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Do you
Do you fuck in the light
adorned in a beauty so bright
basking with heavenly glow
consumed in each ebb and each flow
or like me do you like it dark
inhaled with a faint trace of heart
fingers embrace the unknown
living and breathing each moan
tongues tantalizing
the braille of the body
moist moments meet and greet
inside the throes of life
lips bled in honour of another
begging to last
a synchronization of soul
eluding death, becoming whole
adorned in a beauty so bright
basking with heavenly glow
consumed in each ebb and each flow
or like me do you like it dark
inhaled with a faint trace of heart
fingers embrace the unknown
living and breathing each moan
tongues tantalizing
the braille of the body
moist moments meet and greet
inside the throes of life
lips bled in honour of another
begging to last
a synchronization of soul
eluding death, becoming whole
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Re. Do you
Anonymous
19th Oct 2022 10:46pm
… these days my dude, I just take what I can get. 🤣🤣
It’s an interesting question regardless. I think what I liked most about that thought was that everybody would ultimately give a different answer.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
It’s an interesting question regardless. I think what I liked most about that thought was that everybody would ultimately give a different answer.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
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Re: Re. Do you
19th Oct 2022 10:48pm
Re. Do you
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20th Oct 2022 1:15am
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Re. Do you
20th Oct 2022 3:54am
Re. Do you
You could have keep the rhyme scheme going ......
AABB you used in stanza 1
Am just suggesting .....it's wonderful actually
AABB you used in stanza 1
Am just suggesting .....it's wonderful actually
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Re: Re. Do you
20th Oct 2022 3:07pm
Re. Do you
20th Oct 2022 8:33pm
Well damn Tim!!
The braille of the body!!
Look at you cussing - love it!!
The whole thing is seductive - no joke amigo!!
The braille of the body!!
Look at you cussing - love it!!
The whole thing is seductive - no joke amigo!!
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Re: Re. Do you
20th Oct 2022 9:01pm
I can cuss like a sailor but prefer not...unless warranted
Seductive is good!
Thanks A
Seductive is good!
Thanks A
Re. Do you
Anonymous
21st Oct 2022 1:57pm
hmm that just depends... preference tends to be guided in the moment I guess
Love the balance in this, sits perfectly between sensual with a hint of temptation.
Love the balance in this, sits perfectly between sensual with a hint of temptation.
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Re: Re. Do you
21st Oct 2022 3:03pm
We all need a bit of temptation, sometimes it leads to passionate moments other times to drunken karaoke 😂...thanks Sophie xo
Re. Do you
26th Oct 2022 10:47am
As lit and as illuminated as possible, unless blindfolded. I'm too old to be shy and know myself too well. I thrive on seeing every. single. nuance.
Beautiful rhyming flow and imagery... "lips bled in honor of another" is one of many tantalizing morsels.
Really enjoyed, Tim
Sorry I initially missed it but definitely glad to stumble across it this morning.
🌹-B
Beautiful rhyming flow and imagery... "lips bled in honor of another" is one of many tantalizing morsels.
Really enjoyed, Tim
Sorry I initially missed it but definitely glad to stumble across it this morning.
🌹-B
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Re: Re. Do you
26th Oct 2022 9:34pm
Re. Do you
28th Oct 2022 3:28pm
Do me? well you pulled me in with the title. :p
I love to fuck in the light.
adorned a beauty so bright.
in your heavenly glow.
ebb and flow inside me.
But I adore the dark
the darkness pulls me in, calls
inhaling the most obscene
fingers tracing the unknown
living and breathing each push
tongues in the dirtiest dance
I write to you in braille on my body
because that's how I want you to read me
with your fingers and tongue
the wettest moments flowing steams
lips bleeding, talk is not needed
begging to the very last drop
synchronization of bodies...
Dying for it again, to become whole
I love to fuck in the light.
adorned a beauty so bright.
in your heavenly glow.
ebb and flow inside me.
But I adore the dark
the darkness pulls me in, calls
inhaling the most obscene
fingers tracing the unknown
living and breathing each push
tongues in the dirtiest dance
I write to you in braille on my body
because that's how I want you to read me
with your fingers and tongue
the wettest moments flowing steams
lips bleeding, talk is not needed
begging to the very last drop
synchronization of bodies...
Dying for it again, to become whole
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Re: Re. Do you
28th Oct 2022 3:46pm
Love it...you captured the spirit and pushed it to it's boundaries and beyond ;)
Re: Re. Do you
28th Oct 2022 3:54pm