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Gypsy Christmas (Collab with KristinaX)
the way you move so mystically.
I can't seem to look away.
it's like I'm hypnotized;
stuck in a trance.
touching your thighs as we start to dance.
I don't usually do this,
I'm a devoted man.
but the pull is too great.
maybe I had too many drinks.
it is Christmas Eve after all.
if only I didn't lose my job the night before.
and my wife hadn't kicked me out.
then I wouldn't be here with you.
let me tell your fortune.
on the cards, or a shaking palm.
try to read my future too.
you only want to know it with me.
as I grind my hips against your throbbing desire.
I only do this with you, at least tonight.
it's just magic...
the pool of the moon, my gravity.
alcohol is just a lie.
your job was a lie too.
and your wife is dead in my eyes.
this is the only place for you now.
as you speak I listen.
simple banter,
but every word seems like big news.
laughing at all your jokes.
telling me "let's find a place more filthy."
we end up in an abandoned railway.
here we entertain the hobos and rats
as light snow falls from the sky.
you start removing my clothes.
I want to say no,
but only yes comes out my lips.
up and down you start to ride me.
as if you were just relieving an itch.
would be a lie if I said I didn't enjoy it.
with each stride you forget a little more.
there is only me,
the fulfillment of my desires.
finding my filthy place in your mind.
no longer following a set path.
the railway of your life now derailed.
my spell is so much stronger than her.
this curse I placed on your heart
beating you, inside of me too.
I love how you cannot say no.
thrilled by this ride into insanity.
this infernal itch for you to scratch
as my nails dig in even deeper.
I grip your body tight as I start to cum.
your moans echo through the yard.
flashes of memories start to reel in my head.
my first kiss, the fight that got me here,
and one of me in the future killing myself.
you whisper in my ear
"Merry Christmas.
now don't forget.
for this is your destiny if you fall astray again."
I waken to my wife beside me.
she looks as though we just had sex.
was this all just a dream?
perhaps, but I’ll heed what that gypsy said.
turning my wife over to give it to her once more.
I can't seem to look away.
it's like I'm hypnotized;
stuck in a trance.
touching your thighs as we start to dance.
I don't usually do this,
I'm a devoted man.
but the pull is too great.
maybe I had too many drinks.
it is Christmas Eve after all.
if only I didn't lose my job the night before.
and my wife hadn't kicked me out.
then I wouldn't be here with you.
let me tell your fortune.
on the cards, or a shaking palm.
try to read my future too.
you only want to know it with me.
as I grind my hips against your throbbing desire.
I only do this with you, at least tonight.
it's just magic...
the pool of the moon, my gravity.
alcohol is just a lie.
your job was a lie too.
and your wife is dead in my eyes.
this is the only place for you now.
as you speak I listen.
simple banter,
but every word seems like big news.
laughing at all your jokes.
telling me "let's find a place more filthy."
we end up in an abandoned railway.
here we entertain the hobos and rats
as light snow falls from the sky.
you start removing my clothes.
I want to say no,
but only yes comes out my lips.
up and down you start to ride me.
as if you were just relieving an itch.
would be a lie if I said I didn't enjoy it.
with each stride you forget a little more.
there is only me,
the fulfillment of my desires.
finding my filthy place in your mind.
no longer following a set path.
the railway of your life now derailed.
my spell is so much stronger than her.
this curse I placed on your heart
beating you, inside of me too.
I love how you cannot say no.
thrilled by this ride into insanity.
this infernal itch for you to scratch
as my nails dig in even deeper.
I grip your body tight as I start to cum.
your moans echo through the yard.
flashes of memories start to reel in my head.
my first kiss, the fight that got me here,
and one of me in the future killing myself.
you whisper in my ear
"Merry Christmas.
now don't forget.
for this is your destiny if you fall astray again."
I waken to my wife beside me.
she looks as though we just had sex.
was this all just a dream?
perhaps, but I’ll heed what that gypsy said.
turning my wife over to give it to her once more.
Published 24th Dec 2022
Author's Note
I want to say many thanks to KristinaX not for only doing this poem with me but for also being a great friend.
Hope you all have a very very merry Christmas. 😁
Hope you all have a very very merry Christmas. 😁
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24th Dec 2022 4:07am
24th Dec 2022 8:50am
I had a lot of fun writing this with KristinaX. She is such an awesome poet.
I'm glad you like the story we created.
We both thank you and appreciate the read. 😁
I'm glad you like the story we created.
We both thank you and appreciate the read. 😁
24th Dec 2022 8:34am
24th Dec 2022 8:56am
A dream, or was it? Haha.
We both thank you for the read. It is very much appreciated 😁
We both thank you for the read. It is very much appreciated 😁
24th Dec 2022 10:48am
KristinaX is da bomb
Once she's in your head, she's never leaving
I've written with her too
I know
You're quite a dude DC
This entry kicks ass
BIG LIKE
Once she's in your head, she's never leaving
I've written with her too
I know
You're quite a dude DC
This entry kicks ass
BIG LIKE
24th Dec 2022 11:41am
It is always great to find a poet that is down to make some kick ass poetry with you. Not many I know that can do better erotic also. Perfect partner for some naughty poems.
We both thank you. It is very much appreciated 😁
We both thank you. It is very much appreciated 😁
24th Dec 2022 1:54pm
26th Dec 2022 5:07am
For sure, it is a gift to work with KristinaX. She is such a great writer. And is always fun to work with her.
Thank you from us both. It is very much appreciated 😁
Thank you from us both. It is very much appreciated 😁
24th Dec 2022 2:13pm
Hey there DC, thank you so much for writing with me. It was a lot of fun and you are awesome. ;) I don't think I am the best at collaborations but sometimes they come easily, like this one. Your writing is passionate and from the heart which makes it so easy to get inspired by you. :)
You know you have to be careful with those wild gypsies, so sensual and seductive and so much magic between the thighs. And there is always something to be learned. Those lessons can be so enjoyable, but also very hard. ;) You definitely need to take them in deep. Okay, I am going to stop now. * innocent look * Perhaps the gypsy will need to return for a dark write. lol There is so much that can be done in a gypsy series.
Really appreciate the great comments guys and lovely lady. :) And yes a very very 🎄✨ Merry Christmas ✨🎄 to everyone. Find some ways to get 🔥 HOT 🔥 in this frigid cold we have going on. Love it.
You know you have to be careful with those wild gypsies, so sensual and seductive and so much magic between the thighs. And there is always something to be learned. Those lessons can be so enjoyable, but also very hard. ;) You definitely need to take them in deep. Okay, I am going to stop now. * innocent look * Perhaps the gypsy will need to return for a dark write. lol There is so much that can be done in a gypsy series.
Really appreciate the great comments guys and lovely lady. :) And yes a very very 🎄✨ Merry Christmas ✨🎄 to everyone. Find some ways to get 🔥 HOT 🔥 in this frigid cold we have going on. Love it.
26th Dec 2022 7:18am
You are also very awesome hehe. And I think you are pretty good with collaborations. The two we have done have gone well. I usually don't like to do collaborations, not that I don't love them but it's usually more work, so for me to want to do another one with you tells me you offer something special.
I think many people enjoyed our poem which makes it so worth it. Beyond that I love how it turned out. It reminds me a bit of a christmas carol. Well a dirty one haha. Yes, take that lesson deep haha.
I hope your Christmas was good. I look forward to hearing all about it, friend 😁
Oh, and many many thanks.
I think many people enjoyed our poem which makes it so worth it. Beyond that I love how it turned out. It reminds me a bit of a christmas carol. Well a dirty one haha. Yes, take that lesson deep haha.
I hope your Christmas was good. I look forward to hearing all about it, friend 😁
Oh, and many many thanks.
24th Dec 2022 2:45pm
Collabs can be very hit & miss, but to be fair, this is a resounding hit. Passionate slice of erotica, replete with humour and an engaging story. Romany hands will always wander. DU should be more like this, so kudos to you both. Enjoyed. Much. Rob
26th Dec 2022 7:21am
Collaborations can be hit or miss. It takes the right person I think to make something great.
We both thank you. Hope you had a nice Christmas.
We both thank you. Hope you had a nice Christmas.
24th Dec 2022 4:32pm
What a fabulous piece! Love the ending❤. You both certainly make a fantastic collab duo. 👍😊
26th Dec 2022 7:27am
I only work with the best 😉 hehe
I have been fortunate enough to be able to work with such great poets. KristinaX is a talented poet that can really bring the fire 🔥. Works very well for a piece like this I think.
We both thank you, friend. It is always a joy to see your lovely comments 😁
I have been fortunate enough to be able to work with such great poets. KristinaX is a talented poet that can really bring the fire 🔥. Works very well for a piece like this I think.
We both thank you, friend. It is always a joy to see your lovely comments 😁
25th Dec 2022 3:34am
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!! Nice 👌 👍 collaboration 👌 ♥ 👍 very brilliant 👏!! Excellent work both of you 👏!! Please keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏 happy holidays
26th Dec 2022 7:31am
Happy holidays to you as well. Maybe we will get to work together again.
Thank you so much for the read. We both appreciate it 😁
Thank you so much for the read. We both appreciate it 😁
25th Dec 2022 3:25pm
Hello DC xKx,
This is a great expression of time, joy, sentiments and sensuality mixed with sexuality and ultimate dream. I have no doubt that both are great writers and word print our of their deep emotions. Great read. Wish you very happy merry Christmas.
Love you,
KS
This is a great expression of time, joy, sentiments and sensuality mixed with sexuality and ultimate dream. I have no doubt that both are great writers and word print our of their deep emotions. Great read. Wish you very happy merry Christmas.
Love you,
KS
26th Dec 2022 7:36am
Hope you had a very marry Christmas as well.
We both thank you for the read 😁
We both thank you for the read 😁
26th Dec 2022 11:41am
27th Dec 2022 10:08am
Thanks, friend. Glad you enjoyed it 😁
The read is very much appreciated from us both.
The read is very much appreciated from us both.
