deepundergroundpoetry.com
Majesty
it's your majesty
exuding in prominence
a story you tell
wizened thru patience
powerful and purposeful
your time is at hand
the legend of you
stalks the memory of man
etched in his passage
this ode is for you
sowed in a cheapened reserve
while the {wild} roam free
i apologize
for the zoos and circuses
and the mockery
as i write this rite
i know words won't make this right
but they're all i have
it's your majesty
that humbles this poet's soul
knowing you're owed more
than a poem
exuding in prominence
a story you tell
wizened thru patience
powerful and purposeful
your time is at hand
the legend of you
stalks the memory of man
etched in his passage
this ode is for you
sowed in a cheapened reserve
while the {wild} roam free
i apologize
for the zoos and circuses
and the mockery
as i write this rite
i know words won't make this right
but they're all i have
it's your majesty
that humbles this poet's soul
knowing you're owed more
than a poem
Published 5th Jan 2023
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 4
comments 2
reads 494
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
5th Jan 2023 7:29am
Bravo, Naajir! This tribute is awesome. We humans can be such cruel beasts, subjugating and humiliating the most noble of creatures. This passage is such a wonerfully poignant use of homophones,
"as i write this rite
i know words won't make this right"
"as i write this rite
i know words won't make this right"
5th Jan 2023 6:09pm
A beauty that took place on a razor blade of mortality and immortality...
A very cool, symmetrical pacing,
in both the words and form of the words...
Resonates from an epicenter...
Speaks to deep truths...
Truths that are mined from the depths of the veil...
A very cool, symmetrical pacing,
in both the words and form of the words...
Resonates from an epicenter...
Speaks to deep truths...
Truths that are mined from the depths of the veil...
