Number Compulsion, Obtuse Desires, Humidity, Abstracted

The number of times I said, "damn." Hot, exquisite write.

I edited this one about 15 times.  Finally got it right I think.
Rarely do that so your comment means A Lot.  
Always appreciate that you appreciate the finer things in life ...

Thanks Her !!

You definitely got it right!
Damn, I was there 29 times? No wonder I'm so tired...

Get out the bourbon and let's crash this party again

Mucho thanks 👿

Oooh-whee! That was hot. Great art too.

You know Pink

Love your comment !

good evening dearest Poet
I'm enjoying the night
how are you?

interesting sex write very dominating
got to love it ❤️

Good evening Brenda
Women need control
Whether they acknowledge it or not
That's where I come in ...

Thanks 💥

Hi PS:)

Lots going on in this poem.  
Love how you came up with this line.

Paintings created in aura and calculated embraces

All starts with an embrace then you brought the heat. Just kept
kept building layers. Just like that painting.  

Good morning Adelphina,

I write about BDSM a lot

There's a reason for that...

YES, this is a layering poem with a lot of moving parts

Glad you got into it, I did a lot of work on the formatting.
Almost like piece of graphic art in that sense.

Appreciate your comments always !!

Thanks 💥

Hahahaha
Fixed my typo!!!  ughhh
I should not comment at night:)

I was wondering what my lie was ?
I'm a lot of things but no lies ....
None today anyway .....

Thx for the correction 😶🤠💥

This was a labor of love Sms
Took my time with it.  Edit after edit.
The painting started one way and then became about the numbers.  A BIG part of the story as well.

Thank you for your praise Brother.
Means a lot to me ✅

Love the art. Don't know what to say otherwise. I live for intensity but don't like pain....

One out Two isn't bad.  Could have disliked both.
Sexual pain is  different.  There's rewards usually ..

Stay tuned

Thx BT

I didn't say I disliked it. 😉
Yes, rewards are good.

I always stay tuned...
❤️k

Ok
Approved for rewards 😁

Geez, this is so about me. lol
Damn OCD and all these strange desires. :p
Seeing myself in it so damn much. :p
My whole eco-system is humid all the time.
I need the A/C to help contain the heat and humidity.
Blasting 24 hours a day, and I love that hum too.
Perhaps it drowns out the screams, (no it doesn't)
Twisting, gyrating, damp - that about sums it up.
Always wanting more...

No doubt
All about you
Everything is about you
Isn't that why I'm on retainer??
You're biography is coming along fine
Working Title: She screamed so much, I just crank the AC higher
Hit the jackpot when you hired me.
Love my bonus

'All about you' I knew it. :p
'Everything' oh wow...
Biography, that's scary to think about...
Love the title, do it...

I'm up to the epilog
Ripped black panties for days
Photo booths where they print the black and white grainy sex pix
You're gonna love it
Best Seller for sure !!!!

Broken, blitz, or drunk, you never quit.  Keep on writing.

Quitting is not in my realm…..
Onward I go

That makes me happy Ted
Numbers and art are a fascinating mix

Thank you for your comment !

Caffeine, air conditioning, rope.
Enjoy the art very much!
The ingredients here are visceral and that's what I enjoy:
humidity, the flush and inflammation of too much caffeine, the way mental obsessions and abstraction dovetail with sexual obsession.
Love the comment about the editing above--wow!
Francis Bacon used to say of his canvases that he wanted the sense that *something*--a physical presence, say--had passed *through* the canvas, leaving trace of itself behind, like a snail.
A powerful sense of a trace of something here!
And love the comment above, about control--yes, women need control.
Enjoyed!
And LIKED!

That ladies and gentlemen is what a PARSONS AWARD looks like !!
I had a lot buzzing around in my head and decided to put it together in one BIG pot of gumbo.  Also have a thing about numbers.  I was terrible in math as a kid and teenager and then my whole professional career was about numbers, percentages and margins.
Still is actually.  So why not incorporate them into my art.
People relate to number and symbol art.  I'm a messenger.
Caffeine is a great drug.  I love elevation.  I love women.
I love control.  Sometimes i get all, sometimes busted flat and full of shit or so I've been told.

Really appreciate this comment Mark

Stay tuned brother...

The numbers are very mysterious. I see all kinds of industrial things when I look at this piece.

That's a cool read James.  I was definitely trying for that vibe.
A lot of my paintings lean into an industrial feel.  I'm glad it felt that way to you.

Thanks for the comment and RL

I appreciate the read and comment Ted
Now I can move on with more art and poems  
If the poem sucked I wouldn't have asked for help but I think it's a good one !!

Thank you !!

I've been here since 2013.  
I've seen it all
My poems do well, I mix it up a lot.
Now I'm going to edit and ask for 40 comments.
I'm a whore
As my sales manager says, "write the order"  

Dear PS,

Ah! There is a yin/yang to everything isn’t there? Ex: pleasure within the pain. The numbers in the painting are interesting. Do they represent anything particular for you? 😊
H🌷

Dear H,

The numbers act more as symbols for me.  Just like the way they look on top of paint.  Sometimes I use X's too.
Yes pleasure from pain.  It's exquisite from a bdsm landscape.  

Thank you for reading and commenting H.
I'll work on your painting and dedicate it to you.  
You're awesome ....

Thx
❤

Well, since you asked so nice, I'm back to comment again, on a day when my mind is a little clearer than my last read.

Singing is everywhere... glad you heard it in your AC unit. Keep listening. And suffering... well, it's everywhere too, but it's a portal...

Does my comment count if I already commented before? 😆 You comment slut. Geez.
❤️k

It's new thoughts so YES, IT COUNTS
Suffering is a part of life, especially sex suffering.
Always a way to find someone who's suffering and into it.
I help them
Frigging happy meal
Everybody wins

Thx k
You rule Red
❤🖤❤

I'm commenting on one of your replies to a comment: " Women need control" politically incorrect maybe, but swoon-worthy for some of us- like me. I

I'm behind in commenting on your poems and art but you know I'm a big fan of both. I will catch up soon.

Figured I would catch some heat on that philosophy but didn't really materialize.  It's a bdsm poem after all.  Or nobody wanted to debate it.  Nonetheless a swoon always makes me ecstatic.   I'm always thrilled when you visit Wendy.  We think on the same plane.
I love that ......

Thx so much on the praise on words and art 🎨

Stay tuned

Just read the poem a third time. Love the obsessive, high-octane, caffeinated , magical urgency. That's where true BDSM lives and you captured it.

Third time is always the charm right ??
Btw thanks for getting me to comment #40 and 41.
I believe in amped up caffeine rushes and bdsm escapades..
That I captured true bdsm from you is a thrill, wow blown away by your comment.

Thank you

🫂❤🚻💥💥

"You'll suffer but want more
Always more
We've been here before" I like the delivery in these lines because it's like an addiction, knowing all too well it's not only physically but mentally satisfying as well.
BIG LIKE

My whole alternative life is in this poem.
All the secret desires and some steamy liaison memories.
Packaged tightly like rope ...

Thanks for the great comment Wally