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The Burn of Wanting You
Feel the burn of wanting you
The burn hurts
But ..
Something in that pain keeps me whole
The burn hurts
But ..
Something in that pain keeps me whole
Published 1st Dec 2022
Author's Note
Gouache Painting 13 x 17 on paper by Poetspeak
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1st Dec 2022 8:19pm
1st Dec 2022 8:20pm
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1st Dec 2022 9:07pm
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2nd Dec 2022 3:23am
Pain is part of the circle of things. So it does keep you whole.
Besides its one of the pains that we take on willingly, huh.
Besides its one of the pains that we take on willingly, huh.
2nd Dec 2022 3:26am
Part of the gig Styx.
We walk the tightrope knowing we might fall, but hoping it will be that other guy. I’ll take the burn 🔥
Thx Mister
We walk the tightrope knowing we might fall, but hoping it will be that other guy. I’ll take the burn 🔥
Thx Mister
2nd Dec 2022 3:33am
Tightrope is all you, amigo! I'm too damn clumsy to even try! And I know that tightrope is a metaphor here. I'm clumsy completely. Lol
Dude, you have more sex in your poems that I have sense. My money is in on you son. No time for self deprecation. The beer is is cold and somewhere she’s keeping your bed warm …
Cowboy speak 🗣
Cowboy speak 🗣
2nd Dec 2022 3:48am
Noop. I'm on a self imposed break. That tightrope could be a noose just as easy, if I ain't careful. Women are devious! Lol
2nd Dec 2022 3:52am
They own us, no doubt.
Pretty panties and sweet smelling perfume.
We be cooked
Pretty panties and sweet smelling perfume.
We be cooked
2nd Dec 2022 7:24am
Love is walking through hell to get too heaven.
Another great painting.
Awesome job 😁
Another great painting.
Awesome job 😁
2nd Dec 2022 11:11am
2nd Dec 2022 11:22am
Love the intensity of both works.
In the painting I see a voluptuous woman laying on her back with her knees bent and legs crossed, and of course, a breast. For a moment I wondered what people would think if this was the image on your business card and I chuckled.
In the painting I see a voluptuous woman laying on her back with her knees bent and legs crossed, and of course, a breast. For a moment I wondered what people would think if this was the image on your business card and I chuckled.
2nd Dec 2022 11:28am
This was kind of a breakthrough painting for me Mary
I went through a period trying new techniques. I'm still in the experimental phase. So yeah, it might be good on my business card.
I like the breast part. You know I'm wired that way.
Hmm, what's on your card I wonder ???
Thx woman
I went through a period trying new techniques. I'm still in the experimental phase. So yeah, it might be good on my business card.
I like the breast part. You know I'm wired that way.
Hmm, what's on your card I wonder ???
Thx woman
2nd Dec 2022 1:49pm
2nd Dec 2022 1:57pm
Yes, atonement is a good way to look at this...
Youve taken up residence in my mind Tim
Thx for the visit
Youve taken up residence in my mind Tim
Thx for the visit
2nd Dec 2022 4:07pm
Whisper it loudly PS, but you really have this mixed media business licked. Draws the mind to everything feral and intimate. It's good stuff (in my world, 'good stuff' stands as high artistic praise).
2nd Dec 2022 4:30pm
No graphic fuck and suck here Rob
Just stating facts
Often you have hide that desire
Mixed Media gives an opportunity
Across the universe
Connecting with feeling's real worlds won't allow
I dive in
My paintings, my poems, they define me
I'm on a journey
Lone rider
Searching....
Just stating facts
Often you have hide that desire
Mixed Media gives an opportunity
Across the universe
Connecting with feeling's real worlds won't allow
I dive in
My paintings, my poems, they define me
I'm on a journey
Lone rider
Searching....
2nd Dec 2022 10:51pm
Something in that pain gives you hope, right? You never knew I could be so philosophical, did you? Lol, it usually helps after a few lagers & wine. I was talking about me, not you. You're always so sober in thought, even after however many whiskeys you have consumed, I'm sure, haha!
2nd Dec 2022 11:55pm
Yes Billy
Pain gives you something to work on, make you try harder to win her heart and then some ... last night was whiskey night, tonight who knows
Appreciate your comments, you make me smile
Your comments are from your soul brother..
Thx
Pain gives you something to work on, make you try harder to win her heart and then some ... last night was whiskey night, tonight who knows
Appreciate your comments, you make me smile
Your comments are from your soul brother..
Thx
3rd Dec 2022 00:34am
hello dearest Poet this is so vibrant and powerful
like the expression of feeling itself..
I love it ❤️
like the expression of feeling itself..
I love it ❤️
3rd Dec 2022 1:33am
Good Evening Brenda,
I'm just a damn romantic under all that bluster, what can I say ??
Thx
❤❤
I'm just a damn romantic under all that bluster, what can I say ??
Thx
❤❤
4th Dec 2022 3:43pm
It's very cold and miserable in England. The picture is like a summer day. Hot and long.
Regards
james
Regards
james
4th Dec 2022 3:54pm
You can feel the heat.
I like that.
Winter is just beginning here. I wonder how that will affect my visuals.
Appreciate your support always James
Bundle up
I like that.
Winter is just beginning here. I wonder how that will affect my visuals.
Appreciate your support always James
Bundle up
Anonymous
6th Dec 2022 2:31am
(may i touch said he
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she
........I love the burn too
how much said she
a lot said he)
why not said she
........I love the burn too
6th Dec 2022 2:34am
Anonymous
6th Dec 2022 2:36am
Never enough e.e.
6th Dec 2022 2:38am
Anonymous
7th Dec 2022 6:26pm
Brevity at its best! Powerful poem and what a splendid painting. Love the words n the colours 💕💕💕
7th Dec 2022 7:04pm
They are easy to write when truth is at my center !
Thx on the painting, I’ve had some nice comments on it including yours. I learned something doing that one.
Stay tuned, new art coming soon I hope
Thx on the painting, I’ve had some nice comments on it including yours. I learned something doing that one.
Stay tuned, new art coming soon I hope
7th Dec 2022 7:54pm
It's like a double edged sword ain't it. And it gives us inspiration.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
7th Dec 2022 7:59pm
9th Dec 2022 2:35pm
I love the painting... those colors, like smearing blood.
Passionate blood makes for great paintings.
And that burn, loving how much it hurts.
The pain bringing pleasure... it's an interesting dichotomy.
Passionate blood makes for great paintings.
And that burn, loving how much it hurts.
The pain bringing pleasure... it's an interesting dichotomy.
9th Dec 2022 2:46pm
Yes, smearing blood and the pain of wanting somehow work together. Strange bedfellows. I'm an expert in wanting and blood boils with the thought of her. You read me ...
