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Girl next door...
Always sexual.
Everyone's kind.
Being led. Leading.
A lair of depravity.
Girl next door.
Inner whore.
I went there.
Everywhere.
Twisted paths.
Wet and leading.
Buy me a drink.
Drink me first.
Girl next door.
Penetrate me.
Open that door.
Call me a whore.
But what are you?
Everyone's kind.
Being led. Leading.
A lair of depravity.
Girl next door.
Inner whore.
I went there.
Everywhere.
Twisted paths.
Wet and leading.
Buy me a drink.
Drink me first.
Girl next door.
Penetrate me.
Open that door.
Call me a whore.
But what are you?
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Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:22pm
Re: Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:42pm
I am here to feed your imagination with all kinds of dirty tidbits bc. So I am very happy you savoured and enjoyed. But everyone loves the girl next door right? ;)
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:22pm
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8th Dec 2022 9:42pm
Well hey Lost Viking. I am so happy I could entice you over next door. Because it's no fun when you don't have someone to play with. ;p That's what neighbors are for right?
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:30pm
Insistent pulsing of pounding blood and lust. Innocence and desire haunting cocks and minds. Of course I want it, knowing you lead me to my doom with the obsession for your soul.... Love the sparseness of this, not a syllable more or less than required to complete the spell.
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8th Dec 2022 9:46pm
All that insistent pounding really gets the blood pulsing doesn't it? I know it gets my blood rushing for sure. So full of lust and ready for a visit. So innocently * cough * haunting cocks and minds. Ooooo I love doing that. Your doom lies in the blonde next door. That's an obsession you just can't ignore. Ah yes, this one did not need any extra syllables to be effective did it? I like to case all kinds of spells. ;)
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:36pm
A wonderful rhythm to recite the poem
Stirring up the details
Enjoy when we read it
Most amazing piece
Stirring up the details
Enjoy when we read it
Most amazing piece
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:55pm
I love stirring up the type of details that you enjoy. I want you following my rhythm... So I am glad you decided to come next door for a visit MP. 'Most amazing piece' I adore that. Keep thinking of the blonde next door. ;)
Re: Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:58pm
I don't care about skin color
The most important thing is the purity of feelings and the heart
The most important thing is the purity of feelings and the heart
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8th Dec 2022 10:00pm
Oh yes, I only say blonde because I am blonde my dear MP. I totally agree about purity of feelings and the heart.
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8th Dec 2022 10:05pm
It's settled, I'm going to spread it with chocolate or put your skin in the sun so that you can blush a little, lol, it will be delicious
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8th Dec 2022 10:21pm
I had a Moroccan mint dark chocolate bar that was divine. Chocolate is good for the skin and I am sure the hair too. ;) Haha, cooking me in the sun huh? Yes I would be blushing for sure. lol
Re: Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 10:27pm
The invisible sun is hotter than the visible sun
Guess how scorching it will be lol
Guess how scorching it will be lol
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 12:29pm
Hey, I am the one who catches things on fire damnit! lol That sounds pretty hot. :p
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:38pm
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8th Dec 2022 9:56pm
Haha, well it's really nice to meet you too. We could definitely find all kinds of naughty mischief to get into. The neighborhood would all be listening intently wishing they were involved... and wondering what the hell is going on over there. lol
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:39pm
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8th Dec 2022 9:59pm
I am here to tweek your interest Ron, that's what I want to do damnit! So I am glad being the girl next door works for that. You know always seductive and sexy... Pulling you in, in a neighborly kind of way. :p What could be more neighborly than * nevermind, naughty look *
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 9:57pm
hello Kristina I find you delectable I want to taste you
let our souls meet in the dark lust
as a cannibalistic carnality takes hold
sink my teeth into flesh nibbling at your wet
you are beauty you should be savored ❤️
let our souls meet in the dark lust
as a cannibalistic carnality takes hold
sink my teeth into flesh nibbling at your wet
you are beauty you should be savored ❤️
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8th Dec 2022 10:11pm
Oh my God! I love that.
That is so sexy, but what could be sexier than dark lust.
and cannibalistic carnality is so fun.
especially when it's very wet. ;)
Damn! you are really trying to shut me up now.
That's so lovely. <3
That is so sexy, but what could be sexier than dark lust.
and cannibalistic carnality is so fun.
especially when it's very wet. ;)
Damn! you are really trying to shut me up now.
That's so lovely. <3
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8th Dec 2022 10:09pm
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 10:17pm
Ah yes, the girl next door is always seductive right? ;) But sweet forbidden fruit always is. So ripe and ready to be explored in every way. Just need some help from a neighbor. :p Definitely not a whore, but it did rhyme with door. lol And I was thinking more of a super dirty mind ready to try anything. Ready to be devoured... But affection is always so lovely. It is definitely a gift for two. ;)
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 10:32pm
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8th Dec 2022 10:45pm
Hey there Stoney, you just couldn't resist the girl next door could you? Well I love that and it's so nice to see you. I love that you found it nicely done. I am here to please. ;)
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9th Dec 2022 1:04pm
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 10:48pm
It never ceases to amaze me that people think the girl next door is so innocent, or oblivious to lust. She acts so coy, makes them think they are conquering something forbidden, when really it's all part of her devious plan...
Oops, did I just give away all our secrets? 😉
Delicious write, girlfriend....
❤k
Oops, did I just give away all our secrets? 😉
Delicious write, girlfriend....
❤k
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 11:19pm
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Yes, you can't give away our secrets like that. lol They are supposed to think we are so innocent. But if they could see into our minds then they would be completely shocked by the level of depravity. :p And probably scared too. lol But conquering the innocent coy girl next door, oh how much fun that is, even if it's part of the devious plan. Well you got me all worked up again just thinking about it. :p 💖
Re. Girl next door...
8th Dec 2022 11:52pm
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9th Dec 2022 00:16am
Well it is nice to meet you man whore. The girl next door is definitely your type. Well everyone's type really right? But I thought you would like this one. ;) It's your kind of depravity and sexual deviance... I am sure you love getting into the 'innocent' girl next door. :p Love the BIG LIKE. And your comment sounds a bit familiar. lol
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9th Dec 2022 2:19am
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9th Dec 2022 12:26pm
Girl next door escort service sending her right away. ;)
Looks good on top of anyone. :p
Looks good on top of anyone. :p
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 2:23am
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9th Dec 2022 12:27pm
Yes, I am definitely the girl next door Francisco. The girl next door is full of all kinds of intense dirty desires. She is always in need of someone to help her fulfill those. ;) Just gets crazier and hornier every day. lol
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10th Dec 2022 1:47am
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 3:03am
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9th Dec 2022 12:27pm
ABS you whore. ;) Still I am really happy you decided to visit the girl next door and say hello. I hope you are having great holidays so far and are ready for Christmas. I cannot believe it is here almost already.
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 3:44am
Dearest, Kristina
You are a consumate temptress. And versatile, "Everyone's kind." I'm still pondering the last question. Brava❣🌹
You are a consumate temptress. And versatile, "Everyone's kind." I'm still pondering the last question. Brava❣🌹
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 12:27pm
I am here to tempt you my dear GW. ;) I just cannot help it. lol 'Everyone's kind' haha I love that. You have no idea what you are getting into with me though. :p Definitely not something everyone can handle. Ah, the last question is a very important one. I am always curious of the answer...
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 5:02am
Your poetry is such fire. Everyone wants the girl next door 😁
Wonderful, friend.
Wonderful, friend.
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 12:28pm
Haha, 'is such fire' I love that... But I have been called a little arsonist because I do love catching things on fire. :p What's not to love about the girl next door. Always sexy and cute, horny as hell and looking for some fun. ;)
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9th Dec 2022 12:43pm
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9th Dec 2022 12:47pm
Haha, so true... ;)
🔥 Someone said it here but I forget who it was, sad face... 🔥
🔥 Someone said it here but I forget who it was, sad face... 🔥
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 5:09am
Dear K,
Yes. The proverbial girl next door. Sweet and sexy. With a whole lot of bite and sass. You know, I’m sure this piece is meant for another direction but for me, it reinforced how we can willfully conjure ideas about someone without knowing them. Project things that aren’t anywhere near the truth but how we perceive someone. unfair for sure. More importantly where did you find my bikini? I’ve been looking for that for ages ! 👙
Totally dig the multiple layers in this write. H🌷
Yes. The proverbial girl next door. Sweet and sexy. With a whole lot of bite and sass. You know, I’m sure this piece is meant for another direction but for me, it reinforced how we can willfully conjure ideas about someone without knowing them. Project things that aren’t anywhere near the truth but how we perceive someone. unfair for sure. More importantly where did you find my bikini? I’ve been looking for that for ages ! 👙
Totally dig the multiple layers in this write. H🌷
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9th Dec 2022 12:36pm
Ah I can tell you are definitely the girl next door Honoria. Sweet and sexy with a lot of bite and sass. ;) Although it was meant to add some fun after my last one which was quite heavy I definitely appreciate that interpretation. So often people make up their mind about someone before they know them based on the most surface observations. It's quite easy to 'think' things about someone that are completely untrue in reality. It seems there are so many reasons people do that but it's definitely unfair. Found it in the closet, it's a nice one for sure. Your color. I like that you chose to read below the surface. Bikini emoji lol... never seen that.
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 8:36am
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9th Dec 2022 12:42pm
Hey there Regina, it's good to see you again. I love that you found it sexy, you look like you could be the sexy girl next door. ;) I hope you are having great holidays so far and enjoying the underground so far.
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 11:27am
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9th Dec 2022 12:44pm
Hey there tux, can I call you tux? Ah, everyone would like to know the girl next door and she wants to get to know everyone. ;) I am glad to meet you and welcome to DUP. I hope you like it here and glad you liked the piece.
Re: Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 12:46pm
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9th Dec 2022 12:48pm
haha, such an easy one.. what shall I call you. I will stick with tux for now. :p
Re. Girl next door...
9th Dec 2022 1:46pm
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9th Dec 2022 2:08pm
You can be a real ass, but it's cute... lol (joking, maybe) Dork face, I love it! I am glad you stopped by to see the girl next door jigg... And you know how much I love burning things. Haha, not sure what to make of that red frowny face; did you get burned by the flames. :p
Re. Girl next door...
My wacky word association. I had a friend, happened to have blonde hair. One of her favorite books was The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo. That animal though mythical just seems to fit. the song that comes to mind is "Burning Down The House".
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12th Dec 2022 2:02pm
Wacky word association is always fun my dear Jazz. ;) A blonde friend is always fun to have. :p Ah yes, that's a great book, better than the movie. I definitely get that song choice. That's perfect... Definitely burning down the house. I like catching things on fire. ;) I can think of so many ways to burn down the house... mmmmmm...
Re. Girl next door...
10th Dec 2022 12:57pm
I'm not a whore, more of a slag really, haha. 🤣 Interesting write with an interactive feel.
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
12th Dec 2022 2:07pm
Haha, yeah I can see that... you slag you... :p Whore gave me a bit of rhyme damnit! ;) Interactive, I love that. Interactive is awesome. That's how I get you to come visit the girl next door down here underground. Keeping it fun and interactive. And a lot of variety. :p
Re. Girl next door...
12th Dec 2022 00:15am
Every man's (and many women's) fantasy. Be on the look out for those peering through their windows. They are thirsty as well.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
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12th Dec 2022 2:11pm
It's always great to have fantasies and even better to live them. ;) Many women's fantasy too. oooo yes, you just put images in my mind there too. lol ;) Like I need any more distractions. Oh boy, peeping Tom's (or Pam's) lol I might have to write something about that. They are always thirsty. Perhaps attracted by my ... shall we say wetness. lol * nevermind, innocent look *
Re. Girl next door...
16th Dec 2022 2:08pm
She kind of looks like you.
Squeezing the goods and making we mortal men drool.
What else is new ?
My girl next door looks a little like her too.
Her cop boyfriend keeps me a stranger ...
Squeezing the goods and making we mortal men drool.
What else is new ?
My girl next door looks a little like her too.
Her cop boyfriend keeps me a stranger ...
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16th Dec 2022 2:20pm
Squeezing the goods and making mortal men drool is so fun. ;) I love the lust and desire, to incite that passionate masculinity that just wants to take you so badly. mmmmmm.... Haha, yes I guess that's not new is it. But it always feels new with each new person you tempt. ;) Ah yes, you better be careful with a cop boyfriend. You could get into a lot more trouble than you anticipated. No doubt she is lots of trouble anyway. lol
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16th Dec 2022 2:22pm
Sometimes I hear the click of the handcuffs through the wall ....
Fellow travelers
Fellow travelers
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22nd Dec 2022 7:49pm
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Re: Re. Girl next door...
22nd Dec 2022 9:02pm
Sure does... Sounds like you may have snuck out a few times huh? And oh yes, her split personality. So sweet but so incredibly horny. ;) Yeah, you know what I am talking about...
Oh hell yeah! went there... Don't need a peeping Tom. Need someone who is ready to come through that window and meet up at midnight. Going to need to cover the mouth tight that's for sure to try and keep the noise down.
I love fun and sensual, and that you decided to come next door to visit me rac. It's nice to see you back around the neighborhood.
Oh hell yeah! went there... Don't need a peeping Tom. Need someone who is ready to come through that window and meet up at midnight. Going to need to cover the mouth tight that's for sure to try and keep the noise down.
I love fun and sensual, and that you decided to come next door to visit me rac. It's nice to see you back around the neighborhood.