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Do you know I'm talking about you ?
The mind is reverie
How it plays tricks
You've watched me from afar
Hoping to pull me into your lair
You'll deny it
Crushed leaves
Marks and markers
You led me to into your web
Desire woven into honeybee stickiness
Trapped I had no choice
I didn't want a choice
You put a spell on me
Years in the making now
The torture is hades in pink heaven
Glistening and shiny
I'm your prisoner
Caged hell
Do you know I'm talking about you
Could it be anyone else ?
How it plays tricks
You've watched me from afar
Hoping to pull me into your lair
You'll deny it
Crushed leaves
Marks and markers
You led me to into your web
Desire woven into honeybee stickiness
Trapped I had no choice
I didn't want a choice
You put a spell on me
Years in the making now
The torture is hades in pink heaven
Glistening and shiny
I'm your prisoner
Caged hell
Do you know I'm talking about you
Could it be anyone else ?
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Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 2:51am
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22nd Dec 2022 3:00am
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22nd Dec 2022 3:04am
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22nd Dec 2022 4:00am
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22nd Dec 2022 8:41am
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2022 3:07am
BIG FUCKING LIKE
Rattle that cage!
Rattle that cage!
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22nd Dec 2022 3:09am
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
You got a fan in buddhakitty. Keep on writing. You give her orgasmic bliss all night and all day long the next morning.
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22nd Dec 2022 3:43am
buddy kitty is a solid citizen
I'll drink an espresso with her one today
Thx Boss
I'll drink an espresso with her one today
Thx Boss
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 3:38am
I totally enjoyed this conversation with the way you expressed the love and understanding of just putting it out to let someone know how you feel about them from the heart and mind and soul 👍💯
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Re: Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 3:45am
Yeah Stoney
This is a talking poem
I showed it to her
She knows how I feel
But I like to keep telling her ...
Appreciate the comment
This is a talking poem
I showed it to her
She knows how I feel
But I like to keep telling her ...
Appreciate the comment
Re: Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 3:52am
Ain't nothing wrong with that statement as we should always as men's be honest about our true feelings and depth of our thoughts and emotions for it is a good thing to be able to show aside from the heart and soul and mind 👍🙏👊💯
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22nd Dec 2022 3:56am
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22nd Dec 2022 5:17pm
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 3:52am
Hey PS:)
Great confessional. Putting it out there!!
I commend you on this write and bravery amigo:)
Great confessional. Putting it out there!!
I commend you on this write and bravery amigo:)
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Re: Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 3:59am
I was born to confess Adelphina
More times than not it was honored and appreciated
It's all I know
Old school
New school
Any school
It's the only way
Thx hot sauce 💥💥
More times than not it was honored and appreciated
It's all I know
Old school
New school
Any school
It's the only way
Thx hot sauce 💥💥
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 4:37am
Re: Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 8:43am
Things get said and spoken with poetry....
I'm all over this mode of communication
Thank you kindly Brenda
🤠❤
I'm all over this mode of communication
Thank you kindly Brenda
🤠❤
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 12:20pm
Confessions seem to be in the water these days.
Oh, I know all about that sticky web... I dig the imagery, mixed in with your signature straight-shooting.
Stellar write. I hope she knows.
❤️k
Oh, I know all about that sticky web... I dig the imagery, mixed in with your signature straight-shooting.
Stellar write. I hope she knows.
❤️k
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22nd Dec 2022 1:15pm
Wrote itself
Direct speak from a wanna be cowboy
Yes, she knows
She loves it but won't say so but there's connection.
You know k, you know
Thx Red❤
🤠🤠
Direct speak from a wanna be cowboy
Yes, she knows
She loves it but won't say so but there's connection.
You know k, you know
Thx Red❤
🤠🤠
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2022 4:24pm
Sometimes it's best to take the bull by the proverbial er....horns. Honesty is the new 2023. These days I tend to deliver my postcard bombs in person. Can be less explosive. Good write PS.
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22nd Dec 2022 4:52pm
She’s a wild child with shockproof hormones needing constant attention. I’m never bored, no time.
Lock and load, when I make a delivery I give her the tip !!
Appreciate your comment Rob !
Lock and load, when I make a delivery I give her the tip !!
Appreciate your comment Rob !
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 6:15pm
Oh they know. This carries energy, specially in your unique style.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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22nd Dec 2022 6:18pm
Yes, they do know.
They put we men to shame.
We’re cavemen.
They smell better ..
Thx Wally
They put we men to shame.
We’re cavemen.
They smell better ..
Thx Wally
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 8:11pm
Dear PS,
So this is how the cowboy got lassoed! 😉 Big Dig my friend. Totally admire the sentiment and genuine feeling of gratitude and love for the muse in this piece.
H🌷
So this is how the cowboy got lassoed! 😉 Big Dig my friend. Totally admire the sentiment and genuine feeling of gratitude and love for the muse in this piece.
H🌷
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22nd Dec 2022 9:23pm
Dear H,
Yes, muse all the way.
It’s been a wild ride. We get along great and good writing is the win here. I’m totally gratified by her.
This is an awesome comment.
Thank you so much !!
🤠❤️
Yes, muse all the way.
It’s been a wild ride. We get along great and good writing is the win here. I’m totally gratified by her.
This is an awesome comment.
Thank you so much !!
🤠❤️
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
22nd Dec 2022 10:18pm
Of course. Because I know everything. lol
Oh how the mind plays tricks.
I see everything too.
Pulling you into my lair.
But I deny everything. ;)
So many marks. Black, red, white, and blue markers.
Spinning my webs... dripping.
And honey bee stickiness definitely attracts.
That's when I can spring my trap.
Oh yes! you have no choice.
Because a young witch is always casting spells.
(reminds me of Steve Miller Band - Abracadabra.)
Sensual, seductive ones.
Torture in a pink heaven. Oh yeah!
You are definitely stuck there...
A willing prisoner, always needing more.
Yeah, see I knew who.
And of course not. ;p
Love it!
Oh how the mind plays tricks.
I see everything too.
Pulling you into my lair.
But I deny everything. ;)
So many marks. Black, red, white, and blue markers.
Spinning my webs... dripping.
And honey bee stickiness definitely attracts.
That's when I can spring my trap.
Oh yes! you have no choice.
Because a young witch is always casting spells.
(reminds me of Steve Miller Band - Abracadabra.)
Sensual, seductive ones.
Torture in a pink heaven. Oh yeah!
You are definitely stuck there...
A willing prisoner, always needing more.
Yeah, see I knew who.
And of course not. ;p
Love it!
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Re: Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
23rd Dec 2022 8:58am
It's you
No, it's not you
It's the mind
Whose mind ?
I like the stickiness
Second skin
Your lair held together with Krazy glue
Wait, no that's not glue It's your fluids freeze dried
You like the cold but you bring ultra heat
So many miracles
I'll see you in the morning as always
Stats and coffee
A paradise
Not a dream
Mecca
No, it's not you
It's the mind
Whose mind ?
I like the stickiness
Second skin
Your lair held together with Krazy glue
Wait, no that's not glue It's your fluids freeze dried
You like the cold but you bring ultra heat
So many miracles
I'll see you in the morning as always
Stats and coffee
A paradise
Not a dream
Mecca
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
23rd Dec 2022 00:16am
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You know me
I put it out there
Writing in characters but my heart bleeds in a parallel universe
Appreciate the comment NG
Exposure.. yes
Thx
I put it out there
Writing in characters but my heart bleeds in a parallel universe
Appreciate the comment NG
Exposure.. yes
Thx
Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
23rd Dec 2022 7:28am
Love can be hell from afar. Been there. Hope it works out. And if not maybe we can get some cool painting out of it 😁
Great ink
Great ink
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Re: Re. Do you know I'm talking about you ?
23rd Dec 2022 8:50am
Yeah, new art is coming
Need that to keep my soul intact
Appreciate the nod on this one
Thx DC
Need that to keep my soul intact
Appreciate the nod on this one
Thx DC