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I want what's not mine
You know me
You know how I operate
Direct
No bullshit
I take what's given
Sometimes I take what's not given
Hand in a cookie jar
Possibly in your panties
I gotta laugh
Low key gets you nowhere
As we say in the sales world
You gotta ask for the order
If that don't work
Lower your pants
Maybe
Just maybe
She will too....
You know how I operate
Direct
No bullshit
I take what's given
Sometimes I take what's not given
Hand in a cookie jar
Possibly in your panties
I gotta laugh
Low key gets you nowhere
As we say in the sales world
You gotta ask for the order
If that don't work
Lower your pants
Maybe
Just maybe
She will too....
Author's Note
I work on commission ....
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. I want what's not mine
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2022 5:01am
Heavy Duty like!
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23rd Dec 2022 9:00am
Re. I want what's not mine
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2022 5:57am
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Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 7:30am
Re: Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 9:02am
Re. I want what's not mine
Hell yes, just make sure you give her orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing. The heart wants what it wants.
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23rd Dec 2022 9:24am
Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 11:19am
Author's Note made me laugh out loud (rare thing for me). We call 'cookie jars', 'biscuit barrels' over here. You have to be careful sticking your hand in a barrel. God only knows what you may find. My New Year Resolution is to be more honest. Enjoyed.
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Re: Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 11:55am
Yeah, you never do know what you will find in the quim sauce.
Honesty is good. Although over time in my sales job I learned how to lie to protect. Because if told the real truth it's so ghastly it would actually be worse. In human relationships with friends, family, lovers the truth is appreciated. I respect your decision.....
Thx Rob
Honesty is good. Although over time in my sales job I learned how to lie to protect. Because if told the real truth it's so ghastly it would actually be worse. In human relationships with friends, family, lovers the truth is appreciated. I respect your decision.....
Thx Rob
Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 11:51am
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23rd Dec 2022 11:56am
Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 1:15pm
Nicely compose with realness it be that way sometimes that we want what we can't have for it's a natural feeling of the deepness that whispers in the things in the mind 🤔👍👊
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Re: Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 1:31pm
Things are so complicated. You want them to be simple but of course they never are. I really like your comment.
The depth of it made feel good.
Thank you Stoney, you see so much. That's a blessing.
Appreciate you
The depth of it made feel good.
Thank you Stoney, you see so much. That's a blessing.
Appreciate you
Re: Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 8:59pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and inside on my own thoughts for I truly appreciate it for we all have at least experience that moment of exchange between the mind and heart 🙏💯👍
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Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 2:34pm
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23rd Dec 2022 2:37pm
That would be the biggest commission bk
I'd be wiping my ass with twenties.....
I'd be wiping my ass with twenties.....
Re. I want what's not mine
23rd Dec 2022 11:54pm
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24th Dec 2022 00:07am
Re. I want what's not mine
27th Dec 2022 6:30pm
Gotta like the dominating stance on this and you know she’ll admit to the subjugation just as much.
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Re: Re. I want what's not mine
27th Dec 2022 7:15pm
Gotta go for it Wally
You only go around once and you'll need smiles and memories down the road...
Thx W
You only go around once and you'll need smiles and memories down the road...
Thx W
Re. I want what's not mine
27th Dec 2022 6:32pm
I do know how you operate.
Taking what's given... and more.
Hand plunging into the depths.
Not low key at all...
You have to take what you need.
Otherwise you get nowhere.
What is your order?
Maybe she will lift her skirt.
You have to work for commission.
But the payoff can be huge.
Taking what's given... and more.
Hand plunging into the depths.
Not low key at all...
You have to take what you need.
Otherwise you get nowhere.
What is your order?
Maybe she will lift her skirt.
You have to work for commission.
But the payoff can be huge.
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Re: Re. I want what's not mine
My payoff was HUGE a few minutes ago
Cough
Nevermind
Well you know ....
Between your comment and my orders there's pleasure to be had.
Lingerie babe, dark and revealing. See above
Make it happen I say
Any regrets ? there won't be any.
Order is in
How fast can you deliver?
Cough
Nevermind
Well you know ....
Between your comment and my orders there's pleasure to be had.
Lingerie babe, dark and revealing. See above
Make it happen I say
Any regrets ? there won't be any.
Order is in
How fast can you deliver?