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Kamikaze Sky
Devil lives on the sun
Drinks 100 proof fire for liquor
His last call waving me over
Beckoning his destruction
In the name of seduction
Sitting oh so all alone
Up high on his inferno throne
Wants to melt me down
Wear me like a golden crown
But deep down I know
I’m not the only one
Got holy water angel wings
Laced and spiked with rum
Bestowed by my mother
Who prays to garnet
Rosaries from past lovers
She says it’s a big bad
World an unsafe place
Empty words have no faith
Beware of your pretty face
Cause deep down you know
You’re not the only one
I was doing fine on my own
Devil should’ve left me alone
So I’m answering his call
Today he’s going to fall
I’m looking way up high
Getting ready for an insane flight
A skilled arrow aimed just right
It’s a smooth day to die
In a Kamikaze Sky
No one ever survives
In a Kamikaze Sky
Cause if I go down
I won’t be the only one
Drinks 100 proof fire for liquor
His last call waving me over
Beckoning his destruction
In the name of seduction
Sitting oh so all alone
Up high on his inferno throne
Wants to melt me down
Wear me like a golden crown
But deep down I know
I’m not the only one
Got holy water angel wings
Laced and spiked with rum
Bestowed by my mother
Who prays to garnet
Rosaries from past lovers
She says it’s a big bad
World an unsafe place
Empty words have no faith
Beware of your pretty face
Cause deep down you know
You’re not the only one
I was doing fine on my own
Devil should’ve left me alone
So I’m answering his call
Today he’s going to fall
I’m looking way up high
Getting ready for an insane flight
A skilled arrow aimed just right
It’s a smooth day to die
In a Kamikaze Sky
No one ever survives
In a Kamikaze Sky
Cause if I go down
I won’t be the only one
Published 7th Oct 2022
Author's Note
Feeling a little apocalyptical with
change at the moment. Mostly a vent write.
listening to The Kills - Echo Home
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JtgfSwn74E0
change at the moment. Mostly a vent write.
listening to The Kills - Echo Home
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JtgfSwn74E0
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
7th Oct 2022 2:30am
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7th Oct 2022 2:37am
Hey Tim:)
Thanks for commenting on this. Been a tough year
but things will get better. I'll make sure:)
I've learned happiness comes from within. People around
you can enhance it or do the opposite.
For the most part you are in the drivers seat.
Until it's time to get a different car. LOL
Thanks for commenting and the RL my flirty friend:)
Thanks for commenting on this. Been a tough year
but things will get better. I'll make sure:)
I've learned happiness comes from within. People around
you can enhance it or do the opposite.
For the most part you are in the drivers seat.
Until it's time to get a different car. LOL
Thanks for commenting and the RL my flirty friend:)
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
7th Oct 2022 2:38am
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8th Oct 2022 2:19am
8th Oct 2022 2:06am
Hi Sisco
hahahaha.
I was feeling dramatic when I wrote this. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)
hahahaha.
I was feeling dramatic when I wrote this. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)
Anonymous
7th Oct 2022 2:56am
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8th Oct 2022 2:11am
Hi Steve:)
You will be surprised what you can endure. And maybe not,
you seem like a confident guy with a great outlook on life.
I'm rooting for you amigo:)
God Bless
Thank you for the badass comment!!! hahahaha
And for the RL and commenting.
Woop woop
You will be surprised what you can endure. And maybe not,
you seem like a confident guy with a great outlook on life.
I'm rooting for you amigo:)
God Bless
Thank you for the badass comment!!! hahahaha
And for the RL and commenting.
Woop woop
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Aug 2024 3:45am
7th Oct 2022 3:10am
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8th Oct 2022 2:16am
Hey PW
Awh - thanks for that comment. Love that you incorporated the
word contemporary. LOL Thank you!!!
Like to write edgy stuff - not too much fluff.
Thanks for commenting and the RL
Woop Woop
Awh - thanks for that comment. Love that you incorporated the
word contemporary. LOL Thank you!!!
Like to write edgy stuff - not too much fluff.
Thanks for commenting and the RL
Woop Woop
7th Oct 2022 3:31am
Monumental write A
If you're going down in flames, might as well have company ...
BIG RIGHTEOUS LIKE
If you're going down in flames, might as well have company ...
BIG RIGHTEOUS LIKE
8th Oct 2022 2:18am
Hi PS
Hell yeah buddy. Pun intended. LOL
Just being dramatic - I can write kick ass death scenes. hahaha
Thanks for the RIGHTEOUS LIKE!!
Have a great evening amigo:)
Hell yeah buddy. Pun intended. LOL
Just being dramatic - I can write kick ass death scenes. hahaha
Thanks for the RIGHTEOUS LIKE!!
Have a great evening amigo:)
7th Oct 2022 4:06am
8th Oct 2022 2:20am
Hi Her:)
Yes - I wrote as a song. So happy you caught
the melody in this.
So happy you enjoyed this:)
Thanks for commenting and stopping by
Yes - I wrote as a song. So happy you caught
the melody in this.
So happy you enjoyed this:)
Thanks for commenting and stopping by
7th Oct 2022 9:35am
You have secured your title of Bad Ass...
Digging the vibe very much so A...
:)
Digging the vibe very much so A...
:)
8th Oct 2022 2:23am
Hey Cipher!!
Why thank you:)
What a kick ass comment.
Where's my championship belt?
I want lots of bling and a unicorn to ride on. LOL
So glad you enjoyed!!!!
Later killogator.
Why thank you:)
What a kick ass comment.
Where's my championship belt?
I want lots of bling and a unicorn to ride on. LOL
So glad you enjoyed!!!!
Later killogator.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th May 2023 7:45am
7th Oct 2022 11:45am
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8th Oct 2022 2:32am
Hi Rianne!!
So so happy you enjoyed:)
Glad you caught the melody in this since
I did write it as a song.
I was in the mood to be dramatic. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amiga:)
So so happy you enjoyed:)
Glad you caught the melody in this since
I did write it as a song.
I was in the mood to be dramatic. LOL
Thanks for stopping by and commenting amiga:)
7th Oct 2022 4:55pm
8th Oct 2022 2:35am
Hey Tim!
Me too. hahaha
Needed to blow off some steam.
Thank you for your snaps buddy:)
Thanks for commenting and stopping by
Me too. hahaha
Needed to blow off some steam.
Thank you for your snaps buddy:)
Thanks for commenting and stopping by
7th Oct 2022 10:48pm
Dear A,
I maybe reading into this on a personal level, I felt an overwhelming feeling of betrayal amongst these words. While things will eventually calm down it won’t be before the devil takes his due and our heroine will land on her feet. A bit tired and maybe a bit tattered but still beautiful and not about about to take another piece of bullsh*t. For me, there is a great deal of metaphor throughout that makes this poem not only relatable but a story of great interest. Top shelf write. H🌷
I maybe reading into this on a personal level, I felt an overwhelming feeling of betrayal amongst these words. While things will eventually calm down it won’t be before the devil takes his due and our heroine will land on her feet. A bit tired and maybe a bit tattered but still beautiful and not about about to take another piece of bullsh*t. For me, there is a great deal of metaphor throughout that makes this poem not only relatable but a story of great interest. Top shelf write. H🌷
8th Oct 2022 2:39am
Hi H:)
You are so intuitive amiga. Yes - betrayal but in an odd way
also very close friends. Just going through it at the moment.
Of course she's going to land on her feet. Just feeling dramatic
and I can write a hell of a death scene so I went for it.
Thanks for commenting and the RL lovely one:)
You are so intuitive amiga. Yes - betrayal but in an odd way
also very close friends. Just going through it at the moment.
Of course she's going to land on her feet. Just feeling dramatic
and I can write a hell of a death scene so I went for it.
Thanks for commenting and the RL lovely one:)
8th Oct 2022 4:08am
You can vent all you want. In a way, we all do to a degree when we write and post our stuff.
This poem is full of great lines, that make us as readers want to raise a glass to your bravado.
Awesome craftsmanship. And music really is your best friend, because you grab that particular song and absorb into so many great poems.
This poem is full of great lines, that make us as readers want to raise a glass to your bravado.
Awesome craftsmanship. And music really is your best friend, because you grab that particular song and absorb into so many great poems.
8th Oct 2022 4:22am
Well hey there:)
Yeah- we do. I'm actually listening to that song at the moment:)
Thanks for your snaps on this. It took me a couple of days to write.
Finally posted the other night. Music for me is also a portal. It takes me places when I want to disappear.
In that aspect it is my best friend:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting
Yeah- we do. I'm actually listening to that song at the moment:)
Thanks for your snaps on this. It took me a couple of days to write.
Finally posted the other night. Music for me is also a portal. It takes me places when I want to disappear.
In that aspect it is my best friend:)
Thanks for the RL and commenting
8th Oct 2022 2:52pm
Cool avatar. Not many know this, but the skinny dude was based off of me.
Not really, but it sure seems that way! Lol
Not really, but it sure seems that way! Lol
9th Oct 2022 8:12pm
Hey you - LOL
Well damn - first
Motorcycles & Mermaids
then
Sugar Skulls & Dragons
then
Bud & Sissy
now
Sally & Jack
We must know each other from a past life. LOL
You are too cool!!
Well damn - first
Motorcycles & Mermaids
then
Sugar Skulls & Dragons
then
Bud & Sissy
now
Sally & Jack
We must know each other from a past life. LOL
You are too cool!!
10th Oct 2022 2:22am
You ninny, wasn't it mopeds and mermaids? How quick they forget... sigh.
If I had a past life, I must have really screwed it up. Cause this one is so full of trials and tribulations!
Not really. It's all pretty good when I do the sum total. But that makes for dull writing after awhile. Lol.
If I had a past life, I must have really screwed it up. Cause this one is so full of trials and tribulations!
Not really. It's all pretty good when I do the sum total. But that makes for dull writing after awhile. Lol.
9th Oct 2022 11:37pm
The air of betrayal is heavy in this piece. To me, anyway. Suffering it in friendship hits differently.
9th Oct 2022 11:45pm
It is. Having the rug pulled out from under you doesn't feel good
at all. I hate having my home life feel unstable. If only everything would stay perfect. But that is unrealistic. I'm no angel either.
Just finding new ways to handle stress. Thank god for writing:)
Thanks for the RL and stopping by amiga:)
at all. I hate having my home life feel unstable. If only everything would stay perfect. But that is unrealistic. I'm no angel either.
Just finding new ways to handle stress. Thank god for writing:)
Thanks for the RL and stopping by amiga:)
Hey there lovely lady,
I can almost hear the music, this is so viscerally lyrical. The ache of brutal betrayal mixes with the gumption that I always feel oozes from you... These lyrics resonate so amazingly clear, because like you write, you're not the only one...
The strength and bite of venom written within the last lines, makes for a perfect poetic punch.
I hope with this purge piece and with time there's some healing on your horizon...
I admire this share, Adel... it's open, raw, personal and fully relatable, which isn't an easy task to pen, yet you do so brilliantly...
Outstanding work.
🌹 💙
-B
I can almost hear the music, this is so viscerally lyrical. The ache of brutal betrayal mixes with the gumption that I always feel oozes from you... These lyrics resonate so amazingly clear, because like you write, you're not the only one...
The strength and bite of venom written within the last lines, makes for a perfect poetic punch.
I hope with this purge piece and with time there's some healing on your horizon...
I admire this share, Adel... it's open, raw, personal and fully relatable, which isn't an easy task to pen, yet you do so brilliantly...
Outstanding work.
🌹 💙
-B
12th Oct 2022 4:28am
Hi B:)
Thank you for so much. You just made my night amiga:)
Sometimes things get crazy so I write crazy. Gotta vent it out
or I end up being destructive. I'm no pushover but I do need to
be a bit more graceful in my old age. hahaha
So happy you enjoyed and were able to find this relatable.
Cheers to purging. LOL
Have a lovely evening and thanks for the RL!
Thank you for so much. You just made my night amiga:)
Sometimes things get crazy so I write crazy. Gotta vent it out
or I end up being destructive. I'm no pushover but I do need to
be a bit more graceful in my old age. hahaha
So happy you enjoyed and were able to find this relatable.
Cheers to purging. LOL
Have a lovely evening and thanks for the RL!
12th Oct 2022 4:18pm
Adelphina, this is alive with lyricism. The mood and melody took me right in. I felt the apocalyptic myth like smooth bourbon on a plane ride to the depths of emotions and darkness. The fires burned bright within your words. And I felt every note in this song of truth.
John
John
15th Oct 2022 8:58pm
Hi John,
So happy you enjoyed this. You hit all of the high points in this comment. Everything I was trying to convey you totally got. LOL
So thank you for that.
Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting:)
And the RL!!!
So happy you enjoyed this. You hit all of the high points in this comment. Everything I was trying to convey you totally got. LOL
So thank you for that.
Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting:)
And the RL!!!
