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Mine
I listened to
you
in a dream
speak
to
me
of how people
were
like gardens
in
your mind
that you
visit
from time
to
time
&
I was astonished or amazed that you would visit me or
mine
Published 8th Oct 2022
Author's Note
I have these dreams where I talk
to people, both living and dead...
to people, both living and dead...
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8th Oct 2022 8:48am
Dear CO,
I loved the mysticism in this. I can’t remember that movie where the child says he sees dead people but I talk with my dead relatives all the time. I don’t care what that says about me but it helps to find answers. “I listened to you in a dream…” brilliant opening line, the rest just falls into place. Lovely. H🌷
I loved the mysticism in this. I can’t remember that movie where the child says he sees dead people but I talk with my dead relatives all the time. I don’t care what that says about me but it helps to find answers. “I listened to you in a dream…” brilliant opening line, the rest just falls into place. Lovely. H🌷
8th Oct 2022 3:48pm
I like that very much about you H...
Thank you for sharing these things with me...
And for your cool words...
:)
Thank you for sharing these things with me...
And for your cool words...
:)
