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hold me
splintered reality in varying shades of blue
little undertones of sadness infused with love
to never hold the soul of my affection
tender lust don't betray me with a blush
I don't want to be seen
look away sweet sorrow while I take my leave
within the soul of me breathe
needed sanctuary from the chill
my heart hurts when you pull away
smiling rain when you look at me
beautiful to behold, cherished when felt
your desire and mine comingling with the dawn
I see you face in my mind's eye
handsome man do you seen mine?
passionate want I need you more than ever
deep in the soul of me crave
for that which isn't mine
covet the man of my sorrow
Published 20th Nov 2022
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20th Nov 2022 3:11am
20th Nov 2022 4:20am
20th Nov 2022 5:42am
"needed sanctuary from the chill
my heart hurts when you pull away
smiling rain when you look at me
beautiful to behold, cherished when felt"
To want someone who pulls away is the worst feeling. Especially since most people tend to not give a reason why.
Deeply felt poetry, friend :-)
my heart hurts when you pull away
smiling rain when you look at me
beautiful to behold, cherished when felt"
To want someone who pulls away is the worst feeling. Especially since most people tend to not give a reason why.
Deeply felt poetry, friend :-)
20th Nov 2022 10:53pm
hello dearest DC thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts I think we touch on something I don't know...I've been the one who pulled away before and i can't really answer why... I appreciate your insight here ❤️
20th Nov 2022 7:38am
20th Nov 2022 10:53pm
20th Nov 2022 9:22am
I wonder, too, if we ever truly feel we've loved ourselves or felt truly nurtured by the cosmos?
On so many levels, life as an experience seems both too brief and yet interminably long. We wait and we hold off. We abandon and we reject.
And, in our confusion, we experience blindness while being all the time illuminated by the unconditional love of endurance.
We fail nothing and yet flail in our lack of control to feel love as we expect while drowning in an experience of love camouflaged from us by ourselves.
The rain and wind and sun and moonlight are the various kisses we covet, and yet we wait.
Abandoned by shutting our eyes.
On so many levels, life as an experience seems both too brief and yet interminably long. We wait and we hold off. We abandon and we reject.
And, in our confusion, we experience blindness while being all the time illuminated by the unconditional love of endurance.
We fail nothing and yet flail in our lack of control to feel love as we expect while drowning in an experience of love camouflaged from us by ourselves.
The rain and wind and sun and moonlight are the various kisses we covet, and yet we wait.
Abandoned by shutting our eyes.
20th Nov 2022 10:56pm
hello dearest RT I think we are here learning what it is we are to learn to be better more fit companions... the cosmos takes care of our souls I believe...some things we abandon we may find again in another life... thank you for such interesting thoughts ❤️
20th Nov 2022 11:09am
20th Nov 2022 10:58pm
good afternoon dearest Poet thank you graciously you gifted me smiles you know I felt I was struggling to write the last few days but I don't like to get out of habit of writing and even on not so grand ideas have their place as well they are all part of the journey....I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
20th Nov 2022 2:29pm
Unrequited love can be such a physical yearning. I hear you on this write.
Beautifully heartfelt.
Beautifully heartfelt.
20th Nov 2022 10:59pm
hello beautiful Her it is deeply felt thank you for your beautifully understanding comment 💕
20th Nov 2022 5:45pm
20th Nov 2022 11:00pm
my heart has been feeling this person for a long time now thank you for sharing your thoughts ❤️
20th Nov 2022 11:04pm
23rd Nov 2022 10:41pm
This one is deeply felt. Add Mazzy Star and it's pairs well. Hope's voice always seemed to do something special.
Great work
Great work
24th Nov 2022 00:47am
thank you dearest Wally for feeling me so deeply I'm sorry to hear you've been in a funk but let me tell you you are not alone 💕
