What a stellar senryś, Birchel! You really used your 17 syllables excellently; evoking vulnerability in a truly poetic and potent way, not wasting a word.
Terrifically penned ink and job well done! 👍🏻
I value you being here with us. ;p 。*:☆:゜。:゜☆。☆。。*:☆:゜。:゜☆。☆。 🌹-B