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Can I...
Can I hold your hand
By the candlelight,
And love you darling
With all my might?
~*~
Can I give you all my attention,
And show you that
You're the only one
Who I share all of my affection?
~*~
Can I hold you forever
In my heart,
And dream of you
Whenever we're apart?
~*~
Can I give you a loving massage
From head to toe,
And leave sweet little nibbles
Wherever I go?
~*~
Can I hold you in my arms,
And feel the magic
Of your charms?
~*~
Can I look into your eyes,
And behold every beauty
Inside?
~*~
Can I make love to your mind,
And caress you in deepest places
That no man can find?
~*~
Can I tease every hot spot
Until you’re wet,
And do the sweet things that
You'll never forget?
~*~
Can I fulfill all your wishes,
And cover your whole sexy body
With loving kisses?
~*~
Can I nibble around each ear,
And make all your worries
Disappear?
~*~
Can I kiss your beautiful lips
While I explore your body slowly
With my soft fingertips?
~*~
Can I caress your neck
With my lips and tongue,
And tease your hot spot
While the night is young?
~*~
Can I touch your lovely clit,
And love it with every suck
And lick
Just the way you like it?
~*~
Can I do the hottest things
That makes you scream,
Till your body quench my thirst
With sweet gush of cream?
~*~
Can I slide inside your yoni so tight,
And make sweet love to you
All through the night?
~*~
Can I hit your G-spot
Over and over again,
Until your pretty yoni squirt
Like a fountain?
~*~
Can I partake your nipples
With every suck and lick,
While you grip and ride
My magic stick?
~*~
Can I take you to ecstasy
And make your every fantasy come true?
Tell me what you like darling,
For there’s nothing I would not do
When I’m loving you.
By the candlelight,
And love you darling
With all my might?
~*~
Can I give you all my attention,
And show you that
You're the only one
Who I share all of my affection?
~*~
Can I hold you forever
In my heart,
And dream of you
Whenever we're apart?
~*~
Can I give you a loving massage
From head to toe,
And leave sweet little nibbles
Wherever I go?
~*~
Can I hold you in my arms,
And feel the magic
Of your charms?
~*~
Can I look into your eyes,
And behold every beauty
Inside?
~*~
Can I make love to your mind,
And caress you in deepest places
That no man can find?
~*~
Can I tease every hot spot
Until you’re wet,
And do the sweet things that
You'll never forget?
~*~
Can I fulfill all your wishes,
And cover your whole sexy body
With loving kisses?
~*~
Can I nibble around each ear,
And make all your worries
Disappear?
~*~
Can I kiss your beautiful lips
While I explore your body slowly
With my soft fingertips?
~*~
Can I caress your neck
With my lips and tongue,
And tease your hot spot
While the night is young?
~*~
Can I touch your lovely clit,
And love it with every suck
And lick
Just the way you like it?
~*~
Can I do the hottest things
That makes you scream,
Till your body quench my thirst
With sweet gush of cream?
~*~
Can I slide inside your yoni so tight,
And make sweet love to you
All through the night?
~*~
Can I hit your G-spot
Over and over again,
Until your pretty yoni squirt
Like a fountain?
~*~
Can I partake your nipples
With every suck and lick,
While you grip and ride
My magic stick?
~*~
Can I take you to ecstasy
And make your every fantasy come true?
Tell me what you like darling,
For there’s nothing I would not do
When I’m loving you.
Published 2nd Aug 2022
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2nd Aug 2022 7:53pm
Deeply romantic, sensual and seductive. When a lover wants to make your dreams come true what could possibly be more beautiful? Very erotic in a way that allows the mind to immerse in the lovely passionate imagery. When two people both feel this way about each other, what an intense pleasure it is coming together... Really loved this MV.
Some of my favorite lines;
Can I do the hottest things
That makes you scream,
Till your body quench my thirst
With sweet gush of cream?
Some of my favorite lines;
Can I do the hottest things
That makes you scream,
Till your body quench my thirst
With sweet gush of cream?
2nd Aug 2022 11:48pm
Aww thank you so much for the wonderful feedback KristinaX! Romantic and spicy is my kinda style hehe... It's one way to keep the moment special :)
7th Aug 2022 1:08am
Really loved the flow and rhyme. It was deeply sensual and romantically erotic.
I’m guessing the answer to most of those questions was a resounding yes.
Truly enjoyed the read.
~NE~
I’m guessing the answer to most of those questions was a resounding yes.
Truly enjoyed the read.
~NE~
Aww thank you notenough for your wonderful feedback... I appreciate your thoughts
7th Aug 2022 3:08am
Hello Magic, So, I am usually repulsed by personal erotica in that for me it feels awkward and clumsy more often than not. It takes talent to script evocative erotica on paper.For me this is neither clumsy or awkward. Thanks for sharing
Jackie 🤗♥️
Jackie 🤗♥️
7th Aug 2022 3:22am
Aww thank you Zazzles so much for your wonderful feedback... I really appreciate your kind thoughts. I hope you have a wonderful weekend... stay safe <3
19th Mar 2023 6:34pm
This is so delicious! I love how you laid out each stanza in such a complete and meticulous way… such a thorough love was on display.
22nd Mar 2023 6:50pm
Heyyy Athena *hugs* wow so great to see you here! Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback <33
23rd Mar 2023 3:30am
Great to be reading you again! I’ll be adding a few pieces soon. ❤️
23rd Mar 2023 5:19am
26th Apr 2023 1:37am
Yes, yEs, yeS, YES! (No disrespect intended) just my reaction to this amazing piece of art! Majestic! Bravo!!!!
