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Snack Fantasies
On the palm of my hand
grew orange peel trees; lemons flourished on their peppermint branches
A lush chocolate cupcake
beneath a swirl of blueberry icing was temporary lodging for the senses
Insuppressible fingers ‘cupped’
all the cravings trying to cradle as many guilty pleasures as possible
Caramel waterfalls flowed
around cookie tower mountains and watermelon canyons where I boarded a pretzel raft and glazed over all the confections
Finally, air-pop-corning a return ride to my cupcake lounge, and brushing away gum drop sugars, I grabbed a pencil and started writing sweet somethings
grew orange peel trees; lemons flourished on their peppermint branches
A lush chocolate cupcake
beneath a swirl of blueberry icing was temporary lodging for the senses
Insuppressible fingers ‘cupped’
all the cravings trying to cradle as many guilty pleasures as possible
Caramel waterfalls flowed
around cookie tower mountains and watermelon canyons where I boarded a pretzel raft and glazed over all the confections
Finally, air-pop-corning a return ride to my cupcake lounge, and brushing away gum drop sugars, I grabbed a pencil and started writing sweet somethings
Author's Note
This is SO NOT my diet 😂
Fun with this one!
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Mixed medium blend
(Oil,Water, and Acrylic Blend on Paper)
Copyright 2023. All rights reserved
Fun with this one!
🍭 🍬 🍉 🍋 🍊 🍪 🍿
Mixed medium blend
(Oil,Water, and Acrylic Blend on Paper)
Copyright 2023. All rights reserved
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 3:42am
Hi sight!
As a bodybuilder, I always watch what I eat,
but my cheat is ice cream!
Thank you for the RL and comment
NG
As a bodybuilder, I always watch what I eat,
but my cheat is ice cream!
Thank you for the RL and comment
NG
Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 12:31pm
I try to eat sensibly too but you need some sugar sometimes to bring that good feeling.
You certainly gave us choices.
I really love the painting and your poem.
Great Job NG
Going out now to buy some watermelon and other good stuff
BIG LIKE
Hungry
🤠💯🍉
You certainly gave us choices.
I really love the painting and your poem.
Great Job NG
Going out now to buy some watermelon and other good stuff
BIG LIKE
Hungry
🤠💯🍉
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Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 1:23pm
When I see various clients, it blows my mind how much nervous snack eating they do at their desks especially when they are close to deadlines! That inspired this poem and painting.
I’m glad you are going for the watermelon 🍉
Thank you for the praise and support!
💖
I’m glad you are going for the watermelon 🍉
Thank you for the praise and support!
💖
Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 2:09pm
Re: Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 2:59pm
Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 2:11pm
Lovely colors, delicious ,,eye candy" painting.
I love it and the poem as well.
💚💛💙🧡❤️💗✨✨✨
ReignMoon
I love it and the poem as well.
💚💛💙🧡❤️💗✨✨✨
ReignMoon
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Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 3:02pm
Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 6:29pm
I wasn’t expecting to read something this whimsical and artsy and it was a welcomed breeze!
It is easy to reach for comfort food under stress. Creative perspective and the painting is fun!
It is easy to reach for comfort food under stress. Creative perspective and the painting is fun!
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Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 7:33pm
Thank you very much, 555!
I appreciate the uplifting comment and RL
Thank you!
I appreciate the uplifting comment and RL
Thank you!
Re. Writer’s Block
25th Feb 2023 10:09pm
Oh my! What a fun, colorful poem. Absolutely amazing art and whimsical words.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Writer’s Block
26th Feb 2023 00:02am
Hello LJ!
This was fun and motivating with all these candy holidays in a row! It’s everywhere!
But can’t say “no” all the time 😁
Thank you for the beautiful comment and RL!
This was fun and motivating with all these candy holidays in a row! It’s everywhere!
But can’t say “no” all the time 😁
Thank you for the beautiful comment and RL!
Re: Re. Writer’s Block
26th Feb 2023 00:15am
I must admit, the 'lush' chocolate cupcake with blueberry icing did look extremely inviting. You too are of course one outstanding artist here on DUP. Naturally, I am sorry to learn you are suffering from writer's block but I like the way you're trying to coax your way out of it! I am permanently in a semi-state of writer's block but I'm ok with that because it's all I've ever known. I am an inspirational writer, meaning, I often have to find a source elsewhere than in my mind. You may have noticed lately that a few DUP members have provided me with that continuity. 😉
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Re: Re. Writer’s Block
26th Feb 2023 1:00am
Hi Billy!
I am also loving and wanting the chocolate cupcake! Actually, I’m not suffering from writer’s block thankfully! I’ve been around a few people who get through any “blocks” with snacks. The poem just kind of unfolded with that theme and became a fun get away topic. I am having difficulty staying away from all the candy and cookie offers! Valentine candy is still out there! But, I am staying strong, aside from an ice cream night. 🤫 I painted real fruit which is good in the diet, but in actuality no fruit offers came in, lol.
Thank you very much regarding my art, that means a lot to me!
I am also loving and wanting the chocolate cupcake! Actually, I’m not suffering from writer’s block thankfully! I’ve been around a few people who get through any “blocks” with snacks. The poem just kind of unfolded with that theme and became a fun get away topic. I am having difficulty staying away from all the candy and cookie offers! Valentine candy is still out there! But, I am staying strong, aside from an ice cream night. 🤫 I painted real fruit which is good in the diet, but in actuality no fruit offers came in, lol.
Thank you very much regarding my art, that means a lot to me!
Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 4:08am
This is so cool and different lol reminds me of Hemingway when he was being cheeky.
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Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 4:35pm
Hello Daniel,
I’m ready to celebrate your comment with a huge chocolate cake! Thank you! 🙇♀️ 💖
I’m ready to celebrate your comment with a huge chocolate cake! Thank you! 🙇♀️ 💖
Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 5:43am
As I sit here and read this poem I am in awe as well as impressed. The way this poem flows is perfect. The painting is extravagant. Together they make a symphony!
You literally painted the photo I envision in my head as I read this. Amazing!
Now all I need is a lush chocolate cupcake while reading this poem again and my night will be complete.
You literally painted the photo I envision in my head as I read this. Amazing!
Now all I need is a lush chocolate cupcake while reading this poem again and my night will be complete.
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Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 4:45pm
Hello Doctorhyde!
Thank you for this beautiful comment!
I’m thrilled you enjoyed this!
Chocolate cake on the house! 😃
Thank you for this beautiful comment!
I’m thrilled you enjoyed this!
Chocolate cake on the house! 😃
Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 5:49am
If it's any conciliation, I ate eight mini chocolate donuts with a glass of milk earlier. Only eight because I ran out. Lol.
But now I'm craving cold watermelon dipped in warm caramel! It's awesome!
Awesome painting, too! The little woman in the palm of the hand. Is by chance her name "Wilma" Power? She's your subconscious, saying dig in!
But now I'm craving cold watermelon dipped in warm caramel! It's awesome!
Awesome painting, too! The little woman in the palm of the hand. Is by chance her name "Wilma" Power? She's your subconscious, saying dig in!
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Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 4:55pm
Oh, those little chocolate donuts are the best and especially refrigerated. The chocolate becomes just right and goes great with milk…. Yeah, I got lost for a moment… that little woman in the painting is my subconscious for sure!
Thank you so much, Styxian!
Thank you so much, Styxian!
Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 1:21pm
Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
26th Feb 2023 4:58pm
Hi Remington!
I thought I had sugar cravings before! lol
I’m so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you!
I thought I had sugar cravings before! lol
I’m so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you!
Re. Snack Fantasies
27th Feb 2023 5:36pm
As always, your craft is awesome and inspiring. There is an innate sensualness in the decadent desire to sate all the senses, so I find this poem much more multidimensional than one would assume. I also gained 3 pounds reading this, so if your purpose was to make poets fat, you have seceded admirably.
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Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
27th Feb 2023 11:49pm
I wanted to show the thoughts…(the cravings) along with reality peaking in… the pencil, the usb cable and hand etc. Innocent guilt over pleasures (real and imagined). So thank you for mentioning the multidimensional aspect! It means a lot to me and I value the observations in your writings as well. Thank you!
I’m sorry for the weight gain 😂
I’m sorry for the weight gain 😂
Re. Snack Fantasies
27th Feb 2023 11:47pm
I’m on a serious diet right now and reading this made me realize how miserable I am at the moment lol
But nice writing ❤️
But nice writing ❤️
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Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
27th Feb 2023 11:56pm
Hello jigg82!
Awww, I’m sorry about the diet!
In my fitness journey, I’ve learned not to deny myself anything, just keep it in calorie range. Or throw in 20 minutes of treadmill to burn off the cookie! I’m happy you stopped by and I’m glad you like the writing! Thank you!
Awww, I’m sorry about the diet!
In my fitness journey, I’ve learned not to deny myself anything, just keep it in calorie range. Or throw in 20 minutes of treadmill to burn off the cookie! I’m happy you stopped by and I’m glad you like the writing! Thank you!
Re. Snack Fantasies
28th Feb 2023 1:17pm
That painting is evil but oh so lush! lol (and incredible as always)
I love the fantasy imagery, like lemons on peppermint branches.
What an interesting combination... I want some...
Ah, those guilty pleasures... and I know you aren't just talking food. ;)
Absolutely adored where you took me with this, doing some pretzel rafting
through watermelon canyons is so beautiful. And a cupcake lounge...
This could definitely be made into a children's book.
So fun!!! Oil, water, and acrylic.. amazing.. such an incredible artist.
And is that a cord with a usb plug in the bottom from the ice cream cone? lol
Technology, you just can't get away from it.
I love the fantasy imagery, like lemons on peppermint branches.
What an interesting combination... I want some...
Ah, those guilty pleasures... and I know you aren't just talking food. ;)
Absolutely adored where you took me with this, doing some pretzel rafting
through watermelon canyons is so beautiful. And a cupcake lounge...
This could definitely be made into a children's book.
So fun!!! Oil, water, and acrylic.. amazing.. such an incredible artist.
And is that a cord with a usb plug in the bottom from the ice cream cone? lol
Technology, you just can't get away from it.
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Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
28th Feb 2023 4:48pm
Kristinaaaa!
I’m glad you enjoyed this sweet ride!
Cool you mentioned the mediums as well… yes I used oil on the paper too. I’ve done mixed mediums with acrylic and oil on canvas but never before with paper. I was trying to bring out the flesh in the watermelon with the richer oil pigments. The paper handled it! I like the outcome. Everything is blurrier when I upload pics here and doesn’t intimately show the textures but you get the idea. I am working on a few coloring books and this will go into it. But I love your idea of a children’s book. Yes, a usb cord and a pencil through the watermelon lol! Thanks for the excitement you always bring! xoxo
I’m glad you enjoyed this sweet ride!
Cool you mentioned the mediums as well… yes I used oil on the paper too. I’ve done mixed mediums with acrylic and oil on canvas but never before with paper. I was trying to bring out the flesh in the watermelon with the richer oil pigments. The paper handled it! I like the outcome. Everything is blurrier when I upload pics here and doesn’t intimately show the textures but you get the idea. I am working on a few coloring books and this will go into it. But I love your idea of a children’s book. Yes, a usb cord and a pencil through the watermelon lol! Thanks for the excitement you always bring! xoxo
Re. Snack Fantasies
2nd Mar 2023 4:29am
Definitely reminded me of Savory Truffle by the Beatles. George Harrison wrote the song about Eric Clapton's fondness for chocolate.
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2nd Mar 2023 4:49am
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22nd Mar 2023 6:48pm
Re: Re. Snack Fantasies
23rd Mar 2023 4:13am
I’m so glad you enjoyed this sweet fantasy!
There’s no weight gain here! 😃
Thanks, Debbie!
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There’s no weight gain here! 😃
Thanks, Debbie!
🍭 🍪 🧁
Re. Snack Fantasies
22nd Mar 2023 11:21pm
It’s incredible how you draw in your audience on your palms it’s awesome!
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23rd Mar 2023 4:14am