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You are the boss.
A little late at work,
Came home, you met on the threshold.
The look is hard, incinerating to the holes,
He looked at me like a jeweler.
A little bit of fear won't hurt me,
because you're pushing, it's exciting.
One movement and you pressed me against the wall,
A little painful, uncomfortable to the back.
A hand at the throat, the other on the hip,
You are definitely the winner in this game.
And me! What am I?! You play without rules,
Again this only excites.
The breath is hot, not a word, just movements,
Looks more like it is an attack.
You're so jealous, but I'm going crazy.
I'm probably the only fool.
Of course, you are strong and very powerful,
Standing on the edge barefoot, you are so dangerous.
But you know how I like it this way,
I will squeeze all my liberties quickly into a fist.
I'm crazy, and you know it,
And the dress is lifted, you tear off the clothes,
We breathe and do not breathe, in unison,
The price of madness is at stake.
The movements are sharp, the wall has become a bed,
I remember and do not remember how I moaned.
You covered my hot mouth with your palm,
In your male hands my pulse is going to grow.
And the wild heart runs even faster,
We did not close the door behind us in the hallway.
You kill with your jealousy and strength,
but with Your desires, roughly penetrate me.
We are crazy, crazy actions and evening,
A little later you kiss my shoulders.
And I will innocently press myself so close to your chest,
Don't let me go, let me drown in Lust...
Came home, you met on the threshold.
The look is hard, incinerating to the holes,
He looked at me like a jeweler.
A little bit of fear won't hurt me,
because you're pushing, it's exciting.
One movement and you pressed me against the wall,
A little painful, uncomfortable to the back.
A hand at the throat, the other on the hip,
You are definitely the winner in this game.
And me! What am I?! You play without rules,
Again this only excites.
The breath is hot, not a word, just movements,
Looks more like it is an attack.
You're so jealous, but I'm going crazy.
I'm probably the only fool.
Of course, you are strong and very powerful,
Standing on the edge barefoot, you are so dangerous.
But you know how I like it this way,
I will squeeze all my liberties quickly into a fist.
I'm crazy, and you know it,
And the dress is lifted, you tear off the clothes,
We breathe and do not breathe, in unison,
The price of madness is at stake.
The movements are sharp, the wall has become a bed,
I remember and do not remember how I moaned.
You covered my hot mouth with your palm,
In your male hands my pulse is going to grow.
And the wild heart runs even faster,
We did not close the door behind us in the hallway.
You kill with your jealousy and strength,
but with Your desires, roughly penetrate me.
We are crazy, crazy actions and evening,
A little later you kiss my shoulders.
And I will innocently press myself so close to your chest,
Don't let me go, let me drown in Lust...
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Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 3:14pm
OMG this was super lustful. A kink spectacular
Go girl smashed clear out the park for a home run win
Love and light
Ron xxx
Go girl smashed clear out the park for a home run win
Love and light
Ron xxx
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 3:33pm
Hell yeah! I love an OMG in the morning!! And every other time of day too. ;) Especially when it's a kink spectacular. Because what says yes boss better than "Oh my GOD". Especially when I am up against the wall. You know so many deliverables to meet. "Smashed clear out of the park", love it and that you are on my team Ron. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
Kristina
This reads like the excerpt from a novel
Classic and classy erotica at its highest
I think what I enjoy most about your poems is how
You flesh out the connection within the man/woman dynamic
In its most carnal form
It's the mood swings and the cerebral back and forth
That I find most engaging
The penetration before the penetration
So to speak
Much respect
Naaj
This reads like the excerpt from a novel
Classic and classy erotica at its highest
I think what I enjoy most about your poems is how
You flesh out the connection within the man/woman dynamic
In its most carnal form
It's the mood swings and the cerebral back and forth
That I find most engaging
The penetration before the penetration
So to speak
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 3:37pm
Oh damn! an except from a novel, I love that! It seems crazy but I really would like to write a novel if I can get by my reservations and find the time. Classy erotica at it's highest!... you are just trying to shut me up now and leave me breathless. I see what you are doing. ;) I live for the man/woman dynamic in it's most carnal form. ;) Ah yes, we all know about mood swings when it comes to that dynamic. lol But the cerebral back and forth can be divine. Give me all of the penetration... :p
Re. You are the boss.
Anonymous
20th Jan 2023 3:28pm
Just happen to be on DU, when you penetrated my laptop screen (so to speak). You're in control of all this. The language. The scene. The vision. The lust which flows from your avaricious harbour will fell many a solitary sailor. More power to your wheel, me Captain :)
"He looked at me like a jeweler." Love this. There is something of a chandelier in your poetic swing; droplets, diamonds, treasure in the white lines. There is no glass ceiling on show here K.
"He looked at me like a jeweler." Love this. There is something of a chandelier in your poetic swing; droplets, diamonds, treasure in the white lines. There is no glass ceiling on show here K.
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 3:49pm
Well it's always great when you are roaming around the Underground. Haha, I can be submissive but I still like control damnit! lol So I love penetrating your screen with visions of lust from my turbulent waters * cough * in which the sailor will discover a brave new world. One that will swallow the passions of the most daring. Someone who is not afraid to venture so deep into the storm. Seizing that power and control as he ventures deeper risking it all for the most intense adventure.
Ah, I wondered if someone would be like what does that mean. lol So I am glad you understand. The jeweler is meticulous in his handling of the gem, even if she is uncut he knows her true beauty. He can see all the facets of her contours. He can cut her but makes her shine so brilliantly. You words shine too Rob.
Ah, I wondered if someone would be like what does that mean. lol So I am glad you understand. The jeweler is meticulous in his handling of the gem, even if she is uncut he knows her true beauty. He can see all the facets of her contours. He can cut her but makes her shine so brilliantly. You words shine too Rob.
Re. You are the boss.
Anonymous
20th Jan 2023 4:09pm
Oommmph...
Hot words as always dear
N the image turned me on.... aaaah.. it's tooooo sensuous...
I juz remembered a similar scene of my past relationship...
Hot words as always dear
N the image turned me on.... aaaah.. it's tooooo sensuous...
I juz remembered a similar scene of my past relationship...
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 4:21pm
Hey girl, always want to give you some hot scenes to occupy your sensuous mind (and body) and turn you on. ;) I like turning you on. lol And I love bringing back those kind of memories for you. Something to wrap the beautiful legs of your mind around and have you ready for more memories in the future. ;)
Re: Re. You are the boss.
Anonymous
20th Jan 2023 4:26pm
Many thanks dear ❤️
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Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 4:14pm
Really enjoyed the way you mesh external features (the placement in the room, the physical contact) with the internal. (feeling of being a fool, the way something is liked)
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 4:23pm
Oh yes, the external features are the first thing we see, and they can be so sensual, so exciting, such a turn on but then that physical contact just sends you entirely to a place of intense sensations. And the internal feelings they persist throughout, that lust and passion. So eager for you to feel all of those internal feelings while plunging deep inside. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 6:25pm
Picture has a 1960s Hitchcock feel.
Nothing like black and white to set up the power drive with sepia undercurrent.
Tied and reaching into wonderland, this is a control festival.
So much revealed about HIM and her.
But who's really calling the shots here and who is acting ?
Answers obvious in Kx world.
To be that jeweler and raw diamond manifesting into sparkle paradise...
BIG SIGNIFICANT LIKE
RL AWARD
Nothing like black and white to set up the power drive with sepia undercurrent.
Tied and reaching into wonderland, this is a control festival.
So much revealed about HIM and her.
But who's really calling the shots here and who is acting ?
Answers obvious in Kx world.
To be that jeweler and raw diamond manifesting into sparkle paradise...
BIG SIGNIFICANT LIKE
RL AWARD
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 7:04pm
Ooooooo Hitchcock, love it! That's an awesome feel... that scary ambiance, so thrilling and needing to just be taken. Oh yeah! black and white, no need for color; just total lust, control, and passion caught in the undercurrent of that power he has over me. Hands held overhead with a strong grip while the other hand searches for the wet depths of my desires. There is always so much revealed, how much effort to earn her submission. How much hubris is in his lust. Who is really calling the shots? That is a good question... You know she is calling for the shots, deep inside. Ah, are the answers so obvious. lol The jeweler truly appreciates his craft and can always see the raw potential to make her sparkle. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 9:08pm
Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 1:54pm
Oh my God! you didn't just say that... oh no, you didn't. lol I had to figure out what you meant damnit! I shouldn't have googled that. :p You should be blushing. You are going to pay for making that association Tim. lol But at least I got a good laugh out of it.
Re. You are the boss.
20th Jan 2023 11:35pm
Dear K,
Let me tell you something…if I had a boss like this working might not have been such a complete bore! Totally dig the lusty imagery of this piece. Cheers to work place consent! H🌷
Let me tell you something…if I had a boss like this working might not have been such a complete bore! Totally dig the lusty imagery of this piece. Cheers to work place consent! H🌷
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 1:59pm
I love everything you have to tell me Honoria. ;) Haha, oh yes! we all need some excitement at work don't we? ;) The kind of meetings that make you sweat. Sometimes the hardest assignments really are the best. Being bored is the worst, I absolutely hate that. Fortunately my work is full of chaos, craziness, and enough to keep me busy forever. :p Loving that you dig the imagery, I always want to pull you in with me. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 1:28am
Damn, girl. I’m sitting here all by my lonesome reading this. Getting me all hot.
I’ll be right back…
I’ll be right back…
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 2:01pm
Well, I absolutely love the thought of getting you all worked up Mary. ;) I can't help it. I know all about needing to take those kind of breaks. :p I hope you went out to find someone to maul, and to be mauled by. A girl has needs, so many needs. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 4:41am
Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 2:08pm
Nothing wrong with a bit of pain to go along with pleasure, it is one of the most intense sensations after all and I don't like limitations on feeling things. You know I love it when things are very hot DC. ;) Always putting off heat... Keep spreading your devilry around. That keeps it hot in here as well. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 6:55am
Ms KristinaX, I wish that was you and me exploring each other all day and night long. My mind is on fire for you. Keep on writing my smart strong sexy woman.
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 2:15pm
All day and all night is the best way to explore. Even getting sexy text messages at work really can build up the excitement until you see each other... Being late can really bring about the questions followed by some hot sex as 'punishment'. ;) I like setting minds on fire. lol As always, thank you for the encouragement, I love 'smart strong sexy woman' that's such a great compliment. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 12:53pm
I really enjoyed this hot read! So much great energy at that threshold.
I read it a second time, reading only the bolder words…and it was another great read. I read this early in the morning, and now it feels as if I’ll have to wait all day for you to get home from work…don’t be late!
I read it a second time, reading only the bolder words…and it was another great read. I read this early in the morning, and now it feels as if I’ll have to wait all day for you to get home from work…don’t be late!
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 2:26pm
So happy to keep things hot for you RPM1on1. Ah yes so much energy at the threshold waiting to punish for being late. ;) I try to make my formatting meaningful although I am very impatient with it so it makes me really happy to hear it was worthwhile and that you read it that way. The italics are that way as well. Well the wait will just build up the passion to the breaking point and the expression of that will be oh so forceful and hot indeed! The punishment for being late can be such a thrill. ;)
Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 2:07pm
Hot damn, girl! 🔥🔥 "he looked at me like a jeweler", what a great line... the hungry appraisal of her potential...
Love the power play here. HOT.
❤️k
Love the power play here. HOT.
❤️k
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
21st Jan 2023 2:36pm
I love getting a Hot damn, girl!! from you BT. ;) Oh yeah! that's the look for sure, hungry appraisal, that's perfect... definitely wanting to explore her potential and every facet, that incredible glistening shine that comes from the thrill and excitement of being appraised. :p There is always so much potential to open to make things shine. Definitely a power play going on. HOT like you... ;)
Re. You are the boss.
22nd Jan 2023 9:15pm
I am the BOSS
business trip this week
We'll be sharing a room
Economy is bad
Cost saving measure
I'll be instituting new policies also
Red eye to LaGuardia
Don't be late
business trip this week
We'll be sharing a room
Economy is bad
Cost saving measure
I'll be instituting new policies also
Red eye to LaGuardia
Don't be late
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
22nd Jan 2023 9:47pm
Are you now? ;) You know I am the BOSS. :p
Business trips can be really fun with the right company...
Sharing a room, of course. That's much more cost effective.
Usually it's just adjoining rooms.
What other new policies I wonder? Pretty sure I can imagine.
Red eye, I will definitely need some entertainment.
I am never late...
Thanks for the visit BOSS! :p
Business trips can be really fun with the right company...
Sharing a room, of course. That's much more cost effective.
Usually it's just adjoining rooms.
What other new policies I wonder? Pretty sure I can imagine.
Red eye, I will definitely need some entertainment.
I am never late...
Thanks for the visit BOSS! :p
Re: Re. You are the boss.
22nd Jan 2023 9:50pm
My records indicate you’re up for a promotion.
Plays your cards right and ….
Plays your cards right and ….
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
22nd Jan 2023 9:52pm
Re. You are the boss.
23rd Jan 2023 6:51pm
“He looked at me like a jeweler.” - Recognizing the hidden value, and figuring out how he will extract your gems for his and your display.
The naughty office tryst – an erotic concept. Both taking a risk but that turns you on even more.
The naughty office tryst – an erotic concept. Both taking a risk but that turns you on even more.
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
23rd Jan 2023 7:01pm
Ah yes! recognizing the full value of a gem is more than surface deep. He is wondering how he is going to polish that gem and really make it shine as brilliantly as possible. ;) There is nothing better than that sparks and twinkle in her eyes right?
The naughty office tryst is something I think everyone has had or desired at some point or every point. lol Such an erotic concept, we spend so much of our life at work and it's so damn exciting to take that risk, it definitely turns you on constantly. Always needing another fix in the conference room, the office, the parking structure, at lunch, where ever... But still it is definitely not without risk.
The naughty office tryst is something I think everyone has had or desired at some point or every point. lol Such an erotic concept, we spend so much of our life at work and it's so damn exciting to take that risk, it definitely turns you on constantly. Always needing another fix in the conference room, the office, the parking structure, at lunch, where ever... But still it is definitely not without risk.
Re. You are the boss.
25th Jan 2023 12:35pm
Omg! 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 ink spill I love it!! A little pain an pleasure very illicit an kinky!! Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 💖 ❤
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
25th Jan 2023 1:12pm
Hey there REMARKABLE, it's always great to see you. Absolutely amazing is what I want to be always for you. ;) Pain is a powerful sensation and combined with pleasure it can be truly explosive, for me at least. And I love kinky, trying new things, being new things... you name it. Thanks for the encouragement and blessings. It's been a rough weekend/week so far. Had to take my Mom to the emergency room on Friday and then lots to follow-up on after. So have not been so active here. :( But your comment lifts my spirits. Thank you!
Re. You are the boss.
25th Jan 2023 5:56pm
Your work place is awesome! Your boss is a little demanding but that was mentioned during the interviews. And then the budgets, your office wall as a bed. The benefits alone are worth it all. Hot and spicy as always! I confess, I love the kissing of the shoulders at the end of the evening.
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
25th Jan 2023 6:42pm
Agree, that shoulders line brings this one home after all that lust and orders.
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
25th Jan 2023 6:57pm
It's so important to love where you work and what you do. ;) Demanding is fine for me, I can handle the pressure; actually thrive in the hardest environments. Budgeting can be brutal but I love being up against the wall. So many benefits, that's what sold me on the position, all of the positions. :p Your visit is always hot and spicy, and I love seeing you. NG. Kissing of the shoulders is always so affectionate especially after some rough sex, and kissing behind or in the ear just drives me insane.
Re: Re. You are the boss.
25th Jan 2023 7:00pm
Well hey PS, oh yes some tender loving care is always nice, especially after being man-handled. ;) I know you have a soft side... shhhhh... I won't tell anyone. lol
Re. You are the boss.
29th Jan 2023 7:41am
Kristina, you always bring your A-game with these erotic lustful pieces. Not only do you paint a vivid picture but you emotionally draw us in.
That last line, f'n fire.
Awesome work boss.
That last line, f'n fire.
Awesome work boss.
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
29th Jan 2023 2:47pm
Always want to bring my A-game for you Wally and lust is something I know all to well. ;) I love painting pictures with it in your mind and especially emotionally drawing you in. I have been thinking about trying my hand at actual painting. I love art. I used to draw but it's been a long time now. Ah yes, the last line kind of sums things up doesn't it... ;) Oh that need in constant. I love it when you are the boss, but I can be bossy too. ;p
Re. You are the boss.
2nd Feb 2023 12:31pm
Wow this is hotter than my morning cup of coffee KristinaX hehe... great drop! :D
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Re: Re. You are the boss.
2nd Feb 2023 2:17pm
I do adore a cup of hot coffee in the morning but there are things I love more than that in the morning, afternoon, evening. ;) And I love heating things up for you MV, I want you to burn your tongue; is that bad? Well what can I say I love to torture and be tortured. I suppose I will always need and want a boss... Someone who knows what he wants and will take it. Okay, going to stop now... ;) Thanks for coming by to share a coffee with me in the morning. I love that!