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Senryu
Love
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Love
If love were rain drops
I would give you the ocean
And never run dry
Written by
MagicVisionz
Published
3rd Jun 2022
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#happiness
#love
#relationships
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Re. Love
Bluevelvete
- Edited 3rd Jun 2022 5:04pm
3rd Jun 2022 5:03pm
Extraordinarily lovely.
🌹 - B
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Re: Re. Love
MagicVisionz
3rd Jun 2022 6:51pm
Thank you Bluevelvet for the sweet feedback *hugs* :)
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Re. Love
Honoria
4th Jun 2022 3:31am
Dear MV,
Ditto Blue. This is a lovely write and a much needed lift. Well done. H🌷
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MagicVisionz
4th Jun 2022 5:20am
Thank you so much Honoria for the wonderful feedback *hugs* I hope all is well and safe :)
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AspergerPoet56
4th Jun 2022 3:49pm
this is one i would have loved to have written
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MagicVisionz
4th Jun 2022 5:20pm
Thank you AspergerPoet. Senryu and Haiku are one of my fav and fun challenges to write. I hope you have a wonderful weekend... thank you again :)
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Re. Love
Wafflenose
(Ellie)
1st Aug 2022 11:58pm
Aww, that's beautiful, without tipping into sentimentality!
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Re: Re. Love
MagicVisionz
2nd Aug 2022 1:09am
Thank you Ellie so much... i hope you have a wonderful and safe week <3
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