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Slurping It Off The Spoon
She emptied her soul
into a bowl and watched him
eat it like cereal,
consuming every last drop
he couldn't stop until she,
was nothing more.
into a bowl and watched him
eat it like cereal,
consuming every last drop
he couldn't stop until she,
was nothing more.
Published 1st Dec 2022
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1st Dec 2022 5:47am
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1st Dec 2022 8:19pm
Pouring ones soul into a bowl to be consumed ... Epic ... Love the pic ... Bless and love ...
1st Dec 2022 9:15pm
Haha forget the relationships, this poem triggers my misophonia!!
Good job, though. Poetry doesn't have to make us feel comfortable.
Good job, though. Poetry doesn't have to make us feel comfortable.
4th Dec 2022 11:14am
Dear N,
Oh, how well you depict losing oneself in and for the sake of another. For me, Little by little or the entire bowl of cereal, gone in a flash. I love the picture in support of how fractured we can become. Fascinating and brilliant.
H🌷
Oh, how well you depict losing oneself in and for the sake of another. For me, Little by little or the entire bowl of cereal, gone in a flash. I love the picture in support of how fractured we can become. Fascinating and brilliant.
H🌷
7th Dec 2022 7:53pm
