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Torn Flesh
Studied my painting
Top layer of flesh removed
It's pretty sky blue
Broken by jagged orange
The way life is
Positively jarring
Still pleasant a moment later
We sat outside at the cafe
In the passing summer sun
Enough humidity
Half spoken humility
We'll always find our way
The poets say so
I'm healing in your presence
Even with your shades on
Held in your stare
Notations in a notebook
Back at the Chamber
Conditional
Some flesh to repair
Top layer of flesh removed
It's pretty sky blue
Broken by jagged orange
The way life is
Positively jarring
Still pleasant a moment later
We sat outside at the cafe
In the passing summer sun
Enough humidity
Half spoken humility
We'll always find our way
The poets say so
I'm healing in your presence
Even with your shades on
Held in your stare
Notations in a notebook
Back at the Chamber
Conditional
Some flesh to repair
Written by
PoetSpeak
Published 31st Aug 2022
Author's Note
Late summer thoughts
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak with X44C Technology
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak with X44C Technology
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Re. Torn Flesh
31st Aug 2022 10:06pm
Pretty sky blue... with a tiger hidden beneath. There are always repairs to be done in life. You're right, we find our way eventually.
I love how different the layers of your paintings are. It's cool to witness the process.
❤️❤️k
I love how different the layers of your paintings are. It's cool to witness the process.
❤️❤️k
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
31st Aug 2022 10:22pm
Everyday we are attacking problems, I am anyway. Fixing stuff, my job is like that in part. Every time I look at this painting it looks like a top layer was removed. I wrote this around that !!
Always appreciate your love for the painting process.
Glad you get inside them
BIG THANKS
💞
Always appreciate your love for the painting process.
Glad you get inside them
BIG THANKS
💞
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
31st Aug 2022 10:38pm
You will understand this Ted
You do a painting you keep looking at it and it's as if it's talking to you.
That's what happened here.
I knew there was a poem needing to be written..
Thanks T
You do a painting you keep looking at it and it's as if it's talking to you.
That's what happened here.
I knew there was a poem needing to be written..
Thanks T
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31st Aug 2022 10:57pm
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
31st Aug 2022 11:20pm
It’s like a poem that writes itself Ted.
Same theory
Extraordinary when it occurs, yes
Same theory
Extraordinary when it occurs, yes
Re. Torn Flesh
31st Aug 2022 11:16pm
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31st Aug 2022 11:22pm
Thank you so much fellow poetess and artist, I’m glad it’s pleased you !!
X
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X
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Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 2:27am
Loved this evolution with your painting - and your inner mind set.
Healing in her presence even with her shades on. Love Love Love that line.
I feel we would get along!!!
Always communicate and you will find a way:)
Healing in her presence even with her shades on. Love Love Love that line.
I feel we would get along!!!
Always communicate and you will find a way:)
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 2:40am
Wow, what a great comment A !!
I think so too
We'd get along
Art, literary, booze, hot sauce
This poem is pretty esoteric
Thought I needed to get surreal
Thx darling
X
I think so too
We'd get along
Art, literary, booze, hot sauce
This poem is pretty esoteric
Thought I needed to get surreal
Thx darling
X
Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 2:53am
Love this. Summers going by way too fast for us here....this was actually totally brilliant. Top notch, PS. love you. <3
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1st Sep 2022 2:55am
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1st Sep 2022 3:08am
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1st Sep 2022 3:30am
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Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 5:20am
Dear PS,
To me, I really liked the similarities of paint and relationships and how delicate they both can be but sturdy when dried and tested. Both have the power to heal once the layers are peeled off and truth exposed. I love the colors on this one. Bold and inviting. Excellent write. H🌷
To me, I really liked the similarities of paint and relationships and how delicate they both can be but sturdy when dried and tested. Both have the power to heal once the layers are peeled off and truth exposed. I love the colors on this one. Bold and inviting. Excellent write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 11:56am
Dear H,
I agree with you. This is a fascinating painting as I literally removed the top layer through a digital process even though it was actually created with real paint. I like that aspect of digital technology but still believe in real painting with actual paint. The colors lice side by to each other. Each trying to coincide with harmony.
I'm glad you like this one !!!
Thanks
PS
X
I agree with you. This is a fascinating painting as I literally removed the top layer through a digital process even though it was actually created with real paint. I like that aspect of digital technology but still believe in real painting with actual paint. The colors lice side by to each other. Each trying to coincide with harmony.
I'm glad you like this one !!!
Thanks
PS
X
Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 4:37pm
I feel I'm looking into a psychadelic forest. you words are beautiful also.
Regards
Regards
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 4:55pm
Hi James,
Yes could be psychedelic, I remember those days.
Appreciate the praise on art and poem. RL seals the deal.
Thanks !!
Yes could be psychedelic, I remember those days.
Appreciate the praise on art and poem. RL seals the deal.
Thanks !!
Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 4:59pm
For a moment I was living inside this poem, to change my reality with a poem is some f*cking amazing art.
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Re: Re. Torn Flesh
1st Sep 2022 5:09pm
This painting haunted me.
It's story needed to be told.
You did it well APPS
I could see you living within the barriers and visiting the Chamber with an unnamed guest.
Many thanks for your praise and RL !!
It's story needed to be told.
You did it well APPS
I could see you living within the barriers and visiting the Chamber with an unnamed guest.
Many thanks for your praise and RL !!