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Turning Him Into Dust
She waited until after they
had sex to tell him she had found
someone new, then asked if he could
get it up again for round two.
He got dressed and left.
She laid back and laughed.
You don't just break a heart you stomp it.
had sex to tell him she had found
someone new, then asked if he could
get it up again for round two.
He got dressed and left.
She laid back and laughed.
You don't just break a heart you stomp it.
Written by
nikkimoe
Published 5th Dec 2022
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Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 00:32am
Dear N,
Ouch, yet I love her chutzpah!
I adore your style. It’s direct, to the point and suffers no fools. Absolutely awesome. H🌷
Ouch, yet I love her chutzpah!
I adore your style. It’s direct, to the point and suffers no fools. Absolutely awesome. H🌷
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Re: Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 00:37am
I try to imagine moments, seconds of a life.
I appreciate the compliment , Honoria.
I appreciate the compliment , Honoria.
Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 00:37am
Oh Lordy - hahaha
What a punch to the groin! Ouch.
No wonder he got dressed and left.
Please tell me she lit a cigarette as he was dressing.
Love the pic - I keep looking at all of the detail in it.
So much to take in.
What a punch to the groin! Ouch.
No wonder he got dressed and left.
Please tell me she lit a cigarette as he was dressing.
Love the pic - I keep looking at all of the detail in it.
So much to take in.
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Re: Re. Turning Him Into Dust
She definitely smoked a Misty 100.
Thank you. I used an app on a picture that i took, of bleeding lights in a parking lot.
Thank you. I used an app on a picture that i took, of bleeding lights in a parking lot.
Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 1:37am
Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 6:27am
Vicious Nikki...
One thing...
The same measures we use with others
will be used with us...
Just something to consider...
I support you regardless...
(I think about that in regard to my conduct is all...
It's complicated because...
People already use those measures with us,
to begin with...
I think I typically turn people to dust, also...
But maybe in a different way,
one, that is less likely to bring on bad karma...)
One thing...
The same measures we use with others
will be used with us...
Just something to consider...
I support you regardless...
(I think about that in regard to my conduct is all...
It's complicated because...
People already use those measures with us,
to begin with...
I think I typically turn people to dust, also...
But maybe in a different way,
one, that is less likely to bring on bad karma...)
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Re: Re. Turning Him Into Dust
Maybe it was his Karma.
Karma can be anyone at anytime for a bevy of reasons.
Karma can be anyone at anytime for a bevy of reasons.
Re: Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 2:32pm
Totally complex for shore...
I find these sorts of labyrinths,
interesting to explore...
Within myself...
I...
Only said that because...
I believe you deserve Real Love...
Sincerely...
I find these sorts of labyrinths,
interesting to explore...
Within myself...
I...
Only said that because...
I believe you deserve Real Love...
Sincerely...
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Re: Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 3:43pm
Not everything I write is from experience. It's imagination. I imagine scenarios.
I have a son and pets so I have love. I do not need a significant other. I may want one from time to time but I don't NEED one.
Real love. What is real?
I have a son and pets so I have love. I do not need a significant other. I may want one from time to time but I don't NEED one.
Real love. What is real?
Re: Re. Turning Him Into Dust
5th Dec 2022 11:26pm
Yes...
I do understand that...
I thought I saw in the comments,
whilst speed reading...
That is was, in this instance,
from experience...
Umm...
I still do think not that you deserve "real love"
(You and your terminologies... :p joking)
This is what I think...
Ladies who write poetry are the
highest form of beauty...
And...
Being the highest form of beauty,
should have beauty in every form...
And what for is there
that can compare to this thing
that some people are
calling:
Love.
Love...
I think that love comes
in many forms...
And as we evolve,
our receptivities evolve...
If you dont need a SO...
That is power...
To me...
Most people do...
I dont (I plan to die and maybe never be discovered... :p)
But yes...
That is power...
I've actually been thinking a lot about love lately...
There were times, in my life,
where I thought...
"Maybe I could be good for someone..."
I...
Am not shore about that...
I smoke ganja 24/7...
Only go out at night...
Don't have a drivers license...
Or a job...
I write all the time...
I really don't like to talk all that much...
What else...
I'm crazy... :p
So there's that...
What is real...
Someone who would die
for you
&
never lie to you... :p
And oh so much more... :)))
Or so I have heard... :p
I do understand that...
I thought I saw in the comments,
whilst speed reading...
That is was, in this instance,
from experience...
Umm...
I still do think not that you deserve "real love"
(You and your terminologies... :p joking)
This is what I think...
Ladies who write poetry are the
highest form of beauty...
And...
Being the highest form of beauty,
should have beauty in every form...
And what for is there
that can compare to this thing
that some people are
calling:
Love.
Love...
I think that love comes
in many forms...
And as we evolve,
our receptivities evolve...
If you dont need a SO...
That is power...
To me...
Most people do...
I dont (I plan to die and maybe never be discovered... :p)
But yes...
That is power...
I've actually been thinking a lot about love lately...
There were times, in my life,
where I thought...
"Maybe I could be good for someone..."
I...
Am not shore about that...
I smoke ganja 24/7...
Only go out at night...
Don't have a drivers license...
Or a job...
I write all the time...
I really don't like to talk all that much...
What else...
I'm crazy... :p
So there's that...
What is real...
Someone who would die
for you
&
never lie to you... :p
And oh so much more... :)))
Or so I have heard... :p
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Re. Turning Him Into Dust
6th Dec 2022 00:53am
Re. Turning Him Into Dust
9th Dec 2022 6:44pm
Re. Turning Him Into Dust
Anonymous
18th Dec 2022 6:22pm
Bam!
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