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Masked
O Moon, how you feign
to be shy and lonely
You wear a mask of
innocence and purity
but that's a bait you use
to attract stars to misuse
How you play with their hearts
then leave them as mere discards,
O Moon, such a player you are
stars are nothing but tears afar...
to be shy and lonely
You wear a mask of
innocence and purity
but that's a bait you use
to attract stars to misuse
How you play with their hearts
then leave them as mere discards,
O Moon, such a player you are
stars are nothing but tears afar...
Published 22nd Oct 2022
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Anonymous
- Edited 13th Nov 2022 6:45pm
22nd Oct 2022 9:38pm
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22nd Oct 2022 9:39pm
22nd Oct 2022 9:50pm
22nd Oct 2022 9:52pm
Thanks a bunch, dear LDF. I'm so honoured by the RL add. 😊Your kind words of encouragement mean a lot to me. Thank you once again 🌹
22nd Oct 2022 9:56pm
22nd Oct 2022 9:59pm
That's a great review, dear James. I'm so thankful to you for the kind words. Always feel so honoured n ecstatic to see my poems in your reading list. Much thanks 🙏🌹❤
23rd Oct 2022 00:40am
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23rd Oct 2022 5:04am
Damn, your words are so deep and meaningful friend. Really says so much in just a few words. Really enjoyed this poem 😁
23rd Oct 2022 10:40am
So glad you liked this poem, dear DC. 😊
You are such a terrific poet and your high opinion about my poetry really makes me feel so honoured n lucky as well.
Thanks a lot, dear friend for your kind support. 🌹
You are such a terrific poet and your high opinion about my poetry really makes me feel so honoured n lucky as well.
Thanks a lot, dear friend for your kind support. 🌹
23rd Oct 2022 7:46am
That image of the moon as a great cosmic misleader is familiar in our culture. The word 'lunatic' (modern vernacular 'loony') is based on Latin for the moon, which was once believed to be the cause of insanity.
23rd Oct 2022 10:42am
Yes, the moon does have an effect on our psyche.
Thanks a lot, dear Solomon for sharing your precious thoughts. Very much appreciate you stopping by😊🌹
Thanks a lot, dear Solomon for sharing your precious thoughts. Very much appreciate you stopping by😊🌹
23rd Oct 2022 8:31pm
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25th Oct 2022 11:39am
Played by the moon
Who would dare except those of us in the underground
Charting new paths of expression ID
BIG LIKE
Who would dare except those of us in the underground
Charting new paths of expression ID
BIG LIKE
25th Oct 2022 1:25pm
"Who would dare except those of us in the underground"
Haha... Love your sense of humour
Thanks a lot, dearest PS ❤
Aah.... What an honour to see this piece in your reading list. 🌹 Always feel so happy to see you around my page. Thanks 🙏
Haha... Love your sense of humour
Thanks a lot, dearest PS ❤
Aah.... What an honour to see this piece in your reading list. 🌹 Always feel so happy to see you around my page. Thanks 🙏
26th Oct 2022 10:04pm
27th Oct 2022 1:15pm
28th Oct 2022 4:48pm
Hoi hoi
Lovely storytelling and look at the impressive list above…
It really resonates with a lot of people!
Wonderful!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
Lovely storytelling and look at the impressive list above…
It really resonates with a lot of people!
Wonderful!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
29th Oct 2022 1:27pm
Thanks a lot, dear Johnny 🌹 I very much appreciate you stopping by and leaving such kind comments. Much thanks 🙏😊
5th Nov 2022 5:17am
'' but that's a bait you use
to attract stars to misuse ''
Interesting no doubt. The moon doesn't produce its own light.
It only reflects the light shown upon it.
to attract stars to misuse ''
Interesting no doubt. The moon doesn't produce its own light.
It only reflects the light shown upon it.
5th Nov 2022 2:03pm
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this, dear poet. Very much appreciate you stopping by 😊🌻
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Dec 2022 2:45pm
6th Nov 2022 8:49pm
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6th Nov 2022 8:57pm
Yeah... but poor oceans, they still find the moon irresistible
Thank you so much, dear poet for your great feedback. Very much appreciate your presence on my page 🌹
Thank you so much, dear poet for your great feedback. Very much appreciate your presence on my page 🌹
9th Dec 2022 8:42am
You must be such a tender person since only a person with golden heart can write like these.
Added you to reading list again.
Added you to reading list again.
9th Dec 2022 10:09am
Oh dear R, you flatter me with your kind words. Thank you so much ❤
Once again you have honoured me with the RL add. Much thanks 🌹
Once again you have honoured me with the RL add. Much thanks 🌹
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Apr 2023 6:45am
9th Apr 2023 1:44pm
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15th Apr 2023 9:58am
Thank you so much, dear Cj Allin for the wonderful n kind comment. Very much appreciate it ❤
23rd Apr 2023 3:49pm
Love takes many forms ( stars falling like tears).
Excellent.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Excellent.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Apr 2023 1:39pm
