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Tension

You stood there
Close enough to kiss me
Yet the question loomed
Should we?

Written by Simon_III_Msibi

(Mandla Msibi)

Published 9th Sep 2022

#crush #love

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Re. Tension

16th Oct 2022 8:53pm

Hoi hoi hope this finds you well!

A very kind and gentle rendering of this subject!
Thank you for sharing!!
Kind regards, Gus

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5th Nov 2022 7:49pm

Honestly forgot I wrote this. Thank you for commenting hence reminding me

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