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Bodies Are Quite Enough
“There are days so good, I almost believe in a God.” Ann Hood
He tastes my lips
as if remembering.
His tongue plays at the edges
of my mouth before a
deeper wishing comes over him.
He slides in as if he might
discover my soul.
I smile around his tongue
at my lack of belief in souls.
For me, bodies are quite enough.
He tastes my lips
as if remembering.
His tongue plays at the edges
of my mouth before a
deeper wishing comes over him.
He slides in as if he might
discover my soul.
I smile around his tongue
at my lack of belief in souls.
For me, bodies are quite enough.
Published 8th Dec 2022
Author's Note
Thoughts I had as a man brought his love to me recently.
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8th Dec 2022 2:07pm
Writing a pleasure to read
Smooth style for excitement
Thank you for enjoying your Writing
Smooth style for excitement
Thank you for enjoying your Writing
8th Dec 2022 2:11pm
No one can be outspoken as bodies do, shooting straight to the goal.but,we have to spice our love with sweet words like a strawberry topped pie; though...
Nice short and direct.
Reads as both sizzling and mystical:
He slides in as if he might
discover my soul.
D.H. Lawrence's sexually explicit writes such as Lady Chatterley's Lover apparently arose out his stated belief the body spoke more honestly than the soul. Made him a daring writer for his time.
He slides in as if he might
discover my soul.
D.H. Lawrence's sexually explicit writes such as Lady Chatterley's Lover apparently arose out his stated belief the body spoke more honestly than the soul. Made him a daring writer for his time.
Anonymous
8th Dec 2022 3:27pm
This is very interesting and insightful.
This gives me much to ponder.
This gives me much to ponder.
8th Dec 2022 5:57pm
