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Insignificant moments
Never actively shunned
but not one of the cool crowd
too many Undesirable friends, perhaps
not invisible
just
irrelevant
*
Late night
always the last girl at the party
still drinking with the drunk guys…
I’m lucky it never went badly.
Unapproachable?
Uninteresting?
Just part of the wallpaper.
*
Arm’s length...
was it all intentional?
Someone once told me I intimidated her.
My ego fist-pumped the air
as my soul wept in solitude.
but not one of the cool crowd
too many Undesirable friends, perhaps
not invisible
just
irrelevant
*
Late night
always the last girl at the party
still drinking with the drunk guys…
I’m lucky it never went badly.
Unapproachable?
Uninteresting?
Just part of the wallpaper.
*
Arm’s length...
was it all intentional?
Someone once told me I intimidated her.
My ego fist-pumped the air
as my soul wept in solitude.
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Re. Insignificant moments
22nd Dec 2022 3:54pm
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23rd Dec 2022 12:16pm
Re. Insignificant moments
22nd Dec 2022 4:11pm
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23rd Dec 2022 12:17pm
Many thanks, Poet. I've definitely done my share of that sort of D&D.
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Re. Insignificant moments
22nd Dec 2022 4:36pm
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23rd Dec 2022 12:18pm
Re. Insignificant moments
22nd Dec 2022 5:37pm
Very real and touching. Many can relate to much of what you say and you said it so wonderfully.
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23rd Dec 2022 12:19pm
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22nd Dec 2022 8:03pm
Dear K,
You just wrote about my entire high school experience. Well, maybe not the third stanza. But everything else word for word.
I don’t know how that memory for you cropped up but this poem helped purge a lot of yuck for me and I’m grateful. H🌷
You just wrote about my entire high school experience. Well, maybe not the third stanza. But everything else word for word.
I don’t know how that memory for you cropped up but this poem helped purge a lot of yuck for me and I’m grateful. H🌷
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23rd Dec 2022 12:21pm
Dear H,
I can always count on you to get it. Ugh, high school.... that last stanza was much more recent, though. I'm still working on connecting the dots.
Glad you found this one helpful.
❤️k
I can always count on you to get it. Ugh, high school.... that last stanza was much more recent, though. I'm still working on connecting the dots.
Glad you found this one helpful.
❤️k
Re. Insignificant moments
22nd Dec 2022 11:08pm
It's moments like that that make it all worth the while.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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23rd Dec 2022 12:22pm
Re. Insignificant moments
23rd Dec 2022 7:19am
You seem pretty relevant to me haha.
A rather awesome poet as well.
Great ink 😁
A rather awesome poet as well.
Great ink 😁
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Re: Re. Insignificant moments
23rd Dec 2022 12:24pm
Thank you, that's very kind of you to say. There are times it doesn't feel that way.
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Re. Insignificant moments
23rd Dec 2022 9:44am
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23rd Dec 2022 12:25pm
Yes... see me/don't see me... they co-exist.
Thanks for the read & comment.
❤️k
Thanks for the read & comment.
❤️k
Re. Insignificant moments
29th Dec 2022 1:00am
Interesting.
Somebody once told me that I stay on the periphery of things. I was really annoyed at the time, but much later I came to see that he is right. It's where I put myself.
Somebody once told me that I stay on the periphery of things. I was really annoyed at the time, but much later I came to see that he is right. It's where I put myself.
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29th Dec 2022 12:00pm
Funny how we often don't like to hear the truth at first! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you found this relatable.
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Re. Insignificant moments
30th Dec 2022 6:23am
BT
Your incredible poems always dazzle me with your uncanny ''imperfect perfections''.
It is as if you ''accidentally on purpose'' are writing about me.
I ironically find that we are ''almost exactly'' the same in so many of your superb writes.
You are ''terribly good'' at purging my own self reflective memories.
I think you and I were soulmates in an alternate universe ,lol.
You my dear friend are as gifted as they come with your meaningful poetic offerings.
Thank you for sharing your ingenious submissions with this ''wise fool''.
You are an Inspiration!
Your incredible poems always dazzle me with your uncanny ''imperfect perfections''.
It is as if you ''accidentally on purpose'' are writing about me.
I ironically find that we are ''almost exactly'' the same in so many of your superb writes.
You are ''terribly good'' at purging my own self reflective memories.
I think you and I were soulmates in an alternate universe ,lol.
You my dear friend are as gifted as they come with your meaningful poetic offerings.
Thank you for sharing your ingenious submissions with this ''wise fool''.
You are an Inspiration!
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31st Dec 2022 4:00am
Wow, look at all that clever wordplay! You're pretty ingenious yourself, Sir Feet. Thank you so much for reading and leaving me such a lovely comment. You are an awesome supporter!
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2023 10:50pm
Love the ego fist bump!!!!!!!
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Re: Re. Insignificant moments
9th Jan 2023 2:03pm
Thanks! Stupid ego doesn't really know what's good for me though...
Cheers
❤️k
Cheers
❤️k
Re. Insignificant moments
9th Jan 2023 1:54am
How did I miss this one?! Maybe because now I'm reading it at a better time for me! It fits current events.
I really like it's message, and the introspective voice that you're sharing with us. So many of us can relate either a little or a lot!
Just remember, your writing power makes you a superhero to us.
Awesome write start to finish.
I really like it's message, and the introspective voice that you're sharing with us. So many of us can relate either a little or a lot!
Just remember, your writing power makes you a superhero to us.
Awesome write start to finish.
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9th Jan 2023 2:08pm
I post so infrequently these days, I'm sure it's easy to miss. That's ok. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Introspection seems to be great poetry-fodder for me, but sometimes I wonder if I ought to write about something other than myself! 🙄😆
Thank you for reading and for your very kind encouragement.
❤️k
Thank you for reading and for your very kind encouragement.
❤️k