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breathe
find me in my solemn hours when I am most present
hurt has called upon me from the universes where I was wandering
I come back in need's regret
my son is fighting for his life
I will not relent I stand with him
warring the angels and demons who would collect him
he's not ready yet
so if you would allow a moment to breathe
this mother requests a favor
if needs be take my son home
suffer the doubt and welcome him in
I need to hear it from your mouth
it's time
weeps time, his life too short
I blame myself
eternal desire to see him go free
on the wings of angels he be
fighting dragons unseen
Author's Note
my son just turned thirty five he has liver cancer he is in icu right now in a medically induced coma...if I check out mentally and I hope I don't that's why....
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3rd Dec 2022 8:53pm
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4th Dec 2022 00:36am
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4th Dec 2022 00:39am
I want him to get better but if that's not going to happen I don't want him to suffer...thank you beautiful Summer for the prayers 💕
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2022 1:58am
Go. Be with your Son.
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4th Dec 2022 1:59am
he's in ICU and only allowed one visitor a day today his child's mother is with him... thank you beautiful ❤️
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2022 2:37am
Be with him in You always
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4th Dec 2022 2:46am
I am he is my first born son I'm transported to when he was born...he's off the breathing tube and breathing on his own now ❤️
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2022 4:20am
He is beautiful
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4th Dec 2022 11:11pm
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9th Dec 2022 3:46pm
Brenda, I'm sorry he's going through this. I can't begin to imagine the weight this must also be on you. My thoughts are with you.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings.
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9th Dec 2022 4:00pm
good morning Wally he's still in the hospital but he is better than he was thank you my friend 💕
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a side note the day after I wrote this he was taken off the breathing tube and was breathing on his own again ❤️