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A Different Kind of Death
Vased memories beside Mountain path
Leads to derelict house in a Pembroke river,
Dirt red roads measure the Valleys in
Stanzas of graves awaiting final ellipsis.
Paraffin poetry fuels his muse into creation.
She arrives in the last snow of spring,
Strands of air-coloured silk stirrup
Femail to his oaken and carved heart.
She catches consonants from his throat
Webs stories to skins of burnt diamonds,
Wears them as jewels over her wounds.
Her summit collapses down to his lakes,
Chalice of cigarettes, alcohol and charms for living.
A man on a cross would call this salvation.
Hallowing the sun from under Catalina bone
The shortest walk across the longest island.
Collaborations unbutton the skin storms
Naked be the verse, lain softly before the hearse.
Among the starry tormentil
Rain in the barley scythes thru scribbles
‘Remember me, but forget my fate.’
Lips left open at orchard gates.
A different kind of death
Remote, yet still breathing,
She carries the coffin in her purse
Daisy-chains his limbs to her azure sky.
Weeps only for the ghost-words never written.
In the Land of His Fathers, choirs of children
Womb’inate song into empty scholarly rooms,
Cradle the distance between crypt chapters
Of bible black biography and purple tomorrow.
Beyond any destination
Eternal language sings,
Logs of his poetic cabin
Will raze sense to cinder.
Summer’s words will be buried
In their rightful truthful home.
Leads to derelict house in a Pembroke river,
Dirt red roads measure the Valleys in
Stanzas of graves awaiting final ellipsis.
Paraffin poetry fuels his muse into creation.
She arrives in the last snow of spring,
Strands of air-coloured silk stirrup
Femail to his oaken and carved heart.
She catches consonants from his throat
Webs stories to skins of burnt diamonds,
Wears them as jewels over her wounds.
Her summit collapses down to his lakes,
Chalice of cigarettes, alcohol and charms for living.
A man on a cross would call this salvation.
Hallowing the sun from under Catalina bone
The shortest walk across the longest island.
Collaborations unbutton the skin storms
Naked be the verse, lain softly before the hearse.
Among the starry tormentil
Rain in the barley scythes thru scribbles
‘Remember me, but forget my fate.’
Lips left open at orchard gates.
A different kind of death
Remote, yet still breathing,
She carries the coffin in her purse
Daisy-chains his limbs to her azure sky.
Weeps only for the ghost-words never written.
In the Land of His Fathers, choirs of children
Womb’inate song into empty scholarly rooms,
Cradle the distance between crypt chapters
Of bible black biography and purple tomorrow.
Beyond any destination
Eternal language sings,
Logs of his poetic cabin
Will raze sense to cinder.
Summer’s words will be buried
In their rightful truthful home.
Written by
Strangeways_Rob
Published 16th Feb 2023
Author's Note
Just a tribute to two poets, one very much alive and the other sadly passed. That is all. Tis a beautiful story and deserves to be heard.
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
16th Feb 2023 1:33pm
My heart has stopped
I will back
(Need to read to the coffin in my purse and scream it to heavens)
I will back
(Need to read to the coffin in my purse and scream it to heavens)
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Re: Re. A Different Kind of Death
16th Feb 2023 6:51pm
Re. A Different Kind of Death
16th Feb 2023 2:25pm
The opening image has strong presence, the absence of someone, echoes of a life departed. The way you transform the forms of writing into forms of being is alchemy to me.
Second stanza seems to stream of consciousness perhaps from that ending to a beginning, to souls coming together, the way you describe it has endearing quality.
Third stanza is quite beautiful, succinctly conveys a great deal of meaning, time and presence to me, of how we heal each other simply by listening, caring and being our truth, it's something I've experienced and would also call it a true divinity.
It's a painful poem to experience, awakens things I laid dormant so I could get through the pain of losing something so meaningful and having to go on without that connection. Next 3 stanzas are so well executed, the depth of meaning encapsulated in such proportional dimensions of rhythm and rhyme. It's a beautiful thing to approach subjects of strong emotion with measures of awareness.
I love bible black and purple tomorrow for the meaning the images convey, too much to crowd under your poem.
The whole feels like such a gift of understanding. To truly listen and care enough for someone that you pass their experiences of love and loss through the iris of your eloquent rendering.
It's very moving Rob. 💖🙏🏻
Second stanza seems to stream of consciousness perhaps from that ending to a beginning, to souls coming together, the way you describe it has endearing quality.
Third stanza is quite beautiful, succinctly conveys a great deal of meaning, time and presence to me, of how we heal each other simply by listening, caring and being our truth, it's something I've experienced and would also call it a true divinity.
It's a painful poem to experience, awakens things I laid dormant so I could get through the pain of losing something so meaningful and having to go on without that connection. Next 3 stanzas are so well executed, the depth of meaning encapsulated in such proportional dimensions of rhythm and rhyme. It's a beautiful thing to approach subjects of strong emotion with measures of awareness.
I love bible black and purple tomorrow for the meaning the images convey, too much to crowd under your poem.
The whole feels like such a gift of understanding. To truly listen and care enough for someone that you pass their experiences of love and loss through the iris of your eloquent rendering.
It's very moving Rob. 💖🙏🏻
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Re: Re. A Different Kind of Death
16th Feb 2023 6:55pm
The story deserves a beautiful comment and thank you for obliging. Appreciated. Rob
Re. A Different Kind of Death
One is very much alive and breathtaking in beauty and soul.
Quality write & tribute Sir Rob !
BIG LIKE
Quality write & tribute Sir Rob !
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
16th Feb 2023 6:09pm
Read below ❤️
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16th Feb 2023 7:04pm
Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
- Edited 16th Feb 2023 6:09pm
16th Feb 2023 6:07pm
one night
in this dreamtime
oceanic California town
(although I cannot exactly remember when)
You walked with me in Sorrow
Holding my hand through the
obtrusive thick fog of Grief
Held still quivering-shaky-unsure of
the other side to the water where
"we" loved so well
There was a defining line between fog and sky
and it was you
the rest of the night bled purple and I remembered Wales
Thank you.
I am not carrying around all of the words of his ghost
You know my THREE. All a collective effort to mend my torn soul. I can only hope I reflect through my words the brilliant colors the 3 of you have returned to my life
LoriAnne ❤️
in this dreamtime
oceanic California town
(although I cannot exactly remember when)
You walked with me in Sorrow
Holding my hand through the
obtrusive thick fog of Grief
Held still quivering-shaky-unsure of
the other side to the water where
"we" loved so well
There was a defining line between fog and sky
and it was you
the rest of the night bled purple and I remembered Wales
Thank you.
I am not carrying around all of the words of his ghost
You know my THREE. All a collective effort to mend my torn soul. I can only hope I reflect through my words the brilliant colors the 3 of you have returned to my life
LoriAnne ❤️
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
16th Feb 2023 11:55pm
Dear R,
I’m pretty sure whatever I attempt to write in awe for this poem will be eclipsed by the above comments of my esteemed poets! It’s a beautiful homage and story line, supplemented by LadyFancy’s lovely poetic response. Clearly, I’m outdone. I leave you with a “I really loved this write” and I’ll sign off for now. 😊
H🌷
I’m pretty sure whatever I attempt to write in awe for this poem will be eclipsed by the above comments of my esteemed poets! It’s a beautiful homage and story line, supplemented by LadyFancy’s lovely poetic response. Clearly, I’m outdone. I leave you with a “I really loved this write” and I’ll sign off for now. 😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. A Different Kind of Death
17th Feb 2023 8:40am
You are very kind H. Thank you. Us Welsh are a strange breed : moody, dour, passionate and as tough as granite (especially the ladies). Many folk have come unstuck underestimating the Cymru spirit! Rob
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Anonymous
19th Feb 2023 4:14am
The Cymru spirit indeed!!!!!
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
17th Feb 2023 1:25pm
The use of imagery here is some of your best. The poem pulses with an aching and tender romantic strain that’s hard to produce without lapsing into pretentiousness or unintentional humour. But you pull it off magnificently (said the bishop to the actress).
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17th Feb 2023 7:01pm
Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
19th Feb 2023 3:51am
Had to revisit. Still blown completely away
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
22nd Feb 2023 3:51am
Hi. It's just me again. Needing a visit here. Thank you.
(It's saved. It's printed but Reading here is different ❤)
(It's saved. It's printed but Reading here is different ❤)
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Re: Re. A Different Kind of Death
22nd Feb 2023 1:28pm
Lol. Both messages at 3.51 am. It's them bloody aliens. Those words will find their rightful home, earthed and decorated. x
Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
25th Feb 2023 12:37pm
I watched a really good film last night and this morning I may have to watch it again. I just need to leave this here
: all mankind is of one author, and is one volume; when one man dies, one chapter is not torn out of the book, but translated into a better language; and every chapter must be so translated; God employs several translators; some pieces are translated by age, some by sickness, some by war, some by justice; but God's hand is in every translation, and his hand shall bind up all our scattered leaves again for that library where every book shall lie open to one another.
: all mankind is of one author, and is one volume; when one man dies, one chapter is not torn out of the book, but translated into a better language; and every chapter must be so translated; God employs several translators; some pieces are translated by age, some by sickness, some by war, some by justice; but God's hand is in every translation, and his hand shall bind up all our scattered leaves again for that library where every book shall lie open to one another.
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25th Feb 2023 12:39pm
I shall meet you at Charing Cross Station. I will be the 1 wearing a blue shirt.
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2023 12:41pm
We could write an "I was there " book
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
25th Feb 2023 1:27pm
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25th Feb 2023 4:48pm
From a writer of constant high quality poetry, I truly appreciate the comment Par. Thank you.
Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
8th Mar 2023 00:06am
❤ wales
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
15th Mar 2023 1:31am
Hi again. Thank you is still inadequate..you know
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Re. A Different Kind of Death
Anonymous
16th Mar 2023 6:44pm
This. This. THIS .....who knew....who fucking knew what THIS would do. Forever, thank you.
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