fucking sexy and vulnerable too
I love this woman you make me blush ❤️

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3VB4dQuQ00

I bask in all your thoughtful kindness, Brenda. It's so nice to hear from you and feel your warmth... To make you blush is a total win that I love taking!

Thanks a million, dear lady
Love the song too.... - 🌹💙
Blu

Your writing is so vastly beautiful. I can't wait for your next poem.

You are so sweet and extremely kind. I adore your beautiful feedback and hopefully you'll not have to wait long..... but no promises.

I'm all smiles that you found enjoyment here.
🌹💙
B

HOLY FUCK!

OK, before I get all girl-wood on you, let's talk fucking art.

The play of the light and dark, mixed with actual physical anxiety and the chemistry is genius.

You weave a loom that pulls the reader dooowwwwnnnnn and get them slicked up with the sexiness of the need.

You make want. You make want viable, tangible and visible, and you show the vulnerability of want, because that shit is REAL, and it's DANGEROUS.

Beautiful.

Also.... I need to go rub one off in the bathroom now. (WHAT?!)

Damn, lady.... Now I have these insanely hot images dancing in my head!!... That was the perfect way to end your feedback....purrrrr....😉

Thank you for seeing me how I long to actually be seen. It's rare and unbelievably satisfying when someone just gets it.... and fuck how I know you do.

The beauty is in the eye of the beholder.... so back at you.

-`ღ´-

Hey Blue now that was worth the wait
Absolutely smashed it. Fantastic to see you back and with such a bang
Love and light
Ron xx

That's AWESOME feedback, Ron. I'm super stoked you found it worth the wait and alluring on some level. That's truly high praise.    
 
It's so freaking marvelous to see you 🦋  
I hope you are doing better, my brave Knight  
   
Much love from across the pond ✨    
🌹 💙

And ladies and gentlemen,  she writes seduction like it's the first cold glass of water after a long dry journey.  That replenishment is priceless.  Needs no additives.

Take away a planet, and the rest get all out of proper orbit.  So stop leaving.  Please?

The picture... two women.  A little room right between... I can just squeeze my...

It's nice to know I could quench a thirst!! ;)

Your kindness is always appreciated, Mark. Thank you for being the one to align things, I'm hardly one who has that type of gravity.... but you definitely do!

Hee hee hee.... You cliché, you!! That's what every red blooded male would say.... "Just let me squeeze in between".... hahaha... Unfortunately, I am far too greedy and am loathe to share my toys. ..I fully admit that I can't help but want to be the center of attention... Three never has worked out well for me....

I appreciate you, my friend
It's a pleasure ✨
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S

My mind is on fire.  Bluevelvete you need to  have a great sexual adventure with lots of orgasmic bliss.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

It's fun to burn a little bit sometimes.... Thanks for feeling the heat Francisco.

I appreciate you!
🌹 💙

No worries, Tim
Thanks so much for taking a moment and for the kind RL add.

I hope you got some rest.
🌹💙
B

Dear BV,

There was this guy in college…and then all the rest you said 🤭
Another sizzler. I’m reliving those dorm days through this write when life felt a lot less restrictive.  Good times. Great write. H🌷

Ohhh the stories you must have.... - sigh -
Sometimes it's so nice to stroll through memory lane... I'm so happy you found a bit of dreamy/steamy nostalgia here, H.

(I know I owe you a return message, I'm still all brain foggy and will get there, dear lady.... bear with me... I hate that I'm so 'not me'....)

I adore having you here and getting your insight. It rejuvenates.... and I am so grateful.

🌹💙 💙
-B

Just startig with that great pic makes a person quite horny...........and it's all uphill from there.             Nice to see you around.   Kisses' Robert.

To stir some bit of emotion whilst passionately climbing that hill is all I could ask for.... it's very nice to be seen, Robert.

Thank you for taking some time with me and being kind enough to leave your thoughts here.... I do enjoy it so.

I hope things are well with you.
Much love,
🌹 💙

Dearest, Lady Blue❣ The ecstasy builds so deliciously in this piece. You conjured, again, head-to-toe, warm tingles. You capture so well the urgent necessity of calm amid paralyzing panic with this passage "forcing calm
from the death grip
of my panic."
I unabashedly yearn for this species of desire "wild heat
chemically reacts
with unapologetic need."
I felt a jolt of euphoria reading this passage "the ache
loitering
between my legs"
Bravissima Goddess Poet🐻💞🐰

You're a lovely highlight to my drab day with your wonderfully kind admiration of my little poem, dear BB.  
 
It's such an unmitigated pleasure to know that I can elicit those type of dense stirring emotions.... whew! I'm seriously blown away by that knowledge and adore you to pieces for taking the time to describe to me in beautiful detail. That makes me fly high with pride and a bit of motivation that I didn't lose all of my mojo to this blasted sickness..... Yesss!  
   
No one can put the type of smile on my face that genuinely beams such adoring thanks and renewal of self, like you can.... ☺ and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for that treasured gift.  
   
Much love, my dear friend 🙏🏻  
🐻💗🐰

Totally hot B...

A steady flame passion, burning bright, powerful...

I like very much the way you worked the tempo of the piece...

Integrating many sharp, subtle elements...

A dark delight whose decadence is an irresistible fascination that demonstrates the sensual power of a woman on fire with desire. You made me see all this as an erotic dream that I never wanted to end. Real hormonal strength of estrogen-powered love in which both are consumed by the burn of concupiscence. There is nothing like one of your poems to close my night. Sweet dreams take on an even more fabulous feeling after the scene you played out in my mind. Oh, Lala my darling sweetheart.

XoXoXo
John

Ohh my dear dear poet!! ... How can I possibly count the infinite ways in which your magic of vision and understanding move me.... beyond all conception!! You see the parts of me that most others miss or don't care to delve into and it's so meaningful to me that you catch them. I adore your comments and love that I am able to stir something that feels so intense, erotic and wonderfully intimate, to you That's an incredible comment and a truly awesome notion.

You've made me so proud and full of smiles, my lovely. Thank you, thank you.
🌹💙 💙
-Susan

Will be back to add better thoughts for this majestic sexy work of art

No worries... - 🌹 💙 💙

Betwixt the folds of anxiety,
Scored within the silence
She sings in her poetic song
Blessed to witness the magic of her pen
Linked in with my spirit, she moves me
Excited with the fire of her
Every detail treasured,
Each strand of hair lovingly tucked behind ear
The pinpoints of light, through the darkness
Are the reflection of wingbeats covered in stardust
And the stars fall on the blush of your cheeks
And mine as we dance and laugh together
Our darkness kindred, our light reflecting
The glowing Sun inside of her..

I'm beyond honored and truly lucky to receive such moving feedback. The kinship that permeates is also the best kind of motivational 'fuel' for my fire. I too, get that same inkling from your words/work and it's so inspiring and utterly beautiful.

I can almost feel the cool tingles of air surrounding each of us as we circle each other in dance and gorgeous jubilation..... the darkness enveloping two souls bound in sisterhood via poetry.

You're my heart song.
🌹💙 💙
xo

Hot doesn’t even begin to describe this titillating and tantalizing spill filled with a dark thrill that leaves us open to imagination.

Amazing

Thanks for feeling the sear of the fire burning, Walter.

It's always a pleasure to receive your insight.... I'm happy that you found a little thrill here.

🌹 💙
B

A hot piece of poetry.

Hey there, Remy!
Long time no see! .... it's wonderful to have you stop by and I'm absolutely stoked that you felt a bit of the fire, here... thanks for saying so.  

Hope you are doing well and I'll definitely keep an eye posted for any new poems from you.... take care, my friend.  

🌹B

"... Pin points of light... ... "
Phosphene as a gothic tale of life.
When nowhereland becomes a peaceful and hopeful place.
... 🤔... 👍

You understood it better than I could have hoped, thank you for that keen and welcoming insight, dear Marks.

Sorry I was late to reply, it's still a long road to returning to 100%

I adore seeing you and I'm beyond grateful for your visit.

Much love and appreciation,
🌹💙
B

You're welcome, Bluevelvete.

Mmm. Mmm. Mmm.
❣️❣️❣️
🙏

Ohhh KP....  ;)

It's beyond lovely to see you 🦋


Thank you.
🌹 💙 💙

You are clever. Very!

Back @ you Rew!!

Thanks for stopping by.... - 🌹

x

Tight and Wet...Beauty ♥

Thanks for that lovely little sentiment, Hashman.


I absolutely 💙 sharing a bit of beauty and I'm beaming with delight that you discovered some of it here.

xo
B

You are a master of your art, Blue. True eroticism in every verse.


hugs/love,
buddhakitty.

Awww.... I just love that you think so, bk.
All my deepest thanks and appreciation...

It's truly marvelous that you could feel what I hoped to convey.

Returned hugs and much love,
🌹 💙
B

Inciting voyeuristic tendencies indeed you are
Lady of the Quill

Damn this was dope!!

I do believe you've just set my tone of the day, dearest Naajir!! What an awesome comment.... Yesss!!

I'm so grateful and lucky that I have found like minds, like your own to surround myself with here... You seeing me and feeling my writing the way you do makes for a ture motivational boost...and I'm forever thankful.

Enormous appreciation and all my warmest regards,
🌹 💙

You're lovely visit adds beautiful warmth to my day, dear poetess. Thank you.

Sending out heartfelt condolences and an abundance of healing energy. I've been there and have faced that specific grief and pain, too. Be kind to yourself and take things day to day. Losing a parent after sickness is such an enormous emotional roller coaster. There's no wrong way to feel or be.

Thinking of you,
Hopes for peace and comfort sent your way ✨
🌹 💙 💙

Wow, this is exceptional.
'Coloured only by your sun', that line gives me goosebumps, and tears. I love poetry that says so much, without saying too much.
Also, 'the ache loitering between my legs' made me blush. I love it.

I am in awe of your work rate. I really wish I could write every single day. But its a painful slog for me, an emotional catharsis that only seems to happen when I'm at my worst.

I love your work.

I can relate... I've slowed down recently because I've been battling covid for a few months and unfortunately the long term effects of it, as well... So I haven't been as productive as I once was.... Hopefully that changes... Ugggh!

Thank you for the lovely comments and for also enjoying the essence of an erotic feel without going to a place that feels gratuitous just because it can be, which is what I too, enjoy! ... I'll but lie, I also love that raunchiness sometimes, too but for me there's a cool challenge in taking a write to a place of deep seduction and then backing off a little bit, that I just find so sexy and alluring...Keeping it upon to one's imagination is just the best!!

Your pen guides you when and how you need it, I suppose!

It's been awesome to see you and to get your thoughts and very cool feedback.... Please know you're always welcome.

Much love and warm appreciation sent your way,
🌹💙
B

The tribulating anxiety of a new adventure; typically, male led but different this time. A woman’s touch, with you not sure what to expect or how to react. Initially cloaked in secrecy to protect yourself from outside opinions and to hide your own hesitancy.  But with 1st hand experiences and biology, only another woman can have, they are able to navigate the path to a previously unknown ecstasy source.  Both your minds light up with this new knowledge as your skins’ blush from the implementation and realization. A very erotic read of discovery. Well done.

Consultation with a female interrogator may provide keen insight on liberating closely kept secrets.