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Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Listen up fuck bags
It’s that time of year again
No, not the fucking holidays
You’re supposed to be a writer
So write a comment
Just leaving an RL is not acceptable
Don’t tell me you’re too busy
Most of you live on here
Got it ?
Do it !
It’s that time of year again
No, not the fucking holidays
You’re supposed to be a writer
So write a comment
Just leaving an RL is not acceptable
Don’t tell me you’re too busy
Most of you live on here
Got it ?
Do it !
Author's Note
I get plenty of comments but some don’t.
You can really make someone’s day with a comment.
Even a BIG LIKE is cool !!
You can really make someone’s day with a comment.
Even a BIG LIKE is cool !!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Dec 2022 4:33pm
14th Dec 2022 4:32pm
You're so outspoken and real. Love it!!
Edited: I especially like the "fuck bags" comment.(^^)
Edited: I especially like the "fuck bags" comment.(^^)
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14th Dec 2022 4:39pm
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14th Dec 2022 4:32pm
Somethimg like ''hey, dude, do have a very fuckingly pleasant Christmas..............
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14th Dec 2022 4:40pm
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
14th Dec 2022 4:47pm
Dear PS,
Sir! Yes, sir! Message received and comment left! Sir!
Keeping us in our toes, excellent.
Big Like from your dutiful and favorite grunt.
H🌷
Sir! Yes, sir! Message received and comment left! Sir!
Keeping us in our toes, excellent.
Big Like from your dutiful and favorite grunt.
H🌷
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14th Dec 2022 5:36pm
Dear H,
You always leave comments !
It’s the others who need reminding.
Hey I take my job as sheriff seriously.
I was Mayor but they bounced me for being too rude. Imagine that ?
Thx for always leaving comments H
X
You always leave comments !
It’s the others who need reminding.
Hey I take my job as sheriff seriously.
I was Mayor but they bounced me for being too rude. Imagine that ?
Thx for always leaving comments H
X
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 5:01pm
Hey! Great point! Thank you! And nice to be here! And glad to hear you
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14th Dec 2022 5:37pm
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14th Dec 2022 5:04pm
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No doubt
Or shorts hairs as it may be.
I usually sub that part out.
You always behave Wally
Thanks
Or shorts hairs as it may be.
I usually sub that part out.
You always behave Wally
Thanks
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 5:18pm
BIG HEARD
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14th Dec 2022 5:39pm
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 5:42pm
Uh huh 😊
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Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
14th Dec 2022 8:22pm
understood, i did it, one way to bring focus on what some are trying to accomplish here
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14th Dec 2022 9:25pm
Poet's need inspiration to keep writing and the best way to get it is from comments from other writers. While the RL Avatar left is nice, it's nothing compared to comment...
Thx ABS
Thx ABS
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
14th Dec 2022 8:41pm
Definitely no wordless RLs from me. Friendly comments are easy, but I rarely give critique.
Has anyone ever told you you're a little bossy? 😉 Good job keeping all us fuckbags in line.
❤k
Has anyone ever told you you're a little bossy? 😉 Good job keeping all us fuckbags in line.
❤k
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14th Dec 2022 9:28pm
I AM BOSSY
I AM RESULT ORIENTED
The comment is common courtesy. You do very well in that departments...
Thx k 💓
I AM RESULT ORIENTED
The comment is common courtesy. You do very well in that departments...
Thx k 💓
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
14th Dec 2022 9:05pm
What to say, what to say...'felt you're right. A random RL or like is ok but just a simple "I like this about..." goes a long way. As for me, I like the truth. Well said.
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14th Dec 2022 9:30pm
I appreciate your comment AJ
The most simple comment goes a long way
Thanks for your support !!
The most simple comment goes a long way
Thanks for your support !!
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 9:57pm
What the hell is an RL anyway????
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14th Dec 2022 10:02pm
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2022 10:51pm
Well fuck. I has NO idea.
I add to my reading list because I want to go back and read again. I actually do that a lot. I do see your point now. Because I do that doesn't tell you that I actually like and absolutely 100% is deserved because as you said the majority of us ARE writers and we should! I am teachable after all.
Sincerely appreciate the lesson 🥰
I add to my reading list because I want to go back and read again. I actually do that a lot. I do see your point now. Because I do that doesn't tell you that I actually like and absolutely 100% is deserved because as you said the majority of us ARE writers and we should! I am teachable after all.
Sincerely appreciate the lesson 🥰
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14th Dec 2022 11:06pm
Some people here use their avatars as billboards. They put it on every poem and don't comment much. It's like a currency. Buying followers. I won't name names but you'll see it after awhile. Hence my poem. I tell it as I see it.
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14th Dec 2022 11:03pm
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14th Dec 2022 11:03pm
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14th Dec 2022 11:08pm
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Agreed. Just a few words about the poem. Even fuck you, it sucked, is better than nothing (at least that's honest).
This poem definitely didn't suck.
Big LIKE for the honesty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
This poem definitely didn't suck.
Big LIKE for the honesty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
15th Dec 2022 00:01am
That's the way I feel.
Stop being so lazy and give a little, it comes back in spades and relationships 😁
Stop being so lazy and give a little, it comes back in spades and relationships 😁
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
15th Dec 2022 00:09am
Heard, Sir.
I must admit I’m guilty. There are times where the poem hits home too much or I feel as if my comment doesn’t do the poet’s work justice, but I definitely get the point.
I wonder if I could be punished for all those times I’ve been guilty…
Yes, my mind still goes there.
I must admit I’m guilty. There are times where the poem hits home too much or I feel as if my comment doesn’t do the poet’s work justice, but I definitely get the point.
I wonder if I could be punished for all those times I’ve been guilty…
Yes, my mind still goes there.
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15th Dec 2022 00:13am
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15th Dec 2022 00:16am
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
You keep on telling like it is. Amen my Brother. Enjoyed the words "Fuck Bags". Keep on writing.
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15th Dec 2022 3:28am
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
15th Dec 2022 3:15am
🤣 My bad bro, I know you're pointing a finger towards me as well but you know I'm good for it. Some days I don't have words for your deep diving explorations. Am I good for a Pass, sometimes, atleast? 😅😬
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15th Dec 2022 3:44am
You get a pass PoH
One of the few
You came to the table with dessert
That means a lot
Thx Mister
One of the few
You came to the table with dessert
That means a lot
Thx Mister
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
15th Dec 2022 5:18am
For sure, it always makes my day.
BIG LIKE!
Even though it could of used more erotica haha
BIG LIKE!
Even though it could of used more erotica haha
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15th Dec 2022 11:23am
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
15th Dec 2022 1:47pm
Direct is the style in NYC isn't it. ;) Well I like direct. I feel like the Reading List is meant for things you think are so good you would read them again. But also for visibility to other people that you feel something is very good. In both cases, why not leave a comment to truly let that person know what you think. You know they will appreciate that the most even if it's a short one. I just wish I had more time to read and comment because there are so many wonderful reading list worthy pieces. A very meaningful message...
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Re: Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Direct
Slice and Dice
I say it as it is
Definitely a NYC approach
I can honestly say in my 9 years here I've never just left a RL and no comment. If I did you can count it on one hand.
The comment to us is everything. The RL is nice but I want to know what people think of my poems, not just a billboard ....
BIG THANKS KX
Appreciate You
Slice and Dice
I say it as it is
Definitely a NYC approach
I can honestly say in my 9 years here I've never just left a RL and no comment. If I did you can count it on one hand.
The comment to us is everything. The RL is nice but I want to know what people think of my poems, not just a billboard ....
BIG THANKS KX
Appreciate You
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15th Dec 2022 7:20pm
Appreciate the comment sight
Comments go a long way here to good relationships
Thanks
Comments go a long way here to good relationships
Thanks
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How's it going Ted ?
I see you're afraid to take comments on your poems.
What's up with that ?
I see you're afraid to take comments on your poems.
What's up with that ?
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16th Dec 2022 6:29pm
Has all the feels of Ted
Both of you seem to dislike DUP but keep coming back.
It's very curious
Both of you seem to dislike DUP but keep coming back.
It's very curious
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16th Dec 2022 6:41pm
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Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
15th Dec 2022 9:01pm
I am one of those who just does RL. Sometimes my comments cause more trouble than they solve. I RL poems because I enjoy reading them. But when I write a comment I often say something strange. So I stopped comenting in order not to offend with my bizzar comments. I comment when I am 100% sure I will not offend or cause anyone hassel. I am a very paranoid commenter.
Regards
james
Regards
james
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15th Dec 2022 9:11pm
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16th Dec 2022 4:03am
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16th Dec 2022 8:50am
No, you're more of a douche stick
It's still all about twang isn't it ?
You know what twang is right?
Cough, nevermind
Well people think I'm the Mayor here
But I'm more of the Sheriff
No just keep leaving comments and all will be OK
Ok ?
Now let's go drink some whiskey and laugh about the old days ....
It's still all about twang isn't it ?
You know what twang is right?
Cough, nevermind
Well people think I'm the Mayor here
But I'm more of the Sheriff
No just keep leaving comments and all will be OK
Ok ?
Now let's go drink some whiskey and laugh about the old days ....
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16th Dec 2022 9:35pm
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16th Dec 2022 11:18pm
I'm kinda known for direct speak.
Slice and dice when necessary....
Appreciate your comment
Thanks Nizana
Slice and dice when necessary....
Appreciate your comment
Thanks Nizana
Re. Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
17th Dec 2022 00:22am
Excellent! I try hard to comment on new members' stuff when able, and others too of course. I think swearing is hilarious, but might reserve sweary comments for my actual friends and acquaintances.
Have a bloodyfucking good day.
Have a bloodyfucking good day.
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17th Dec 2022 00:36am
Cursing is fun when done in the proper setting.
DUP is the setting.. Not all the time though.
A time and a place I think ......
Thx sister
DUP is the setting.. Not all the time though.
A time and a place I think ......
Thx sister
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17th Dec 2022 00:37am
I don't do it in conversation. I'm very immature and still snigger when other people do. There are some excellent British-specific swears.
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17th Dec 2022 00:41am
My wife is Brit but decades since she lived there.
When she gets pissed off at me she goes let's me have it.
Not pretty for me. Fortunately not to often
When she gets pissed off at me she goes let's me have it.
Not pretty for me. Fortunately not to often
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17th Dec 2022 00:42am
Ha ha! So you're familiar with (hmm...) wanker and bollocks then? Twatishly good words, those.
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