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Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)

Author's Note
Inspired by Billy Ocean - Caribbean Queen (No More Love on the Run)
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Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
Powerfully hot romantic piece, took me to the poetic island paradise. Wild tropical islands can appeal to the primal instincts. Favourite stanza:
"My back arched to his promises to please me...mmm...as he eased in."
Can imagine that Billy Ocean song inspiring your poem, when I think of its lyrics. Adapting them somewhat, 'No more love on the run - there it HAS to be done".
Coincidentally last night was the concluding series of a reality TV dating show called Love Island (a Mediterranean rather than tropical one) so your poem had a topical ring.
Beautiful piece by a beautiful writer, could not help but RL it.
"My back arched to his promises to please me...mmm...as he eased in."
Can imagine that Billy Ocean song inspiring your poem, when I think of its lyrics. Adapting them somewhat, 'No more love on the run - there it HAS to be done".
Coincidentally last night was the concluding series of a reality TV dating show called Love Island (a Mediterranean rather than tropical one) so your poem had a topical ring.
Beautiful piece by a beautiful writer, could not help but RL it.
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4th Aug 2022 2:41am
Thank you tremendously my wise poet for braving the poetic elements and giving my musing a gentle reading
Please have a safe and joyous Thursday in the UK and may you be productive in all you do
Please have a safe and joyous Thursday in the UK and may you be productive in all you do
Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
2nd Aug 2022 6:30am
You're a hot a sexy Caribbean Queen. Keep on writing my Caribbean Queen.
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4th Aug 2022 3:01am
I love, love, love your comment and the worthy praise, thank you and in as much for reading and then taking the time to inscribe an embracing sentiment.
Enjoy your early evening and have a magnificent Thursday
Enjoy your early evening and have a magnificent Thursday
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4th Aug 2022 4:09am
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2nd Aug 2022 6:49am
Re: Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
4th Aug 2022 2:56am
Thank you for such a flattery comment and accolade, my friend, it is always much appreciated.
In addition, thank you for extending your eyes to read my musings.
Have a super-duper Thursday, make sure you smile and make yourself happy and other who may come on your path.
In addition, thank you for extending your eyes to read my musings.
Have a super-duper Thursday, make sure you smile and make yourself happy and other who may come on your path.
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4th Aug 2022 1:55pm
Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2022 5:25am
This is divinely exquisite. Much respect

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Re: Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
4th Aug 2022 3:10am
Ahh... you truly have embraced me in a mental rush of softness with that beguiling comment, thank you, truly and I bow to you, my King in humbly respect for reading.
I am budding you a safe a wonderful evening and may the rewards of life carry you in granting all.
I am budding you a safe a wonderful evening and may the rewards of life carry you in granting all.
Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
4th Aug 2022 4:48am
I want to drink some rum while reading this a second time! So sensual and tastefully done. I like filling in the innuendos however they come to me, when I read others material. The building around the obvious is the bait. It makes the reader use their own thoughts along with yours that are written.
Wonderfully written, m'lady
Wonderfully written, m'lady
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Re: Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
6th Aug 2022 1:01pm
Ahh... what a beautiful comment to take to heart, my poet, and thank you for such, in as much for reading as well.
Whatever embracing innuendos that you fill in, may the illusion bring you pleasure in the wake of its enticing comforts.
Please enjoy your weekend and take in the beauty of its wonderous glory.
Whatever embracing innuendos that you fill in, may the illusion bring you pleasure in the wake of its enticing comforts.
Please enjoy your weekend and take in the beauty of its wonderous glory.
Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
Anonymous
4th Aug 2022 5:22am
Had to come back and respond to your author's note.
Caribbean Queen was one of my favorite songs growing up .
Thx for the highlight
Caribbean Queen was one of my favorite songs growing up .
Thx for the highlight

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6th Aug 2022 1:03pm
Re. Tropical Island Queen (Caribbean Queen)
4th Aug 2022 2:44pm
Such sweet additions to the Billy Ocean song. Seems a call to Fantasy Island where such good things happen.
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6th Aug 2022 1:28pm
You have me blushing, my tender poet.. You do know I have watched Fantasy Island reruns, and for you to mention that in your alluring comment leaves me smiling, and then to capitalize with words leaves me breathless.
You seem to surprise me at times in the splendor of the moment, and that is the most treasured reward sought by any poetess.
Thank you for taking the time to marvel in my poetic words...
I am wishing you nothing but a prosperous weekend and be safe in your journey🎀
You seem to surprise me at times in the splendor of the moment, and that is the most treasured reward sought by any poetess.
Thank you for taking the time to marvel in my poetic words...
I am wishing you nothing but a prosperous weekend and be safe in your journey🎀