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Your words
You had me feeling all special
Your words melt my heart
You had me on a natural high
It was beautiful from the start
But now I realize it was all just a game
I was something new to amuse, to see if you can set a fuse, with your words of passion
How could I be so damn gullible?
I should've been more skeptical or at least more practical. What the hell was I thinking?
Haha jokes on me :-/
Your words use to make me smile
Now I feel like I'm walking the green mile
The words that made me feel special, I've learned you've said a thousand times
My ego somewhat crush but don't worry "I'll keep this on the hush" just one question......I'm one of how many?!
Your words melt my heart
You had me on a natural high
It was beautiful from the start
But now I realize it was all just a game
I was something new to amuse, to see if you can set a fuse, with your words of passion
How could I be so damn gullible?
I should've been more skeptical or at least more practical. What the hell was I thinking?
Haha jokes on me :-/
Your words use to make me smile
Now I feel like I'm walking the green mile
The words that made me feel special, I've learned you've said a thousand times
My ego somewhat crush but don't worry "I'll keep this on the hush" just one question......I'm one of how many?!
Published 27th Mar 2012
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27th Mar 2012 4:42am
you shouldnt worry about what another lost
the sweet voice & eyes so soft
curves so sleek as sexiness overflows
& a smile that reflects how Heaven Glows
& you will never be 1 of many at least not in my mind
not even 1 in a million because you are 1 in a lifetime....;)
the sweet voice & eyes so soft
curves so sleek as sexiness overflows
& a smile that reflects how Heaven Glows
& you will never be 1 of many at least not in my mind
not even 1 in a million because you are 1 in a lifetime....;)
27th Mar 2012 11:48am
......................that is a very mean spirited portrayal of someone! Some people can convey a very favorable facade but that passes quickly. It is sad that they so quickly loose a good thing.
A very good write indeed. The paradox however is that everything *still* may not appear as it seems.
A very good write indeed. The paradox however is that everything *still* may not appear as it seems.
Anonymous
27th Mar 2012 1:30pm
Dear Lady C
That was a charming and well written poem about how men trick women with their lines.....
I love the line below
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My ego somewhat crush but don't worry "I'll keep this on the hush" just one question......I'm one of how many?!
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You do not have to get married to find out a man has been cheating on you
Write on!
Kitty
That was a charming and well written poem about how men trick women with their lines.....
I love the line below
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My ego somewhat crush but don't worry "I'll keep this on the hush" just one question......I'm one of how many?!
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You do not have to get married to find out a man has been cheating on you
Write on!
Kitty
27th Mar 2012 4:33pm
29th Mar 2012 00:28am
Come on Lady C. Why worry about just one, when you have so many!!!! You are so beautiful, I am sure you have the pick of the site. :) Pick the ones that are worthy of you, cause you are top class my friend.
29th Mar 2012 1:57am
