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evil, disturbing, sinister or morbid
When she came to me
She said she was falling through the cracks
Do you want to be saved or pushed I asked
She looked down and weakly mumbled
Pushed
I can help I said
When can we start she asked
She said she was falling through the cracks
Do you want to be saved or pushed I asked
She looked down and weakly mumbled
Pushed
I can help I said
When can we start she asked
Published 30th Oct 2022
Author's Note
I can help .......
Creep
Creep
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30th Oct 2022 2:53am
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31st Oct 2022 00:45am
Clever. I know you like to be helpful in that regard.
This makes me want to sing Creep...
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This makes me want to sing Creep...
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31st Oct 2022 00:48am
It's the time of the year to write creepy things and I'm certainly contributing my share.
Go ahead and scream some creep speak
Ready with BIG LIKES
Go ahead and scream some creep speak
Ready with BIG LIKES
31st Oct 2022 1:39am
You are the creeper and you going to give her orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
31st Oct 2022 1:41am
31st Oct 2022 12:24pm
Okay what I got... was
When she came
he was falling into the cracks
I want to be saved, do push - push deeper and a lot.
She looked down and strongly moaned
Being pushed * um, yeah pushed hard *
You can't help it.
When? about 15 minutes ago it started. lol
But there is a long way to go.
Creep. lol I am not touching that... :p
I do have the song Creep in my head now too...
When she came
he was falling into the cracks
I want to be saved, do push - push deeper and a lot.
She looked down and strongly moaned
Being pushed * um, yeah pushed hard *
You can't help it.
When? about 15 minutes ago it started. lol
But there is a long way to go.
Creep. lol I am not touching that... :p
I do have the song Creep in my head now too...
31st Oct 2022 12:28pm
A very long way to go
Yes, 15 minutes ago
Confessional
Who needs writing when there is lust and body parts
I am a creep
I work at it
Strong convictions
Yes, 15 minutes ago
Confessional
Who needs writing when there is lust and body parts
I am a creep
I work at it
Strong convictions
5th Nov 2022 3:48pm
This is actually pretty frickin good! Better than maybe you realize? The "let's mess up together" aspect of it. It's short, but so easy to open it up and expand it to life size.
Awesome write, amigo!
Awesome write, amigo!
5th Nov 2022 4:39pm
I try to bring all my weirdness to life.
Not so surprisingly here in the underground, people dig it. I’ll keep doing it then …
Appreciate your comment Styx
Stay tuned brother
Not so surprisingly here in the underground, people dig it. I’ll keep doing it then …
Appreciate your comment Styx
Stay tuned brother
16th Nov 2022 10:24pm
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