The Weight of gravity²

astonishing poem B
The most amazing effect your writing has had on me
The most wonderful feelings of longing I have read
The finest harmony and harmony of rhythm
The best ending to the poem
let sleep now come right on cue

I'm sometimes caught up in one theme or emotional space where writing it all out is seemingly the only way to get everything out of my head. Hence this poem.  

It's fantastic feeling to read how you've been impacted and affected by this piece, MP. I couldn't ask for a better response/reaction. I'm grateful you do enjoyed yourself and found worth in that ending....

I fell such deep respect and meaning that you've stopped in to leave your amazing feedback and open insights.
Thank you, my lovely friend 🙏🏻

Be well and be safe out there.
Much love and warm regards,
🌹 💙
B

A stroke of liquid connectivity...

I was inspired by the open honesty that I've recently read here on DUP.


Thanks, RT
🌹💙

Yes, inspiring, and....

That it's like a dream; too good to think that it could be....

....that taste for something so personally vulnerable that....

that I am cautious in my candor yet riveted in this almost epiphany-like moment....

Which fondles vulnerability with eyes and breath that transend the depths of....

Beautiful art, as is the thought, for we often meet in dreams when spirits find release of the shackles time and space impose. And how oft the thought of someone means they first were thinking of you. People don't believe, but I do. Have you ever thought someone was looking at you and turned and found it true? But what was that inkling without a word which first caused you to turn? And if so simple a thing as a look, how powerful a thing called love, yearning earnestly cast across the miles? There are powers that walk the world unseen, and love is one of these. 🌼

I think I'm overly influenced and generally more sensitive; to not only that essence of dreams being released from their shackles but to releasing the emotions that usually reside in a well that goes far deeper than I might (usually) be hesitant to share outright. I would love to think that my thoughts of someone are originated by their thoughts of me, how beautiful and tender that thought is...  
 
Yes, there's infinite power and profundity within the all encompassing quintessence that is love... I'm not really surprised by love's power to harness what it can, only that I'd be one lucky enough to potentially reap those rewards.... Who knows, maybe I can look forward to my luck as possibly changing. That's a sigh worthy thought, itself.  
 
I thank you, J  
I feel such joy and true loveliness getting the wonderful opportunity to pick your brain. It's an honor.  
 
I deeply appreciate your thoughtfulness,  
🌹 💙  
B

No real destination just my musings /thoughts out into the world...

Thank you for the kind words, J.
Love having you visit
🌹 💙

Very true!! .... ;)

Oh such a bond, a connection we all strive for and greatly desire
You smashed this piece sweetie it's out the ball park and heading for the moon
Love and light
Ron xx

I was hoping you'd get an opportunity to read this one, Ron. Your comments are absolutely spot on. Even though this is mostly fictional there are elements of truth sprinkled within and that hope of a bonded connection is the truthful essence, which comes straight from my own dreams and desires. I am so humbled and thrilled @ the same time, when you say that I've smash this one out of the ballpark.... Woo-hoo!!! You've really made my night, with that, my dear. I'm so glad you enjoyed and can relate like you do.

I'm so so appreciative and lucky to have you in my corner.

Hugs and kisses from across the pond ✨
🌹 💙 - ⚔️
xoxo

Oh my god what a mindfuck I’m so sure this piece right here is gonna put me into a kaleidoscope full of emotion. I am obviously shit faced right now. OK I’m not shit faced, but I am buzzed, very buzzed and I love you!  I am excited to see this new piece. I will comment later when I have the headspace. I love you Blueboo. Always your big sister Jackie. ♥️🌹♥️🤗

Jackie!!! ;p  
You're a bringer of such warmth and tons of laughs. Buzzed or sober; I don't care, love it and you!! lmao....😂 I'm more than happy and very grateful to have your enthusiasm and love spread across my page here. It means so much to me that someone actually takes the time to write their thoughts down; leaving me with a wonderfully cool sense of their headspace when visiting. In outside appearances, it's seemingly a small thing (it's not at all to me) that makes me feel completely NOT small, if that makes sense! I see how it sometimes goes here on DUP— you know better than most the propensity for various ups and downs, so I deeply appreciate the time you've taken to authentically say what you mean in the real honest way you mean it!! It's refreshing badassery as only you can pull off with your killer gumption. I do hope you return when and if you choose to, only because your additional thoughts are always so enormously interesting and extremely (witchy) intuitive. If I don't see you though, absolutely zero worries... I love that we have our connected sisterly bond and I'm thankful for you here, now and always, my friend!  
 
Be well and be safe out there...  
(I'm already sick of this rain from tropical storm Nicole, that's correct coming through at least my power is on fingers 🤞🏻 crossed!!)  
 
Sending much love,  
🌹💙💙🌹  
-B

The family is mutual. I love you from the first day we started talking and I will love you till my last breath to me in my heart. You really are my sister. Have a great day honey.
Love you Blueboo 🫐 ♥️♥️♥️
Your big sis
Jackie xoxoxo😘🤗♥️🌹

Awwww... you made my morning!
Back @ ya  Jackie!!
💋😘🤩🥰🤗

🌹
💙
B

I make sure you get some sleep.  I'm here for you.  Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.

Aww... thanks for those kind words, Francisco. It's nice to see that gentlemanly side! I appreciate you being as sweet and considerate as that comment depicts.

Much obliged, my friend
🌹

What a siren serenade:)
Reaching across the void to a loved one - defying gravity and circumstances of distance.
The stages you went through in this were so captivating. And the musings of -

"What is he doing at this moment?"      
"Is he missing me like I miss him?"

So relatable to me.

Wonderful love letter:)

Hey there, lovely lady.  
 
Your awesome feedback is truly appreciated, thank you.    
   
This piece is part fictional, part dream and part 'maybe, juuust maybe.' I do know that feeling well- of yearning, deep compatibility and the generous sense of freedom to be 100% understood in a way that both of you never knew possible. I haven't figured which is harder; having that whole package once and losing it or never experiencing it at all... However, I do know that it is definitely worth the search to obtain, again.  
   
I'm thrilled you found lines captivating and the poem relatable as a whole.... That's truly high praise itself-🙏🏻  
   
All my warmest regards and deep thanks for taking the time to leave me your special type of insight, which I always deeply look forward to!  
   
Much love and respect,  
🌹 💙  
B

Your 'wispy little murmurs ' quickly lead to a most compelling uproar...sometimes we all have to chant something to sleep...love your use of the Old English word cunt...beautiful incantation ... Lawrence X

lol.. Yes, I'm partial to the word cunt; sometimes only a certain word will do with its perfect
impact!!! :p

I'm truly delighted that you felt the swell of my murmurings compelling, Lawrence. I hoped to be able to convey similar emotions, so your thoughts are wonderfully appreciated.  

Your beautiful comments made me smile.  
Thank you  
X  
B

Oh yeah, give me some of that sweet love nectar hehe 😁. So deeply passionate, friend. Nothing like having that connection with a person that just makes you feel like they are a part, and always have been a part of your life. You inked the feeling fantastically.

hahaha... I can't get enough of that love nectar sometimes!!! *wink

With age comes hindsight in knowing that kind of connection is rare and increasingly difficult to obtain, so if you are able there's this self awareness of working hard to keep the good... good.

Your kind words of wisdom and relatability of understanding are very appreciated, DC.
Thank you.
🌹B

Dearest, Lady Blue
I am so romantically touched by your thrilling combination of words in this masterpiece. The flow is exhilarating, and the piece is a joy to read out loud. Your artwork is beautiful. I can imagine the coalescence of two slow dancing, entwined bodies appearing in that center cyclone or fire.
This passage describes perfectly the affect your poetry has on my life and, especially, poems like this one,
“your specialty,
which changes the trajectory
of a truly stressful day”
And Wow! Wow! Wow! This perspective is breathtaking and packed with truly electrified tingles,
“realizing the space of separation
means little
once receiving the siren signal”
To comment on all my favorite passages would mean copying and pasting the entire poem here.
A huge standing ovation replete with exuberant cheers of Bravissima! from this poet humbled by your beautiful mastery 🐻💞🐰

Ohhh my, BB!!!
😲😯🤯🙀
You're a beautiful warm light of luscious encouragement and divine solidarity of romantic affection. I was desperately crossing my fingers that you would come across this piece, knowing that we both are similar in our emotional sensibilities. I figured of anyone, you'd be of the few who would automatically know from whence heartfelt place deep inside I pulled my inspiration from.... and I am happy to read that I wasn't wrong. You're as majestically lovely and understanding as I hoped... and more. I'm so so I'm grateful for your otherworldly, kind words and I adorningly bask in each and every one of them; all while being literally close to tears with humbled deep appreciation and enormous returned love and gratitude.  

You've made my night, my beautiful El oso!  
💋 Muah!!  
🐻💞🐰  
xoxo

This is beautiful! A fantastic spill. I can feel the words you strung and understand the  feeling of missing someone so well.🌹

Hey there, Summer :)  
It's been a while, so it's truly wonderful to have you visit. I'm so glad you were able to find a bit of worth within my words and could relate to that yearning sense of missing someone you care about, so deeply. It's perhaps a bit cliché or maybe a little bit rehashed but it's what came out when I sat down to try and capture what was happening on the inside...It gives me much encouragement and It's really heartening to read your thoughts and insights of enjoyment. I'm deeply grateful you've taken the time you have with me , dear lady.

I hope all is well with you and yours.
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
B

Electric correspondence, dear,  

love it, love the felt tip beauty here

Your love is felt down to my bones, my lovely. I am completely adoring of your visit and the knowledge that you found a bit of beauty here.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, I've missed seeing you and hope you are doing well.

Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
B

Both the very lofty and romantic side of LOVE, the yearning......and the other  rash reality noted, the basic needs of the cunt.

I think there's always a healthy duality of emotional and physical aspects in a strong and thriving relationship.... at least that's my desired hope.... Lofty and romantic is some of my favorite kind of poetry, so I am delighted you found that to be the case.

I really do love seeing you and it hope you're doing well. Thanks for the lovely sentiments and taking the time to visit.

Much love, my dear
🌹 💙
B

Perhaps the best and least expensive type of therapy?

I wholeheartedly agree with you, Jazz... Be it written therapy or dream therapy, it's about reconciling an emotional place within your own mind and under your own circumstances that can ultimately become a sort of epiphany of understanding or healing.

Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me today. I've missed your visits, so an additional thank you for dropping in. It's nice to concentrate on something other than the tropical storm blowing through!

I appreciate you-ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡
-💙

I wonder what is the escape velocity for the gravity of these beautiful words.
❣️🙏

lol... but would you really want to escape such a yummy gravitational influence??!?.. heh heh ....😏

Thank you for the very thought provoking scientific quandary, my lovely KP.
I shall continue to ponder *wink

Much love,
🌹 💙

....like  a hot glass of Chamomile tea laced with a shot of Herradura's Tiquila
Thats how this vibe read. Silky smooth yet extra potent.  
A good night cap indeed...

Ohhh yeah... I feel the extra bit of warmth, like a big strong embrace that heats you up through and through. What a kind and truly inspired comment... I'll be thinking of these intoxicating sentiments for many nights ahead.  
 
Thank you, dear poet.  
 
I adore seeing you and feeling your deeply rich poetic essence.  
 
It's a true pleasure ✨  
🌹 💙  
B

This is so wonderful.  It brings a sense of peace, actually.  It's calm nature is no less powerful than an angst driven plea all spilled out on a page.  This is more delicate, and yet more sure of itself.  
I love it, Blue.

Hey there, S  
Thanks for the 'wonderful'. I appreciate you thinking so.  
 
I'm sorta blown away but very glad you loved what you read and found something of worth, value and enjoyment. I'm always deeply grateful that anyone takes time to read and leave their thoughts of how the poem was received; so again, much obliged for the kind words of encouragement.  
🌹-B

You are wise my friend, you capture Love beautifully and completely in these lines and verses.
James

Your thoughts of how I was able to convey myself carries much weight with me, my dear friend. I am so grateful that you see me and read my writing with a keen eye and an open heart. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, James. I'm truly lucky to have you here and I don't take that for granted for a moment.

I love how you complimented my wisdom; which I feel is one of the best compliments I've ever received and true high praise.  

Much love from across the pond ✨
🌹 💙
B

I mean what I say.
I enjoy your poetry. Your wisdom shines through this piece.
James

-💙
xo

Very intimate and complex – had me thinking of a satirical picture. The picture pokes fun at the complexity difference between women and men.  For the women’s control panel, it had the appearance like the cockpit of a jetliner. Whereas for the man, it was one or two control knobs.  

As you write (Dream) on multi-levels that include your hopes, desires, insecurities (“Does he think of me”), lust and love, beginning by longing for him from a distance. His presence in the dream providing companionship and guidance which you take comfort and strength.  But as you write, the desires take over, consummating by resting your pen (orgasmic wet dream). You can now, sleep tranquilly.

Not only a marvelous poetess, but a fine artist as well.

Hey there, Leo
It's an interlude of nighttime thought processes; where my mind travels when I let it go fully unrestrained and uninhibited.

Maybe it's a daydream highlighting opportunities or chances of finding something special... something that provokes, challenges and makes me understand myself in a whole new pleasurable way. Delving into those possibilities with the heart of a poet and and the intrinsic (urging) desires that make me.... me.

Thank you for your beautiful soul and extremely kind compliments/feedback.

I adore you.... so so much.
🌹💙 💙
-B

What can one say...pure beauty...amazing poem.

🙏 Mo

Nice to meet you, Mo :)
Your kind hearted comments are so lovely and deeply appreciated.

There's some softness and a bit of hopeful thinking that I tried my best to convey... in addition to the driving yearn that sometimes pulses along with each heartbeat.

I'm thrilled you found me here and enjoyed reading.... You're welcome anytime.


*Welcome to DUP—
I hope you enjoy your time with us
🌹💙
B

The dream of fulfillment with a man who awakens your spirit into paroxysms of delight. I loved the passion that bursts like an orchid for the reader to experience in your refulgence. There is depth here that took me into the heart of your romance like a subterranean volcano that to the public appears as your happy walk and the expression of desire on your face. These hints and intimations are the stuff of dreams made real. You take the internet romance and show the potential for comfort in words from afar. Your poem read like a flapper doing the charleston in a speakeasy in the twenties with your exuberance alive and dancing. I could bathe in these words forever like a Caribbean soak on a cruise to heaven.

XoXoXo
John

My darling,
You leave me so moved and utterly pliable like warm putty in your very masterful hands.... These comments... Oh my, these comments...

I love how you too, felt that dreamscape of fulfilling need, desire and committed rapture. The passion and underlying sense of "maybe" when thinking of all that could be.... might be... or....with much effort and a bit of magic, will be.

To know you felt my sincerity and excitement means so much and really leaves me with such a huge smile.

Soak me up, my dear.... soak me up.

🌹💙
💋 - Susan

Brought to mind a classic R and B song by The Isley Brothers, "Make Me Say It Again". Maybe a bit of Stevie Wonder's "As".

Glad to know I was able to elicit some musical interconnectedness; I truly adore that those songs were brought to mind.  

Thanks for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, Jazz... It's very much appreciated and enjoyed.  
🌹-🎶
B

Hoi hoi
Came back like a thief in the night to absorb it again.
For me, English 2nd language at best, it’s a lot but definitely worth it!

Thank you for such an outstanding piece of work and posting it!
Kind regards, Gus

Hoi hoi
I completely adore you, Gus!!

To know you've visited before and are now returning makes me warm and tingly with happiness! I truly love that. I know it's a lot of writing, so I'm deeply grateful that you made such a wonderful effort, luckily finding enjoyment and worth here...

Your presence is always a welcomed pleasure, my dear

Thank you. - 🌹
-B

The art along with the poem was beautiful.

Thanks, CS
It means a lot to me that you think so. Really glad you found some beauty.


🌹 💙
-B

This is why you are legitimately one of my favorite poets.  GD Blue, you have a ridiculous understanding of how to express feelings and thoughts to perfection.

LJ

You just made my morning, Lj.. seriously .... I'm a deer in headlights.....and just absolutely humbled by your kind words...

From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much.

xoxo
-Blu

One of your embers has broke free of its fiery confinement. It drifted on the winds of change, and landed in the empty field of my imagination. Now, a passion blazes there, with no chance of being quenched.

Lovely work as always my dear!

The warmth and agony of such thoughts and wanting.
Superb.

hugs,
buddhakitty.

Your description of desire drips with a passionate decadence. A sweet ache. You are a master of words...

Debbie, you are a generous heart and giving soul. It's truly lovely to have met you this morning and I'm so glad you are here with us.

It means a lot to me that you've enjoyed the pieces you've read of mine so far, they're all such deep, oftentimes raw emotional spills. You, connecting with them is all that I could hope for.

Thank you again for leaving me such a plethora of thoughtful kindness.

I don't take that for granted!

Much love,
🌹 💙
B