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Supermarket Butt
she rushed to the front of the line
but won't get a fight from me
since I'm in no hurry to pass this view
but won't get a fight from me
since I'm in no hurry to pass this view
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Re. Supermarket Butt
5th Feb 2023 6:45am
Dang dude, and with the freaking pic also. You really put a masterpiece up, tight work dude
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Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:30am
Haha. Yes, a work of art.
Thanks for the read, friend. It's very much appreciated 😁
Thanks for the read, friend. It's very much appreciated 😁
Re. Supermarket Butt
5th Feb 2023 6:45am
Dang dude, and with the freaking pic also. You really put a masterpiece up, tight work dude
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Re. Supermarket Butt
5th Feb 2023 6:48am
Dear DC,
Love the “cheek” of your generosity in letting her cut the line. 😉 fun write.
H🌷
Love the “cheek” of your generosity in letting her cut the line. 😉 fun write.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:32am
I'm quite the gentleman haha.
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Thanks for the read, friend. It is very much appreciated 😁
Re. Supermarket Butt
5th Feb 2023 7:08am
Puts a whole new meaning to "butting in"! Rhyming comment:
Someone I'd let in front in a queue,
all for the sake of a hot rear view!
Queen's Fat Bottomed Girls song comes easily to mind too.
Someone I'd let in front in a queue,
all for the sake of a hot rear view!
Queen's Fat Bottomed Girls song comes easily to mind too.
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Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:38am
Awesome song. Can't go wrong with Queen.
Thanks for the read. It is very much appreciated 😁
Thanks for the read. It is very much appreciated 😁
Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:41am
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Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:45am
Well worth the wait at least hehe.
Thanks for the read. Very much appreciated 😁
Thanks for the read. Very much appreciated 😁
Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:47am
I had two other titles. "Supermarket Sweep" and "Supermarket Booty".
I guess any would of worked haha.
I guess any would of worked haha.
Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 10:47am
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Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
6th Feb 2023 9:48am
Not a bad trade. She gets in front and I get a view hehe.
Thanks for the read, friend. It's very much appreciated 😁
Thanks for the read, friend. It's very much appreciated 😁
Re. Supermarket Butt
7th Feb 2023 00:10am
Re: Re. Supermarket Butt
7th Feb 2023 2:40am
Never understood the appeal of the Kardashians. Better view for sure.
Thanks for the read 😁
Thanks for the read 😁