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Senryu
Waterfall
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Waterfall
love will sail away
under a trickling trail ~ of
earth shuddering tears
Written by
AspergerPoet56
Published
14th Dec 2022
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#heartbroken
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Re. Waterfall
Bluevelvete
- Edited 14th Dec 2022 7:40am
14th Dec 2022 7:35am
Ouch!
This is a true gut punch, my dear poet.
The pain of heartbreak and a love, lost is definitely earth shuddering /shattering, indeed.
What astute brevity and deep relatable feeling you created!
This was a helluva way to return.... with a bang!
It's beyond pleasurable to see a poem from you, C! Keep it up.... I missed you like mad!
🌹 💙 💙 💙 💙
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Re. Waterfall
averageJoe69
(Ron Summers)
14th Dec 2022 8:14am
Ain't that the truth brother
Love and light
Ron
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Mar 2025 1:50am
14th Dec 2022 9:12am
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Re. Waterfall
crimsin
(Unveiling)
14th Dec 2022 3:51pm
hello dearest poet this kind of broke my heart to read
very powerful indeed I'm happy to see you back ❤️
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brokentitanium
(k.)
14th Dec 2022 8:46pm
Oh, oof. You are so good at evoking emotion with few words. Nice to read you again.
❤k
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