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Jungle Eyes (with reading)
Come, fall into my eyes
It's a jungle in there...
green with vibrant life,
jewelled dewdrops joyful,
the mischief of monkeys,
full spectrum of secret delights:
your reward for wanting
to fall into my eyes.
Come, fall into my eyes
It's a jungle in there...
green with mean envy,
dank tangled anger,
the prowling of tigers,
dark clawing vulnerabilities:
your punishment for daring
to fall into my eyes.
Come, fall into my eyes
but it's a jungle in there!
Green means go,
still I can't promise safety --
the flowers have thorns
and there are snakes in the fruit.
It's a journey of wild beasts
and miraculous diversions,
I just hope you won't grow weary
of falling into my eyes.
Author's Note
Reposting this one because the perfect musical accompaniment presented itself.
Music by mistachesta.
Music by mistachesta.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Jungle Eyes
21st Jan 2023 9:42am
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21st Jan 2023 8:41pm
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Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
22nd Jan 2023 5:37am
Dear K,
I’d repost the phone book if I knew it’d sound this great! Awesome! H🌷
I’d repost the phone book if I knew it’d sound this great! Awesome! H🌷
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24th Jan 2023 11:51pm
Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
25th Jan 2023 4:14pm
Love the music and the reading... So immersive.
I bet it's a jungle in there... I can identify. :p
Love the imagery of what's inside.
Especially the mischief of monkeys,
and the full spectrum of secret delights.
Oh yeah! Who wouldn't want to fall in?
Know what you mean by the dark clawing vulnerabilities too,
And all of the other feelings...
The punishment for daring to go there as well.
Ah, the perils of getting lost in someone's eyes.
It's always a journey with miraculous diversions.
Life would be so boring without taking risks.
So keep pulling them in with those eyes BT.
You are definitely a risk worth taking. ;)
I bet it's a jungle in there... I can identify. :p
Love the imagery of what's inside.
Especially the mischief of monkeys,
and the full spectrum of secret delights.
Oh yeah! Who wouldn't want to fall in?
Know what you mean by the dark clawing vulnerabilities too,
And all of the other feelings...
The punishment for daring to go there as well.
Ah, the perils of getting lost in someone's eyes.
It's always a journey with miraculous diversions.
Life would be so boring without taking risks.
So keep pulling them in with those eyes BT.
You are definitely a risk worth taking. ;)
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Re: Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
25th Jan 2023 8:39pm
Thank you KX! I'm glad you found the journey worthwhile!
We're all just a mixed bag, aren't we...? You get the snakes along with the fruit.
❤k
We're all just a mixed bag, aren't we...? You get the snakes along with the fruit.
❤k
Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
25th Jan 2023 8:12pm
The many jungles of your green eyes. The gazer chooses their fate based on how they present themselves, and your eyes respond dictate the outcome.
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Re: Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
25th Jan 2023 8:42pm
Yes, interesting perspective! I guess maybe you get what you expect to get... or what you don't... the only constant is that jungles are always full of activity.
Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts
❤k
Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts
❤k
Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
17th Feb 2023 4:45pm
This was beautiful, entertaining, deep and cool.
Loved the music, eclectic with unique sounds. Your reading, pausing in between adds so much depth as well.
Amazing work.
Loved the music, eclectic with unique sounds. Your reading, pausing in between adds so much depth as well.
Amazing work.
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Re: Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
19th Feb 2023 4:15am
Thanks so much for the read, the listen, the comment. And RL! I'm really glad you found it enjoyable. 😊
❤️k
❤️k
Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
19th Feb 2023 9:04am
Omg I don't remember something like that here in the past!!! Aw, I am so happy, this is like trying to lockpick a door and suddenly your friend goes, nah screw that and kicks the door open. I might need someone else to read or rap thought. All songs are in English except a couple in Greek that i will be translating and also upload them in original form to compare the verse quality the flow and the lyrical aspect... Guys I will have to wait like 5 hours to upload and I have something very dark to play!!!!
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Re: Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
19th Feb 2023 7:51pm
Hey, thanks for visiting and for that lovely comment! 😁
If you have homemade music to share (originals or covers), and they don't seem to fit as a poetry post, check out The Jammin' Thread over in the speakeasy forums. It's been pretty quiet there but I'd love if some more people would join me in sharing their music creations!
Cheers
😎k
If you have homemade music to share (originals or covers), and they don't seem to fit as a poetry post, check out The Jammin' Thread over in the speakeasy forums. It's been pretty quiet there but I'd love if some more people would join me in sharing their music creations!
Cheers
😎k
Re. Jungle Eyes (with reading)
19th Mar 2023 10:47pm