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~*Breathe*~
are you feeling lost?
like the world has turned its back on you?
seems there’s nowhere to run
but if you look into your heart
open it to those that care
maybe they can bring you home
and if they can’t
just know there's others like you
we can all journey together
found lies in the voices of angels
got robbed by saints
told my darkest secrets to my dearest friends
only to have those same words held against me
you will be hurt countless times
but please don’t let your trust be broken
find strength to endure
and know you are beautiful
is it hard to get up some days?
in a fetal state from being bullied?
some moments seem longer than others
don’t harbor, try to clear your mind
show love to those that are still there
pushing away is never the answer
found truth in the way people deceive
sincere in how they exploit
it hurts too much to think
people can be so evil
no need to add to the injury
put down the knife and away from the flesh
if you need go into your room and cry, do so!
but when you’re done
look into that mirror
take a deep breath
and tell yourself this…
you are beautiful
like the world has turned its back on you?
seems there’s nowhere to run
but if you look into your heart
open it to those that care
maybe they can bring you home
and if they can’t
just know there's others like you
we can all journey together
found lies in the voices of angels
got robbed by saints
told my darkest secrets to my dearest friends
only to have those same words held against me
you will be hurt countless times
but please don’t let your trust be broken
find strength to endure
and know you are beautiful
is it hard to get up some days?
in a fetal state from being bullied?
some moments seem longer than others
don’t harbor, try to clear your mind
show love to those that are still there
pushing away is never the answer
found truth in the way people deceive
sincere in how they exploit
it hurts too much to think
people can be so evil
no need to add to the injury
put down the knife and away from the flesh
if you need go into your room and cry, do so!
but when you’re done
look into that mirror
take a deep breath
and tell yourself this…
you are beautiful
Published 11th Sep 2022
Author's Note
An older poem I wanted to update.
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11th Sep 2022 10:06am
I needed this.... Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful motivational piece 🌹🌹🌹
12th Sep 2022 7:23am
I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, friend 😁 it's very much appreciated.
Hope you have a nice day today.
Hope you have a nice day today.
11th Sep 2022 11:10am
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11th Sep 2022 1:05pm
Preach it my dear poetess! Depression is a bitch! Been there done that, got the shirt to prove it. Lol. Loved the piece. Great job! 💜💜
12th Sep 2022 7:30am
Depression is very difficult to deal with. Sometimes we need to do whatever we can to get out of that hole.
Thank you for the comment. It is very much appreciated 😁
Thank you for the comment. It is very much appreciated 😁
I am so so glad you dug this out to rework it, DC... because this is beyond effective at empathy... This is like you've accessed inside my head and are gleaming bits and pieces of my truth.
I love the feel of it, almost like it's an advertisement for those who are down trodden, overlooked and pushed around. Those who understand the pain, horror and hurt that goes along with being treated less than... by anyone for any reason. Making someone feel small just so that they can feel bigger, in whatever form or fashion that might take shape.
I read this yesterday but it stuck with me and I've came back to read it a few more times today. You sear your points and message home without question and I adore that to pieces.
The ending is everything.... and powerful in it's always reminder.
I just love every part of this and I deeply thank you for reimagining or revamping it so it could live and renew hope once again...
Well done, my friend.... well done.
🌹 💙
B
I love the feel of it, almost like it's an advertisement for those who are down trodden, overlooked and pushed around. Those who understand the pain, horror and hurt that goes along with being treated less than... by anyone for any reason. Making someone feel small just so that they can feel bigger, in whatever form or fashion that might take shape.
I read this yesterday but it stuck with me and I've came back to read it a few more times today. You sear your points and message home without question and I adore that to pieces.
The ending is everything.... and powerful in it's always reminder.
I just love every part of this and I deeply thank you for reimagining or revamping it so it could live and renew hope once again...
Well done, my friend.... well done.
🌹 💙
B
12th Sep 2022 7:37am
I wrote the original at a very difficult time of my life. Me and someone I care for were going through a lot of depression. And really one that could of took both our lives. I wrote a number of poems at the time in away to try and get me out of that slump. Also rewriting it i remembered those that I have lost to suicide and drugs. It's a nice reminder to myself as well to keep fighting.
It is always a joy to see you my friend 😁
Hope you have a great day.
It is always a joy to see you my friend 😁
Hope you have a great day.
